RM in pain-AR n AA in strain(2nd part updated)

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RM in pain-AR n AA in strain
Sanjeevani , India
?s , the most famous hospital n has the most successful and best doctors.Along with being doctors they r also just like any other normal person who experience different emotions in life but this story just brings up there relation with a very beautiful emotion of life which is love.So in Sanjeevani we have some very interesting Jr.doctors who have completed there internship just a year ago n are now practising.These Jr.doctors i'm speaking abt have been friends right from the day1 of there internship.They every day along with there tight schedules of practise also have lots of fun bluffing there seniors,having nice chats in the canteen during break n making huge plans for there weekends.But at the same time they never give excuses when they have to attend some emergencies during the weekends.So the thing i want to emphasise is that though they r young n want to enjoy there life to the max but they never fail to attend there duty,which is the must quality the docs must have.So lots of introduction with little bashan is done so i hope u enjoy this FF n plzzzzz leave ur comments.They r always welcomed be it -ve or +ve.

Part 1

Inside the hospital :

A girl wearing a violet coloured dress is running trying to wear her lab coat.

" run Riddhima run if you want to save your job, plz god help me from that Hitler, plz let she be late for atleast today, plz god plz." Running desperately she reached a cabin with the name plate on it Dr.Keerthi . Breathing heavily she prepared herself to enter the cabin. As she entered the cabin she saw Dr.Keerthi sitting in her chair busy looking at some file. Though she noticed riddhima coming in she didn?t say anything but stayed silent. "ugh, this is her usual style of torturing, stay silent till the other person say something n then pounce on them" thinking so riddhima went a little bit towards her n bit hesitantly said " you wanted to see me mam. Sorry I am a bit late" keerthi raised her eyebrows.seeing this riddhima " sorry I was late bcz of the traffic mam". Keerthi looked at her watch n said "Dr.Riddhima, plz can you tell me which road will be busy at 6 in the morning." Riddhima bit her lower lip " ohho" as she rememebered how she was asleep at 6 when she called and how she slept still 6:30 and got ready hastily by 6:45."this sleep always comes at the wrong time, thank god my house was nearby otherwise i would be gone by now"," I called you at 6 as I needed someone to assist me in Mr.Deshpande?s case n now it is 7?O clock. If it wasn?t for your fine work as a doctor I would have suspended you. ( handing over the file) now study the case n report me at 8?O clock as the operation would start at 8:15. now you can leave." Saying so keerthi turned her back to riddhima.

Riddhima came out of the room and let a deep breath

" thank god!"

She made her way to the canteen. On reaching the canteen she ordered for her favourite hot chocolate with extra cream on it and seated herself in her favourite place ,a cosy corner in the corner where no one could disturb, with her back to the open canteen n started reading the file.

" Hello, Riddhima". Riddhima jumped as someone shouted it in her ears. " Rahul, how many times have I told you not to do like this. You kicked me out of my skin."" ya, riddhima I know but when do you listen to me straight away, I have been calling you for the last five minutes but you were so busy in the file so I thought this was the best way." He said making a puppy face. " oh! Sorry"" where are the others?" . " they are coming, so how is that you are here now."" well Dr.Keerthi called me as she needed someone to assist her in Mr.Deshpande?s case. As you all had your night duties she called me."" oh!"

"

hey, riddhima what are you doing here now."

"

hey, atul"" hi,muskaan" . She hugged them." well i had to come as Dr.Hitler called to assist in Mr.Deshpande's case,anyhow leave it. how was your night(with twinkling eyes having some mischief in them) nice." "ha nice, with that hitler ready to cane.i seriously need some sleep right now. i am leaving." muskaan said with tiredness in her face and got up to leave."i will leave you on my way"rahul presented himself.muskaan looked at him with a smiling face and seemingly lost in him while rahul was already lost in her.Riddhima and Atul smiled at them and made a wholfing sound"oooooooooooh!" muskaan and rahul got out of their trance and got visibly embarrassed. muskaan hurriedly turned away to hide her blushing face while rahul looked everywhere but not at them . riddhima and atul laughed looking at their behaviour. " really you guys are too much. you have been in love from one year and still you look at each other as it is the first time and seem so lost in each other." shaking her head and with her hand under her chin nauhtily riddhima continued " well, rahul what do you look in her face, once i saw her face and all night i can't sleep because of nightmare. seriously you have a lot of guts." while atul chuckled at these comments muskaan turned furiously, now her face red with anger. " (moving towards riddhima with pointed finger) you wait and see what i will do to you now" riddhima raised herself and she put her hands up saying " ok, ok i am sorry" . muskaan lowered herself as she didn't want any arguments and just said" ok, i'm leaving u. i am very sleepy. i need to go home." as she was abt to leave the cafe riddhima went to her ,handed over keys," take these keys and sleep in my house as today is a holiday and minnie and harsh won't let u sleep in your house." "oh, i forgot today is sunday, really how i wish they were with mom n dad , they are always on some mischeivous acts, if it wasn't for nani my house would have been on an rampage. thank god i have a neighbour like you Dr.Riddhima." " my pleasure, Dr.Muskaan" as riddhima bowed n they together burst in to laughs. atul and rahul too joined them looking at their mocking courtesies.

As muskaan and rahul left, atul and riddhima were left in the canteen. atul looking into riddhima's file as she was once again occupied by it " do you need any help, ridzy". riddhima looked at him " no atul, thanks but don't you think you should go home and have some sleep"." oh, don't worry abt me ridzy, i'm fine do you need coffee,i will get it for you." " atul, you are chooooooooo sweet (pulling his cheeks), but i had hot chocolate just right now,see(pointing to her empty cup),( getting up from her chair and taking him by his hand she took him to the entrance of the canteen),now you go home and take rest.ok." atul looked at her and looking at her adamant face knew she wouldn't let him be there and said " ok, i will leave now ,but call me if you need any help.ok"

" yes sure atul.now leave" pointing the way out. atul looked at her for the last time and left the place.riddhima resumed her place and her work.

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Part 2
(A)

"

WhatSapna Bhabhi ,i can't believe you got me up at 5'o clock in the morning and without even letting me eat and now you are forcing me to do circumambulances with you"

" yes, armaan i am making you do this and believe yourself

n for GOD sake believe your eyes" Sapna said hitting his forehead lightly as she chuckled.

"but what for?" armaan pouted his lips." armaan this is chilkoor balaji temple, he

is said to be a very powerful deity and fulfills all your wishes n desires, n if desire is fullfilled you have to do 108 pradikshinas. my wish of getting married to your brother has been fulfilled n so i am completing my 108 pradikshinas and you are gonna accompany me that's it. n don't argue." she pulled him by his arm as they made their way through the huge mass of devotees who are doing their pradikshinas. (chilkoor balaji temple is in hyderabad, it is one of the famous temples n the deity is said to be truly very powerful n fulfills all our wishes it is always full of people doing pradikshanas, whether it be weekdays or weekends).

"so,every thing packed n set to leave" Sapna asked as they sat in the temple after completing their pradikshinas. armaan pressing n carressing his legs " yes,but still i have to search for a house as i reach there. i thought of leaving a week back n search for house but then as unexpected things n unfortunate things happen in my life your marriage with my bro was fixed n i couldn't leave" ." accha, unexpected things n unfortunate", she ran after him trying to catch him as he ran away looking at her angry face. Sapna and armaan had been friends since their internship,when his brother Amit fell in luv with her at there vry first meet. Now she has become Sapna Bhabhi from his friend Sapna.

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First meeting of Sapna and Amit

Sapna and Armaan met in the hospital. it was their first day of internship. only few minutes of interaction has made them good friends. For Sapna, Armaan was a decent guy n knew how to talk to women n respect them. For Armaan,Sapna was a perfect Hyderabadi girl. After the end of their work at the hospital armaan invited her to come to his house, he wanted to introduce his new friend to his family. Sapna also agreed .

Reaching home, his parents were in the hall talking to eachother,rather teasing each other. Armaan smiled looking at them, it was their usual act to bicker each other,they loved it.after introducing Sapna to them he took her around to show his house. he showed her his room, their sitting room.As they entered Armaan called for sunil,their servant, to get two cold drinks. An instant reply" you come n take it ur self " came from the kitchen. Sunil was like a member to the family n had the freedom to talk like this to them,but it was rare, it was only when Armaan or his brother irritated him but today he was surprised to this reply. he turned to look at Sapna who was smiling a bit awkwardly at him when he smiling weakly said " he's just joking, u sit here i will be back in a sec" n turned around with a bit angry face n mumbling curses for sunil n swearing to kill him for this .

Armaan went inside the kitchen n was shocked to find his brother amit chopping onions." Amit,why are u chopping the onions?" armaan asked his brother in shock .Amit through his watery eyes looked at his younger brother n hugged him n said in a dramatic way " armaan, i lost the bet again." .Armaan laughed at this outbrust and said " what! again, amit,what man being an software engineer in google company u just can't win a bet,duthkar hai tujh par" in a dramatic way putting his hand before his forehead in a nahiiiiiiiiiiii style.laughing n wiping his brother's tears that were making their way down his cheeks armaan continued" however,now my friend Sapna has come, just get two colddrinks for us while i give company to her she might be waiting for me." Amit glared at him n said " i'm elder to you,u get the cold drinks while i give company to her.n ya get me orange juice." with that amit left the kitchen. Armaan looked at him n shook his head thinking" he will never change" .

As Amit entered the sitting room his heartbeat skipped looking at sapna. she looked beautiful with her hair loosely left n with a bindi on her forehead. the pink colored chudidhar was in perfect match to her pink cheeks.she was adorable. he was lost in her beauty when armaan came n nudged him with his elbow. Amit came out of his trance n blabbered " i was just..aaaaaaa.just". Armaan who caught his brother staring at her smiled wickedly " oh!brother why are u looking at my friend like that?" asked innocently. Amit " No, it's nothing like that. I was just looking who she was that's it"

." really,(making an innocent face which immediately changed into a teasing face) even after telling that she is my friend u were thinking who she was" amit thought he was caught n there was no point dragging it more n said " ok,ok u got me.plz help me. i want to be friends with her"

Armaan : only friends . Amit : Plz,plz armaan. armaan smiled wickedly n said " ok,but u have to do what i say"

Amit readily nodded his head in agreement. Armaan handed over the cold drink

tray to him n giving him a follow me look walked to Sapna.

Armaan : Sapna,(handing over the colddrink) have it. this is my brother Amit(pointing to Amit who took a seat next to Armaan in the sofa).Sapna : Hi,Amit.after a long pause said hi when Armaan nudged him in his chest.

Amit: hi,Sapna. while Armaan n sapna talked abt their first days works to amit ,all amit would do was just looking lost at sapna. Armaan,would wantedly send him to kitchen asking him to get something to eat once, once to get water,once to get something n so n so. poor amit had to do all this to be in good books of Sapna. Sapna n Armaan left after sometime.

In the car

Armaan was driving the car n changing the radio whenever there was no song being played in the station. Sapna all this while was looking out of the window,lost in her own world. From the time she saw Amit there was something crazy going on in her mind.she wanted to see him when he went to the kitchen even for the short time. she couldn't pay attention to what armaan was saying and all she did was to nod to him whatever he was saying was nonsense,she felt then. Amit seemed so decent,he was good looking,looked promising guy.He did whatever armaan asked for without any back answers,he's so sweet."oho, what's happening to u sapna,why are u thinking abt him, he's armaan's brother.stop it"

Armaan,noticed a change in Sapna as well. He smiled at it n was surprised that someone can fall for the other in their very first meet.

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Hey it's intresting do continue soon and PM me.
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itz intersting.. luvd d concept.. do contd n pm me
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somethin tells me something bad is goin to happen. don't know what it is but it's my gut feeling. anyways interesting concept. continue soon.
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interesting concept..luved RM....continue soon and add me 2 ur pm list...

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Wowow!! AWSOME!! Pls balance RM n AA also hun if u cudd,,
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