Dil Aashna Hai.(ar/ak)*LAST PART*..updated pg38 - Page 2

Originally posted by: swansea

ohhhhhhh plz plz plz continue

i can't wait for the first part sweety

First part

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In America it's morning 7 am……Gaythari is in the kitchen making breakfast dilip is getting ready for office….

Milind first to come down for breakfast.

M: good morning ma

G: good morning beta, come have breakfast your papa will come in few minutes

M: nahi ma mein late ho raha hoon mujhe office se pehle kahin jana hai okie bye love you or un dono ko universty nahi jana kya….. aur angad kahan hai

G: nahi aaj unki chuti hai woh kahin ghoomney ka plan ban rahey the tu bhi ja unke saath office tere papa smabal leinge …aur angad recording ke liye gaya hai,ata hi hoga

M:nahin papa akele nahin kar paynge main unkko help karna chahta hoon ….aur un teeno ke saath mein kahin bhi nahin jaana chahta…mein usey ghusa hoon……ok main jara hoon bye ma

G: haan bye beta

Dilip comes they have breakfast together and he leaves.

D: acha gayathari mein chalta hoon

G: theek smabhal ke jayiega bye

At 9:00 am

We see a room that colored a maroon color with two beds with a lot of stuffed animals and a lot of angad posters on the wall…then we a small figure lying on the bed wearing pink pyjamas hugging a teddy bear which mukti gave her on her b-day…

The alarm rings and the figure starts to wake up…

The camera gets closer and we see it riddhima….ridz for short that what every1 calls her.

R: get up ridz itz 9 and you still have to wake up your bro..so come on get ready..okiee

After we see she is wearing a modern red colored kurta with jeans ties up her hair puts on red colored earings and wears black heels short one.

Living/dining room

R(grabs a apple from the dining table) good morning mumma..kya dehk rahi hain

G: good moring jaan ….kuch nahi bas mukti ka interview araha hai news mein who dehk rahi thi……main use bahut miss kar rahi hoon.

R: mumma di ko mein bhi bahut miss kar rahi hoon…di keh rahi thi ke who aaj phone karien gi by 10:00 toh wait karien ek ghante mein baat kar lena….acha mumma adi or angad bhaiya kahan hai

G: angad ka call aya tha who 2 minute mein ara hai aur adi soo raha hai..tu kyun pooch rahi hai

R: (mischievous grin) wasie hi…..(hmmmm adi bhaiya sleeping…..well not anymore says it in her mind)…ok mom mein ahbi ayi

G: theek hai

Upstairs

Adi and angad room painted dark brown has big screen tv on the wall…..and sofa converted bed for guests or friends staying over walls have angad posters and hot girl posters. two huge beds one bed empty other adi sleeping in it…..ridz cums with buket full of water

R: haiiii….bhai you are sleeping so peacefully well not any more(say it loud)

( doesn't know angad is standing behind her)ridz is about to throw water on adi….when

An:Ridz jaan wat are you doing??? With a buket full water(pretending to not know anything)

R: bhaiya who wohhh…mein apka floor wash karne ke liye paani lekar ayi hoon aap dekiya kitna ghanda hai…

An: ohhhh how thoughtful of my sister.ok then u better start cleaing I'll just supervise so u don't get hurt..(about to burst out of laughter any second seeing ridz like this)

R: okie bhai I'll start cleaning (thinking where have I landed myself about to cry)

An: (seeing she is about to cry) ridz sachi batoa panni ke saath kya karna tha???

R: (stammering) wohh..woh mein adi bhaiya ke upar bhenkne waali thi…..(thinking plz don't get angry)

An: that's it you should have told me I would have done it for you personally…I have to get back at him for something he did last week….

R: (surprised) realii(very exicited).okie ready 123 throw and lets run

Angad and kripa run away….

Adi wakes suddenly to see him self wet..

A: mein gila kyun??(thinks did I wet my bed ……….no way r u in ur sense ur to old to do that)thinks a little more,after he gets up he hears giggling outside they he realize who it was.

Next update: does adi get angry and what about milind y is he angry???

Get all your answers in the next update…….

The in the 3^rd update I will introduce the other family and how the couples will meet..

Please comment …..and forgive me for any mistake still new at this ……I did edit but there still might be a lot a mistakes….also should I write in hindi or English….or both..telll me answers..plzzz

Originally posted by: swansea

wow amazing sweetheart

sooooooo goooooood i loved it sooo much 👏

and chooooooooooo cute of ridddz woow 😳

kya baat hai angad should be shouting at riddz lekin woh toh uski madat kar rahe hai yaar😆

Anyway plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooon 😊

and thanks so much for the PM😃😃😃

swanzzy

Originally posted by: samijan

gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great charachter sketch

sounds really intresting

the first part was really good the scene between angad and ridz was really cute

cant wait 2 no why milind was angry

continue soon

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