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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 7

Arman smiled at Riddhima as she walked away with Muskaan. Riddhima waved good-bye as she walked. She was wearing some jeans and a long sleeved shirt with some tennis shoes. As she walked she bumped into a chair and said "sorry" to the chair embarrassed she kept walking.

Muskaan smiled, and right then Rahul came out from the side. Muskaan looked and him and said "where have you been?!" I was looking for you" Rahul looked at her and got closer to her, "oh really why?" Muskaan looked and him "are you on something? Let me go, just cause I was looking for you doesn't mean that I like you or something." Rahul said, "are you stupid? Just cause I got close to you to…" he took a little bit of lint or something out of her hair "doesn't mean I like you either. Anyways why were you looking for me?" She looked at him as if she could punch him. "Well Ms. Wichelmen the patient on the 2nd floor was asking for you because apparently you said there was a way she could be home within the next week, if you get a chance, go visit her."

Rahul looked at Muskaan and smiled. "Alright. Anything else?" Muskaan nodded her head no and said Bye and walked away with Riddhima right behind her.

****

On the other side of town Prem had just reached back to Heer's house. He parked the car and grabbed Heer's hand, "Did I ever tell you how much you mean to me" Heer leaned in and put her head on his chest "NO. You never told me that before." Heer smiled as she moved her head looking for the perfect place to keep her head. Prem looked down at her and stared into her brown eyes, "well, I'll tell you right now, I love…" Heer stared right back waiting for the last part as he leaned in as if he was going to kiss her, she waited and he got really close and then kissed her on her forehead."Now let me drop you inside before mama, baba, bhaiya and bhabi get worried." Heer pulled him in, "No way, you better finish telling me what you were going to, otherwise I'm gonna stay in the car." Prem pulled her in even closer "you know I don't mind staying in the car with you all night either but I am so…" he yawned, "sleepy." Heer let him go and sat in her seat and rolled her eyes, "fine, bye." She opened the door; Prem pulled her back in, "How can I let my jaan leave like that?" He put his head in her lap "You know I am gonna miss just hanging out in front of your house after we get married." Heer giggled "oh really?" she said as she put her head on his arm. Prem kissed her lightly on her cheek and said "I love you Heer, you mean the world to me." Heer moved her head facing the seat as she blushed." Prem looked at her "Okay now let's go." He got up and out of his car and went to the other side and opened Heer's door for her. He took the cards out from the back seat, and they both walked towards the house. Lakshya bhaiya opened the door. "Shukar hai tum loog wapis aa gaye. I was wondering where you were Heer." Prem hugged Lakshya, "hey bhaiya, how are you?" Lakshya looked at Prem "I am fine, just getting things ready for the wedding."

****

On the other side of town Riddhima was dropped off at her house, just as Muskaan had gotten to her driveway Rahul called her. Muskaan looked at the phone, Rahul? She answered the phone "Hello." Rahul on the other side panicked told her to get back to the hospital Mr. Jones down in the ICU was unstable. Riddhima said "Muskaan let's go hurry." Muskaan looked at Riddhima "It's okay jaan I got it, I'll be fine you go rest, you have been working for 18 hours, get out fast I gotta go." Riddhima looked at Muskaan and got out the car.

Muskaan rushed to the hospital, practically running to the ICU, she walked in. Rahul was standing there trying to get Mr. J's pulse back to normal. Muskaan looked at the charts trying to figure out what happened, she went and got some Metaphormine and injected it into his blood stream. As Mr. J stabilized Muskaan could feel her heart beat becoming normal again. Rahul was standing next to her she grabbed his hand for assurance, he held her hand nice and tight. Mr. J looked at Muskaan and smiled assuring her everything was fine. Muskaan asked Mr. J if he needed anything, he smiled and said "Just gimme your nice big smile and I'll be fine." Muskaan smiled "Alright then Mr. Jones if you need anything just buzz the nurse on duty and I will see you later n tomorrow." Mr. J smiled "Yes, ma'am." Muskaan looked at Rahul and realized she was still holding on to his hand she let go and asked him if he wanted to go have coffee. He looked at her and smiled "sure." Muskaan and Rahul started walking towards the caf just then she felt dizzy, she held on to Rahul, Rahul looked at her worried, and within seconds Muskaan fainted. Rahul picked her up rushing her to a room. He put her on the bed, "Muskaan, are you okay? Muskaan" he practically yelled waiting for a response impatiently. She responded "I'll be fine just give me a few minutes." Rahul looked at her, "okay he said." She woke up and as she struggled to get up Rahul held her hand pulling her up while supporting her back with his other hand. Muskaan looked into Rahul's eyes for a while before she snapped out of it.

Rahul looked at Muskaan. "What just happened?" She looked right back at him "I have no clue." Just as she said that she hugged Rahul so tight, that Rahul got worried. "Look Muskaan, I know you are not stupid, yes we fight a lot, but you know I have loved you for a long time and I'll do anything for you. Tell me what's wrong." Muskaan hugged him again as tight as she could. "I know you love me, but I didn't wanna love you back, I tried that but it didn't work. Rahul I have…."

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
so this is part of what i have. i wil try and write more tonight when i have time... pray for me i have a 2 papers due and 2 more midterms this week. =/ so yea. but i will still try and write more soon. i know i take forever but i hope u all enjoy it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
hey great part.. continue soon

Best of Lick on your papers and midterms..

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
no!it cant b terminal.. its gotta be curable!!!!
i like ur fanfic but im still getting use to the relationships.. so ridz likes armaan since childhood but then why is he a stranger in the hospital?or did i read it wrong..
no wait!!! if she has cancer then rahul is gonna spend time w/ her but that doesnt mean that she'll be cured:(
well continue osoon!!its good
Edited by brainychild92 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: brainychild92

no!it cant b terminal.. its gotta be curable!!!!

i like ur fanfic but im still getting use to the relationships.. so ridz likes armaan since childhood but then why is he a stranger in the hospital?or did i read it wrong..
no wait!!! if she has cancer then rahul is gonna spend time w/ her but that doesnt mean that she'll be cured:(
well continue osoon!!its good

OKay so there are 2 Arman's in the story thats teh confussion...now which one is our Arman is still the mystry... :D...we'll see what she has as well. cause didn't mention the problem yet.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
gr88 prt... superb...
thnxx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Hey dii..

really sorri for such a late reply...really busy coz of boards...but i luved ur update..too gud..!!!!👏👏👏
plz update it soon n plz send a PM..
Loads of love,
Riddhima..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
heyy dear,
plzz post next part soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
OH I am soooo sorrry. i didn;t post cause i thought ppl didn't like it anymore. and were too busy too read so yea. but after exams next week i'll try and post it.
-Sabah =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 8

Muskaan looked up at Rahul. "I know you love me, and I love you too, I always have and always will. But I have a brain tumor." Rahul lifted her chin as she looked at the floor. "Muskaan. I will always be here with you no matter what. We will make it through this time and any others that follow. I knew you loved me, but I was waiting for the day you told me yourself." Muskaan wrapped her arms around Rahul and started crying, tears flowed down her eyes non-stop. Rahul mover her, back a bit and wiped her tears "Shhh…Muskaan everything will be fine don't cry, please." Muskaan looked at him, "Nahi Rahul, bahoot dino say mainay yeh dard apnay seenay main dabah kay rakha hua tha, aaj maat rook mujhay." Rahul hugged her and let her feel the warmth and love she needed.

******

On the other side the next morning, Sumit woke up and got ready to get to work. He took his clothes out, and went to the bathroom. Kumkum walked into his house. "Good morning uncle jee", she said to Sumit's dad. "Good morning beta, kaisi ho? Kafi dino say nazaar nahi aayi." Kumkum smiled. "Who uncle, actually thori busy ho gayi this isiliya. Aur aunty kahan hain?" He pointed to the kitchen "Aap ko toh pata hai, kitchen say unko fursaat kahan. Jayai aap wahin pay milo." Kumkum smiled, "jee"

Kumkum walked into the kitchen, "Morning aunty jee." Sumit's mom turned around, "Morning beta, aa gayi. Kaab say wait kar rahin hoon. Actually kuch papers dey nay thay. Oh ho, Woh papers na, Sumit kay kamray main dresser pay hain, aasay karo wahan say lay aao. Ek packet main hain, uspay Mr. Tring likha hai. Jao jaldi." Kumkum smiled "jee aunty abhi laykar aayi."

Kumkum ran up the stairs. She wondered if Sumit was even home still. "Nahi" She thought, "Woh budhu to subha subha itni jaldi nikaal ja ta hai." She knocked on the door just in case. No one responded she walked in and saw how clean, yet cluttered Sumit's room was. "Files hi files haar jaga. Hai, jab main yahan aaon gi, toh meray liya jaga ho gi kya." Kumkum hadn't noticed, but Sumit was watching her and listening to everthing she was saying. "Hai, aab fill jaldi dundo, warna aunty will say file lenay gayi thi, yah bananay." As Kumkum looked through the files she felt a warm presence. She turned around to only fall into Sumit's arms. Sumit held onto her gazing into her eyes as she looked into his and felt the love holding her tight. She pulled herself up. Sumit looked at her. "toh aap puch rahin thi shaadi kay baad aap kahan rehain gi. Toh main patadon kay meri bahoon main aap kay liya hamesha jaga hogi." Kumkum blushed, and turned away then she looked up at him realizing he was only in a towel. She started looking at how well toned his body was, and without knowing that she was thinking allowed she said "Wow..kya body.." she looked up before finishing. "Oh shit, I mean, I should go." Sumit started laughing. Wow jaan, I didn't know it was that easy to get you to say something, I'll remember that for next time."

*****

On the other side Riddhima woke up fresh and ready for another fulfilling day at work. She looked up to realize that she had night shift today and didn't have to get to work 6pm. "Hai, aab main kya karun tab taak, koi naya case bhi nahi hai. Chalo Raj ko tang karti hoon aaj."

Riddhima ran to her little brother Raj's room. She knocked. No response, she creeked open the door to take a peek if he was sleeping or not. To her surprise, or not. Raj was dead asleep. She walked in and sat next to his bed. She ran her fingers through his hair. He always asked her to do that, it made him feel good. She sat there thinking. She looked around his room, "very messy" she thought "haha, but what's new." She looked on his dresser and noticed a picture that wasn't there before, she walked up to it- it was a picture of a girl. "Who could she be? I'll ask him later" Right then she jumped on his bed and yelled "RAAAAJJJJ wake up!!!" Raj got up "HUH??? What?? Where? What happened?? Everything okay??" Riddhima looked at him and laughed. Raj pushed her, Ridzi, man I was in the middle of such a good dream" Riddhima looked at him "Oh ho, good dream, mujhay bhi pato" Raj looked at her. "you were getting married and leaving us all alone so we could sleep." Riddhima looked at him. "you're so mean, just cause I woke you up you don't love me anymore, FINE! BYE." Raj looked at her as she got up. "Quit being such a baby, I'm tired and you know that and you still woke me up so early."

TO BE CONTINUED

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