Budrooh: A real horror story.PART 2. PG.2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guyz, i am Daisy, and this is my veryy firsttt fanfic ever. and i m only going to continue if i get ur response. meaning UR invlove in producing this story as much as i am. its a story where we all work together. i can even let U update if ur ideaz are more powerful.i really hope u enjoy reading it as much i do by writing it.
Headz up: This fanfic is not suitable for readers under the age of 13. i m not stopping u guyz frm reading it...but ur gona get realll gosebumps...so READ ON UR OWN RISK.
Herez the intro. a bit boring, but it has to be introduced in order for the story to continue
Characters:
Mr. Ajay Khanna:

Anjali Khanna:

she is the eldest daughter, done with her studies, and now is in the stage to get married soon

Naresh Khanna: the only son of the khanna family.

Sanjeevni(sanju): the preetiest and youngest daughter, also veri laadli of her parents and sibblings.

Introduction:

This story is basically focused on the Khanna family,which is bonded in the true power of love.Mr.Ajay khanna was truly satisfied with his life, as he had everything a man could ask for. a beautiful, and caring wife, one son and two daughters, money, popularity and respect in the society.it was... until the budrooh turned it into not bad but worse...

Everyone in the house started noticing how much the most talkative sanju now stays quiet and is alwaiz lost deep into her thoughts.When she was just a little child,she used to get scary dreams, normally like other kids of her age. the dreams which we all see when we are little. but then as we grow up, the scary dreams just stops as time passes by, unlike sanjeevni, her bad dreamz got turned into worst as she left pass her childhood.Now that she was a 17 years old, mature girl, her dreamz weren't still any better. she sometimes used to wake up in the middle of the dark night, screaming from the top of her lungs, distubring not only her's but everyone else's sleep too.but one thing she noticed was that her scary dreamz werent any different from each other. all she used to see was an ugly, hideous, a dreadful and terrfiying face staring at her, and the closer it gets, the more horrifying it becomes. she then all in a sudden wakes up, screaming, panting hardly, with sweatt droping off her forehead. It kept happening not for daiz, but years. then a strange thing happened. all in a sudden her dreamz just stopped. not only her, but the whole Khanna family breathed out in relief. but then one night....

Will update the first part beriiii soon
Guyz do let me know if u wud like me to pm when the update is available:
Pm list:
ania_91
*K@nik@*
j&b84

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Daisy!! thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guess no one here likes to read scary storiez huh?😭😒
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!

DAIZZZZZZZZ!!!!!
hello??? u are soo dead......missy u posted a fic and DID NOT tell ME??????????
okhay.........me need to calm down....will get back after mi anger releases!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ania_91

OMG!!!!!!!

DAIZZZZZZZZ!!!!!
hello??? u are soo dead......missy u posted a fic and DID NOT tell ME??????????
okhay.........me need to calm down....will get back after mi anger releases!!!

lolz. dun wrry madam ji...i dun think i'll ever be continuing this thing😛
so chill na...its all cool
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Daisy!!

lolz. dun wrry madam ji...i dun think i'll ever be continuing this thing😛
so chill na...its all cool

ur asking me to CHILL? and what was that ur not gonna continue? are u okay? it was a fab intro mi dear....am really proud of ya......the story line seems really scary.....would love to read more....so start writing the first part madam ji! dun worrie yaar...am here na!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ania_91

ur asking me to CHILL? and what was that ur not gonna continue? are u okay? it was a fab intro mi dear....am really proud of ya......the story line seems really scary.....would love to read more....so start writing the first part madam ji! dun worrie yaar...am here na!! 😛

OMG i luvvvvvv u sooooooooooo much yaar, ur like the beshttttt person everrrrrrr
mwahhh mwahhh
but yaar i guess writing is not my thing...like seriously
i just decided to give it a shot, but guess it didnt worked out
i quitted like way bak, n now ur telling me to continue?
waise yaar tu bohatt achi hai yaar...........i 'll continue only for u..dun care bout the rest
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv u
ur mi jaan
will post the first part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Daisy!!

OMG i luvvvvvv u sooooooooooo much yaar, ur like the beshttttt person everrrrrrr
mwahhh mwahhh
but yaar i guess writing is not my thing...like seriously
i just decided to give it a shot, but guess it didnt worked out
i quitted like way bak, n now ur telling me to continue?
waise yaar tu bohatt achi hai yaar...........i 'll continue only for u..dun care bout the rest
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv u
ur mi jaan
will post the first part soon

aww....no problem yaar.....
its really interesting....me gonna read for sure.....am sure it will be worth it...😃
will be waiting for the first part daiz!! update soon.....and don't worry readers will come...u just hv to be a teenyy weeenyyy bit patient 😳 luv ya loads!!!
take carezz
Ania 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1:
In the middle of a dreadful and dark night...........sanjeevni wakes up........ feeling her throat extremely parched and dry as it cud ever be ................From a tiny part of her eye she forces herself to see the clock which cud barely be seen. Forgeting of even trying to see the time she murmures to herself:"oh jeeeeeez, is kambakht piyaas ko bhi abhi lagna tha"😡😡😡....... she gets up furiousluy.........f🥱eeling her weight more than 500 pounds.....she could barely lift the two legs of hers.🤢"ye kaku baba bhi na, kitni dafa kaha hai paani ka glass saath rakh diya karo, meri koi sunta ho tab hi"rolling her eyes. she steps into the kitchen..............and opens up the fridge.........and the sharp light swiftly spreads out hurting her eyes................she stands there for quiet a while enjoying the cold air tickling her face.................and then gulps up who knows almost the whole bottle feeling as she havent drank in million of ages."AAAhhhhhhhh, better"................But just when she turns around to leave the kitchen.................With squinting her eyes,she perceives a blurred shadow shifting here and there in the living room.😲.......................She tires to scream but only a soft shrill comes out. Sanju feels a great chill running thorugh and quievring her whole body...............Instead of examining more of the shadow.................she just runs up to her room, locks it up with all her might and hides her face between her mushy and fluffy pillows.😵She could almostt hear her heart thomping up and down as its gona pop out any minute.......................Dhak Dhak Dhak....she takes some deep breaths in and reads some religious stuff her mom had taught her

The unwanted silent of the night was getting more irritating. just then she hears a soft knock on her door.Tha Tha Tha., even a soft knock like that was no less than a bomb to her, the knock goes on again, and this time sanju looks up,and almost screams out "Kkkk Kaun haiii"................. On the other side her didi anjali's voice answers "Sanjuu darwwaza kholo..... mai hoon anjali" sanjeevni breaths out in relief, with a smile of satisfication on her face,😊 she gathers up her courage and opens up the door expecting to see her sis. standing, but all she sees and hears is thin air, she checks both sides of her door, but sees nobody.SLAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM (slams her door loudd)😲

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Nobody beilieves her as usual but she insists to sleep with her didi Anjali for the next night.

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It was one O clock at night or maybe more, and both sisterz were sleeping on a double bed together. Anjali was facing the other side lost deep into her sleep.🥱Sleep however, was a million timez away from sanju's eyes...... She wasnot able to sleep due to a strange feeling and unknown fear hidden inside her. However, she was feeling more relax and satisfied as her sis. being with her sis⭐️⭐️......... Only one bulb that poked out dim light was lightening in the room, and thats wat she was staring at for a long time.As Sanju was trying hard to get some sleep,thinking whatever she saw the other day was just her wild imagination............ but just then,all in a sudden, the light bulb blinks a several times and then finally all its power goez out.......along with the fan."ARGHH loadshading"😡sanju screamz out. Deep darkness coveres the whole room. The going off of the electricity was totally a normal thing in the Khanna's house...... thats y she had a candle and matches on her sidetable ready for any kinda emergency............ she lightens up the candle, and feels her heart beats coming bak to normal.she sits up on her bed crossing her legs ............and takes a look at her sis.'s gone in her deep sleep. Her eyes wanders around and sees her shadow shaking just as she is at that moment............... she stares at it for quiet a while,............just then all even out of her imagination she again perceives her wiggly shadow slowly rising up as her throat drying up again.......... and glides upto the ceiling. she again starts panting badly,wiping off her sweat, she tries to wake up her sis." Di..Didi...Didi...Di...Didi utho...plz utho..Didi plz". Anjali moves her body to face her side and sanju again feels much better to see her sis. moving................., she was busy continuingly staring at her shadow with her unbelievable eyes but just when she sees her sister's face getting up she almost yells out, Her face was turning.......turning very ugly, hideous, the same face she used to see in her dreamz, big lightened eyes, full of wrinkles deep black, rookhey baal, hoont gayab, two sharp teeth poking out, staring at herrr.before she used to see that face in her dreamz only, but now she facing her in reality. she was shaking from toes to head, heart thomping badly, she wanted to scream but no voice came out. she again gathered up her courage and went down from her bed. Her sis. too sat up, still staring at her with those bigg red eyes, and now was making some strange and ugly noises. Sanju felt dizzier than ever, without even thinking she picked up the glass and threw right onto her sis's face. but the next moment heard her sis.'s screammmm.AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

That's it for now guyz!!!

i know it sucks, but plz bare with me as its my veri first fan-fic ever
n i reele hope i get shum response this time *fingers crossed*

Edited by Daisy!! - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!
just read it.........it was shoo scary ....
how do u manage to write it ...hayee....me really freaked out....hope her sis is okay...
daiz..hun u described every thing really well....good job yaar...wasn't expecting u wud post the first part now.....hehe....
okay hv to go.......
tc.
ania=)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey! I'm Kanika...and i am going to be 14 so i can read this story😆😳

First of all I'd lyk to tell u that i am extremely choosy in reading FFs...Only DMG ones i read.. But ur FF attracted me so much that i HAD to read it..😳 I Haven't read any non-dmg ff except urs😳
I Love Horror Stuff! i feel its different😉..
though i am a writer but i can't write horror😆
but i love reading it😳
I Loved the first Part! It was Fantastic!👏👏👏
It seemed lyk i am in that FF as Sanju and i cud imagine everything😲😲👏
lol..i am sitting in a dark room too😲😆
But Great Work!👏👏👏
Keep Writing!!
And do PM me😳
-Kanika😳

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