Dil Aashna Hai.(ar/ak)*LAST PART*..updated pg38 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
wow yaar awesome.........
thanx for pm
cant wait 2 read next part..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
amazing part
finally they reached greece cant wait 4 the couples 2 meet
the scene between prem armaan and kripa was cute when kripa started blushing regarding her marriage
laksh and kts jodi is really sweet
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
gr8 part
cant wait for to couples to meet
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
thanks for the pm
great part
kripa and maithili just bombarded laksh with questions
very nice
waitin for the meeting of all couples specially ak( sorry for being biased..but m a die hard ak fan)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
really an awwsome⭐️ too gud superb😊 so bajaj's already arrived😊 nw its sharma's going to arrive😊 really excited to see them meet😉😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"If i were a tear in ur eye i wood roll down onto ur lips.But if u were a tear in my eye i wood never cry as i wood be afraid 2 lose u"



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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
Hey nice part, thanks for the PM, update the next part soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
i love all 5 parts plzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is awesome. :)
Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 6
America

Khanna house 5:00 am

(Note: ridz /Angad/adi already talked to mukti she will be meeting them there, she will arrive 2 hrs after them and then call them to pick her up)

Ridz/mukti room

Ridz comes out the washroom wearing this

Ridz looks in the mirror

R: hmmmmm?..so ridz u r going the traditional way in a foreign land?.i like your style.

(hears adii calling her)

A: ridhii?.chaloo??.

R: coming bro?..

Downstairs

Adi and Angad shocked to see ridz wearing traditional dress because she always wears western clothes whenever going somewhere?.

Adi whistles..

R: bhaiya stop it!!!!

An: so ridz did you wake upon the wrong side of bed????

R: NO???

A: ridz I have to agree u look like an angel my jaan

R:thank-you adi bhaiya?.

An: I agree our little sister has grown up??

Ridz (blushing)?..okie ab chalein?..

( airport they meet milind and board the 7am flight)

(In Dubai mukti board the 9am flight)

Greece international airport

There flight has landed waiting for laksh to pick them up?.

R: bhaiya where is that stupid laksh

An: calm down he?ll come??

While looking around laksh spots a girl standing alone he goes to her..

A: hi I?m adi..&who is beautiful girl???

Girl: hi I?m??(interrupted by a guy)

Guy: kt my fianc?!

A: laksh tu aur yeh teri fianc?..

L: yes my fianc?FONT>

A: I;m sorry I didn?t she was ur fianc?.by the great choice!

L: thanx?..kt blushes

Ridz and Angad,milind spot them and walk to them?.ridz goes and hits laksh?.

R: laksh I was waiting so long for u to come .now introduce us to the pretty lady..

L: I am sorry sweetie??.and kt this adi/Angad,milind and sweet little sister riddhima?we are not related by blood but they treated me like their own brother and ridz/adi/Angad&milind this kt the love of my life??

Ridz: nice to meet?.can I call u dii

Kt: sure??ofcourse

An: let go home

L: yea sure

At the farmhouse in Greece

Arman/prem are already awake and ready so they decide to wake up the girls?.

Prachi/kripa.metz room

They come in the room

P: I?ll take metz/kripa

A: &&I?ll take prachii di okie

P: okie

Prem goes to kripa and mets bed they are sleeping on one bed

P;(pretending to be prachii )??KRIPA/METZ GET UP ARTII KA TIME HOGAYA HAI??.

K/M: ( get up quickly and see prem laughing at them)?..bhaiya?.not funny

While arman take a feather and play with on prachii?s face ??prachii giggles and open her eyes and see arman gets shocked

Pr: ARMAN!!!! NOT FUNNY??.

Ar: sorri dii??(arman and prem run out of the room)

The girl so to the washroom to get ready

Kripa comes out wearing this:

Metz wears this:

Prachii wearing this:

Living room

Arman/prem watching tv

Prachii/kripa/metz come downstairs

K: bhaiya u r so mean!!!

P: y?

K: because?.( the backdoor opens and kt/laksh/ridz/Angad/adii&milind come in and see a discussion going on they decide not to disturb them?..prachii/kripa/metz have their back to ridz/Angad/adii&milind so the can?t see them?..arman and prem notice milind/adii/Angad /laksh and these are the guests so they decide to not tell the girls so they make a fool out of themselves)..of the mean trick you played on us

M: yea bhaiya that was not funny?..

Ar: yes it was ?rite prem

P: rite back at yea?..

K/M: bhaiya say sorry now!(screaming)

Ar: no I won?t say sorry

P: me too

(Ridz who is watching this thinks what jerks!!)

(Angad/adii find this soo funny)

(milind is just looking at them)

Finally prachii speaks

K/m: diii?..tell bhaiya to say sorry

Pr: arman and prem bhaiya the prank was not funny and u both shud say sorry to us now(in a demanding voice)

Ar: but diiii?

Pr: arman I said APOLOGIZE!!!(SHOUTING)

(Milind thinks wow this women is a nut case)

Ar/P: fine???we are sorry

Pr/K/M: itz okie???..(thye turn around and are shocked to see a audience??they all think in their mind please I hope they have?nt heard what we said)

AN/A/M: just stare at the girls?..

Arman first to break the silence heading towards them..

Ar: hi I?m arman (finally ridz comes out behind her brothers).arman is shocked to see such an angel face?..

R: hi I?m riddhima but u can call me ridz?..

Ar: stare down her and sees her wearing traditional clothes thinks she is behenji

Ar: hi meet my bro prem my little sisters kripa and maithali and my dii prachii.

Prem: hi ridz

R: hi

Pr/K/M: hi ridz??(the bys finally break out of their tarance)

An: hi I;m Angad this is adi and this milind bhaiya

Ar/P: hi

Pr/k/M: hi??nice to meet you

M: hi same to you

A: hi me is aditya but u call me adii?.

(metz thinks wat a flirt)

M: hi I maithali but call me metz(adi thinks ohh she is flirting back..but she is a bhenji no interest in her?)

Laksh interuppts: ok I think u shud settle in and freshen up?..adi/Angad/milind ur going to share room with arman/prem??and ridz u r sharing with prachii/kripa/metz?.is that okie with u guys??

Everyone: yes?.

Kt: also me a laksh have to go somewhere soo we won?t her tonight help urself to anything and there are servants who can help u..sorry to leave u like this but it?s important?..

Everyone: it?s okie ??.bye see u tommorrow

Girls room

K: feel like ur at home..it?z so nice to have someone my age who support me rite me rite ridz?.

R: yesssss?.

Pr: ridz from now on I?m ur dii to so don?t hesitate to talk to me okie?

R: cool dii thanx.

M: mee too best sister?s ever

Pr/K/R/M: rite on!!!!!!!

Boys room

Angad adi/and milind settle in and sit in the room and talk to arman/prem

An: so are your sis are this angry

Ar: no?.it?s just we played a prank on them

P: &they got angry

An: wat kind of prank?

P: (repeat the whole scene to them)

Angad/adii/&&milind start to laugh

An: wow nice trick?.

Ar: thanxz

(note :change of mind mukti will enter tomorrow..oki soorri)

Every one has there dinner and decide to go to sleep..

Girls room

All the girls are sleep except one??that prachii she decides to go outside for a walk..while walking in the garden she hears someone talking on the phone.she goes to check who it is??She can?t see so she turn to walk back?in that time milind get off the phone and turns to see a girl walking he calls her?

M: uhmmm?who is there??

P: (turns around to see milind and walks over to him)?.hi?..it?s me prachii?I couldn?t sleep so came to walk around in the garden?.wat r u doing here?

M: nothing just talking to someone??so r u feeling sleepy???

P: no not yet?.

M: wanna go for a walk with me (looks at prachii?s confused face)?don?t worry I won?t eat you

P: sure lets go

While in the room Angad and adi are sharing a bed and they are not asleep yet

A: Angad

An: hmmm. wat adii??

A: those 3 girls do like anyone from them???

An: no way all 3 look like bhenji?s ?and Angad stays away from behanji type girls?wat abut u??.like any1(in his mind hoping he doesn?t like kripa)

A: no adii taste is too modern

An: adiiiiii?.

A: hmmmmmm. (Angad shouts)??go to sleep!!!!!!

A: okayJ

Meanwhile in garden

While walking

M: so u kno my soon to be bhabhi?..are guys bestfriends or what???

Pr: no she is like our sister we know her since she was 9yrs old she practically lived with us until she moved to usa.we all love her sooo much?..arman/and prem bhaiya are soo overprotective over her.i don?t know how she found laksh without them knowing??(laughin)..

M: ( sees prachii laugh and thinks what an angel)?wow u guys are soo close!..

Pr: yea very much?..so wat do you do??

M: I work with my dad in his office?.u??

Pr: done uni?.but doing extra course to be a teacher?

M: teacher?hmmm?so u like kidss??

Pr: yes ?.i like kids very much they are little angel send to us from god..they are soo cute and sweet?.(smiles)

M:(she looks soo cute wish the time would stop now)???.

P: ( sees milind staring at her blushes alittle and milind see that and smiles)?.ahhh.i think I should go to sleep?

M: huuuuu?..yea goodnight

P: goodnight runs away from there

M: amazing!!!!!!!

Next update: the couples go shopping .alittle romance😳/fight😆/&&&friendship.hope u like the part??.plzz commentJ??wow..i think this is the longest update I?ve done?sorry I was late you know skool has started so I was busy?

Edited by kelly789 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
hey
loved the part
thnx for the PM
continue soon

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