Budrooh: A real horror story.PART 2. PG.2 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ania_91

wowww!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!
just read it.........it was shoo scary ....
how do u manage to write it ...hayee....me really freaked out....hope her sis is okay...
daiz..hun u described every thing really well....good job yaar...wasn't expecting u wud post the first part now.....hehe....
okay hv to go.......
tc.
ania=)

thankooo shooooo muchhh januuuuu
i wrote it onlyyy forrrrrrrrr u
but i know its not so good at this time...but i'll reeeeeeele try to improveee
and thanks for the comments yaar
it means a lotttttttttttttttt to me
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*

Hey! I'm Kanika...and i am going to be 14 so i can read this story😆😳

First of all I'd lyk to tell u that i am extremely choosy in reading FFs...Only DMG ones i read.. But ur FF attracted me so much that i HAD to read it..😳 I Haven't read any non-dmg ff except urs😳
I Love Horror Stuff! i feel its different😉..
though i am a writer but i can't write horror😆
but i love reading it😳
I Loved the first Part! It was Fantastic!👏👏👏
It seemed lyk i am in that FF as Sanju and i cud imagine everything😲😲👏
lol..i am sitting in a dark room too😲😆
But Great Work!👏👏👏
Keep Writing!!
And do PM me😳
-Kanika😳

thank u shooooooooooooo mcuhhhhhhhhhh kanika, loveeeeeeeeeee u hun
and yeah, thats wht i hv noticed too, ppl here do not seem to appricitae anything that is unDMG..lolz
thanksss for ur lubbbelyy comments...........they mean alotttttttt more than aalottt to me..lol
i'll update very soon only for the two of u
thanks guyz
two of u r like two million to me
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Part 2:

Sanju too started screaming with extreme horror🤢🤢.Hearing loud yells and screamz,all in a sudden of a dreadful night panicked the whole family.😡 They all gathered into their room. Kiya dekhtey hein kai sanju is standing at the corner trembling with ultimate terror,😕 Anjali however, is sitting on her bed, yelling and roaring in pain. Blood was dropping off from her whole face. Poor Anjali was crying and screaming louder than ever. Sanju too was sobbing. She was very much disconcerted to see her sis in such pain. A chaos was going through the Khanna family. Sanju tried her best to tell them what had happened in the room 5 min. ago.and that too that she had thrown the jug on Anjali?s face. ? array kambakht sanju?.!?.ye kiya kar diya tu ne?.apni hi didi ko maaray jaa rahi hai?.Mom too first started harassing her and then crying along with Anjali. Mr. Ajay and Naresh were extremely upset and worried. It was the middle of a night, and finding a doctor at this moment/time sounded pretty difficult.

Mom was still continuing to obsess Sanju ? ari kambakht?.tu ne aadhi raat ko hum per ye kiya waqt dala?.hayla ab kiya hoga? ? beigum, tum plz rona dhona band karo?aur mujhe kuch sochne do?. Mr.Ajay getting irritated told her biwi to stay calm and quiet. He then looked at Naresh and said ?Beta tum jaldi se gaari nikalo, Anjali ko kisi private medical center liye chalet hein?

So they took her to the medical centre. Fortunately, a night shift doctor was available, she gave her first aid and wiped off her blood. So this way, Anjali did got survived, but her face was harshly injured.

?mein to kehti hoon, iss larki per jinno ka saaya hai?.ye sab ko issi tarah zakhmi karke maar dale gi?.. is ko kisi peer faqeer kai pass lai chalo? Sanju?s mother said it in a very harsh tone, that straightly went right into sanju?s heart.? Begum?kaisi jaahlon waali baatein kar rahi ho?.ye jinn ka saaya kiya hota hai? Huh?..baat to kuch aur he hai?.he then walked closer to sanju and looked into her eyes, who were still filled with tears and sorrowness.,he put his hand on sanju?s head, patted her on the cheeks, and said? beti?.tum rona band karo?is mai tumhara absolutely koi kasoor nahi tha?..waise kiya tumne phir se koi drawna sapna dekh liya tha???Seeing her papa being the only one still carrying some sympathy for her made Sanju felt a thousand timez better, controlling her tears she said? papaa?.wo drawney sapney?.aana to mujhe bohatt pehle kai band ho chukey hein?.lakin??lakin? ?haan haan bolo beti?lakin kiya?aakhir kyun zakhmi kiya tha tumne Anju ko? ? papa?.wo mmm maine didi ka chehra badlte dekha tha?..wo bohat drawna chehra tha??..maine khauf kai maare jug us kai moo per dai maara?mujhe kiya pata tha??.ke?.didi? with such embarrassment, she coudnt even finish her sentence, and started crying again?.

Her Dad took Sanju to the doctor, and even he coudnt figure our the problem. But he gave Sanju the sleeping pills, they were working out just fine for her for quiet a while. Anjali?s, bad injury had left lotss of ugly and unsightly marks on her face??.her fianc?oo broke up with her??..All she and the family did, was nothing but cried on her fate

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Edited by Daisy!! - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Once sanju saw some humongous ,dirty, non-human foot marks on the front porch of her house, and sometimes she heard someone singing at the middle of the night.

But she never ever again had the courage to talk about it to anyone??she had seen everyone?s temper??she now stayed more hushed and silent than ever??.Noone ever dared to sleep with her or nor that she asked anyone to. One night, she unexpectedly started feeling terrified, her heartbeat went on crazily, unwillingly and hesitantly, she went into her Mom?s room and asked if she cud sleep with her.? Ab kiya mujhee bhi maare gi????apni behen ki zindagi to barbaad kardi tu ne? said her Mom in a harsh tone. she came back to her freaky dark room, ???poor sanju sat on her bed?all alone?. distressed and hurt???..she turned all her night lights on?.but was still having a strange horrifying feeling, Sanju,ignoring all her wild thoughts, took out her sleeping pills out of the drawer?one after two?.she kept swallowing them with water?.On her fourth pill,she felt an insect crawling on her tongue?.Thhhhooooooooo she spits it out feeling awfull, sickening and totally disgusting?. She was frightened and shocked,? maine to neend ki goli zunbaan per rakhi thi?ye keera kahan sai aa gaya??????? Thought sanju??she stared at that little insect?? it was forming a little circle?and then unexpectedly, even out of her imgination, she saw the tiny insect gradually started growing,becoming humongous, monstrous, awefully ugly?.even Sanju saw his big red eyes staring at her? he was growing big yuky and dry hairs?..Sanju started trembling with great terror,tried to scream, but no sound came out, in the next second, she jumped off her bbed towards the door, but surprisingly got bumped into her bro. She hugged her brother with all her might. Naresh: ?kiya hoa sanju?.tu itna khaufzada kyun hai??

?Nnnn Nnn Naresh??wo?ander..mmm maret kammmrey mai??kiya hoa hai tumhaarey kamray mai? Chalo aao marey saath? said Naresh. Both of them Went into her room. Sanju saw that monstrous creature crawling out of her room ? Naresh wooo dekhoo? pointed to the keera. She thought Naresh will too get horrified after seeing that?but Naresh laughed in a strange manner and said? wo sanju??arre wo to mera dostt hai?.waise wo insaani gosht bare shokk se?.?a chill ran through Sanju;s body?she slowly turned her face to her bro.and the next moment, screamed in AWE, his face was lightening even brighter than a 100 walt bulb, his eyes were popping off, and had an evil smile on his face?.and sanju was standing? that close to him?.seeing his face turning like that right infront of her eyes, she screamed again and ran towards her dad?s room. To her surprise, dad?s room automatically opened, and then the rest of the family?s rooms too opened?Sanju stood there in a deep shock, kiya dekhti hai ke her mom, dad, and didi Anjali, all were coming towards her, and all of their faces were just the same, stoned eyes,phati phati aankhein, rookheey baal, they however had a strange smile on their lips,Sanju ki rooh tak laraz gayi, seeing her whole family in that position, she carelessly started yelling

?Mammaaa, papaaa, didii, bhaiya?.aap logon ko kiya ho gaya hai?????ho kiya gaya hai??ye sab kyun ho raha hai mere saath? she started sreaming and crying, both at the same time, ran towards the front porch of her house, but she suddenly fell on her knees? she looked up in the sky,in the dim light of the moon, she heard laughs, evil and strange laughs, Sanju turned her head to see her whole family coming after her. They were all calling her, and their faces?they were even worse now, some had lost one of their eyes, and some had their lips hanging out from their faces,Sanju didn?t waste another second,she got up,and started hitting everyone with the broom???.

?San?sanju ye kiya kar rahi ho????hamein kyun maar rahi ho??hosh mai to ho tum?? yelled Anjali.? Sanju yelled back, completely out of her senses? mai tum sab logo ko marr daalon gi?tum log mere dushman ho?.mujhe jaan se maarna chaht ho? she started feeling dizzier and her dad came towards and held her in his strong arms.

Edited by Daisy!! - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok. so thats the second partt

it seems longer than it reele is
hope i dint bored u or anything~
plz do commentttttttt....they mean alottttt to me
loveeeee u
Daisy!!
Edited by Daisy!! - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

**PHEW**

That was veryyy Scary!!👏
I cud feel everything!! Poor Sanju!
Her father was the only one supporting her..Haww Her sister's engagement broke??
Bechaari Sanju! She must be feeling even more guilty!
Continue soon hun!!
Thanx for the PM!
-Kanika😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi daisy, wow first time i saw some one writing horror ff, hat off yar, i really like both the part of ur ff, pls do contin writing. i just hope everything will be fine so for sanju
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*

**PHEW**

That was veryyy Scary!!👏I cud feel everything!! Poor Sanju!
Her father was the only one supporting her..Haww Her sister's engagement broke??
Bechaari Sanju! She must be feeling even more guilty!
Continue soon hun!!
Thanx for the PM!
-Kanika😳

thanks for the comments hunnnn
lolz...that wuz nuhting yaar....therez still tonz more scary things that's gona happen to the Khanna' family. n u'll know y iz all this happening to sanju only, beriiii soon
Thank u shoooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhh commenting jaanu
luvvvvvvvvvvvv u
Daisy!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: j&b84

hi daisy, wow first time i saw some one writing horror ff, hat off yar, i really like both the part of ur ff, pls do contin writing. i just hope everything will be fine so for sanju

thank u shooooooooo much hun for the beautifullll comments
i reeleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee appreciate ittttttttttttttttt
loveeee u hun
Thanks!😃

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