* [Vivaah] [part 9 page 29] - Page 21

Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox

great update liked da veer and ananya parts

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Hey sweetzie..jus read the whole FF now..at one go..

Must say it's a simple yet rilli beautiful FF..

The way u write the dialogues..its jus sooooooo cute I mean I'm fida on em..

One complain..u incorporate only two to three scenes each time n the updates r sooo short..soniye ki kitta..bache ki jaan logi kya..I'm like goddddd'.kya kar rahi hai yeh sweet pea'plzzzzzzzzz it's a sincere request..plzzzzzzzzz give longer updates from nxt time..em getting mad reading sooooo small updates which r written sooo beautifully'

All the prts left me like'ummm wantin for more..n u'r updates being short'plzzzzzzzzz give long updates yaar,'em dying to read em'

I loved the last VA scene n the time he actually is so angry that he wants to kick mohini out..n the last scene was outstanding..literally rilli soooo sweet..wonder whos this person who saw em both like this'

N I loved this line.. [he saw her n think in his mind how can anyone put a knot to ure lips but even if sum1 does onli i will open it no one else]

I'm like veer is getting soooo possessive n the way its written it looks as if veer knows only he can ever possess this beauty..she is all his''loved it'

Will give a lonnnnngggggg compliment later..gotta rush'

Happy Diwali shona'..

Love ya sweetie'.t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: arwa72

hey i finally got time to read ur fic and i must say it is quite sweet. both the couples have been described well and its gr8 work.

hope u find time soon to continue.

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya

it was really lovely........and ofcourse romantic.......i'm curious to know what is mohini's plan.....and i hv a feeling, that the interrupter is either Dharam or Siya......😃

Originally posted by: ektay11

wow yaar

fantastic va scenes

plz cont soon

its amazing

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

aw dear..lovely ff dear.....*clapssss 👏👏👏

loved all d parts..

n last part wow it was so cute..

d way veer said....Meri Ananya 😳😳 without realising what he said..aww so cute 😛 😍

also...that not wala scene...*blush was so romantic 😍 😳

muahh plzzzzzzzz update soon sweety....🤗

Originally posted by: shruja

Thanks for update after so long time. Its is as lovely n as sweetest as ur profile name. N am curious about Agni-Mohini-JV plan. Hope u will update soon

Originally posted by: silverlinesky

well written...romantic n funny part...plz update soon

Originally posted by: ektay11

wen r u going to update now

Originally posted by: sweetest girl

heyyy sooryy to keep u waitng will try to update dec 8😳