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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
^^ Thank you for the suggestion Marisha, have amended the title now 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
jus read part 1 its totally awesum. loving the fact dat they are all bullies. cant wait for ridz entrance ders definately gonna be fireworks between the two gangs. plzz make ridz character live up 2 the expectations of being the leader of the underground gang n not sum1 whoz al talk but not playing the part. plzzz do continue soon
luv iram
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

OMG ! Tht was an amazing partt 😃

Its sucha different story !
I can totally imagine Armaan being a bully 😆
Loved the way yu described their gang
Cnt w8 fer Ridhima's entry ,
and her face-to-face with Armi ..😳
"Saliva infested flower" cracked me up ! 😆
Continue soon ,
Cnt w8 fer yur nxt chapter .. 😃
& Plz pm me nxt time yu update
Lov Payal ..x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

wow suzie it was fantabulous.............gr8 ff

really unique concept.................i wanna read more pls continue soon.............and yeah pls do pm me pls pls.

chandni

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
gr8 going suzie, u've come up wiith a totally dif. concept with both armaan and ridz as gang leaders👏. but hmm.....there seems to some confusion with ridz's actual motives which only makes things more interesting😉. can't wait for the nxt part and plz do pm me when u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Woaaaaahhhhh!!another Great writer in the making…Fanfic forums is blessed wid great writers wid soo much talent jus like u….keep tis up sweet pea (hpe can call u that)..

Well cumin to tis FF..U've got me hooked..rilli nowadays their r soo many Great fic writers emerging wd all diff concepts…n I tink I loved u'r concept the most…It's totally diff yaar…n v very interesting…I felt as if I shud keep on reading n reading n tis Fic neva ends…that wud hav been G88888…..

Well these kinds of FF's r a treat to avid readers like me…hehe..

U'r title..fists n lipstick…god I saw tis n rushed to hav a look at the fic…it sooo diff….I mean ur title n sooo very catchy..Loved it….Ur concept is totally diff n em in love wid it…rilli..too good..can imagine each n every tin takin place in front of mah eyes…It was a treat for mah mind for imagining it….Loved doin so….

U'r FF is amzin…awesum…fantastic…simply brilliant…fab…very very interesting….jusG8888…sassy…….n u'll sn leave me speechless yaar..U've done a g88888 job n em already a fan of tis FF…Hats off to u gal…..I hope n wish n know that tis FF's gonna be a hit…rilli…I wish….i hope….i know…n em damn sure…

Whateva it may be…buh em totally blown off…

Do add me to u'r buddy list as em already hooked up to tis FF…or shud say fallen for it….Plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz cont asap…em dying to read more…

Do PM me wheneva u update nxt…(if possible)..plzz doo..

Cont asap…em already wantin u to start writin n jus post prts by prts each day..I know em demandin much askin u to update daily..ehn I neva update my ownon time buh stillll Plzzzzzz update asap…..

Love ya sweetpea….t.ccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: rani 19

jus read part 1 its totally awesum. loving the fact dat they are all bullies. cant wait for ridz entrance ders definately gonna be fireworks between the two gangs. plzz make ridz character live up 2 the expectations of being the leader of the underground gang n not sum1 whoz al talk but not playing the part. plzzz do continue soon

luv iram

Iram will definately try my best not to fail your expectations... and dont worry Ridz will definately not be all talk, theres more shades to we all 1st think 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: xentrik_me

OMG ! Tht was an amazing partt 😃

Its sucha different story !
I can totally imagine Armaan being a bully 😆
Loved the way yu described their gang
Cnt w8 fer Ridhima's entry ,
and her face-to-face with Armi ..😳
"Saliva infested flower" cracked me up ! 😆
Continue soon ,
Cnt w8 fer yur nxt chapter .. 😃
& Plz pm me nxt time yu update
Lov Payal ..x

Thank you for the comments Payal, you liked the salive infested flower part too? 😆😆 I guess it is a bit mad with girls falling over themselves like Azeez is some mega movie star instead of just a high school gang member lol.
Next part will be up shortly and you PM will be sent shortly too 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: armaanridz

wow suzie it was fantabulous.............gr8 ff

really unique concept.................i wanna read more pls continue soon.............and yeah pls do pm me pls pls.

chandni

Thank you for your comments Chandni, lol you want to read more hehe... just a warning this FF is going to be very looong... you sure you still want to read? 😳
~suzie~ thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

gr8 going suzie, u've come up wiith a totally dif. concept with both armaan and ridz as gang leaders👏. but hmm.....there seems to some confusion with ridz's actual motives which only makes things more interesting😉. can't wait for the nxt part and plz do pm me when u update

What is her motive? lol good question.. still working on that one 😉 Thank you for your comments sweety, they are very much appreciated. Please fell free to criticise whenever you want, it'll help me with my writing 😳

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