HSSH [AK,AR,LKT,KA]~ Pt. 4/Pg. 15... pg18 NOTE - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
nice character sketch 😳
can't wait for the first part👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
i love HSSH so please pm next time and good charecter sketch but armaan suits as salman,i think but its ok,dont forget to pm.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

reserved!

*edited to comment*

Hey!
Awesome Character Sketch!
can't wait for the first part!!
great job!!👏👏👏

thank you very much
i'll cont...first part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

nice...

cant wait for part 1...
cont soon..
Sonia

thanks😃
i'll cont...soon

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

awesom character sketch

thnx for the PM
continue soon

thanks😊

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice character sketch

thanks😃

Originally posted by: cutie13

nice character sketch

thanks for pm me
cont soon

thanks
i'll cont....soon

Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

nice character sketch 😳
can't wait for the first part👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛

thanks😃
i'll cont...soon

Originally posted by: bary

i love HSSH so please pm next time and good charecter sketch but armaan suits as salman,i think but its ok,dont forget to pm.

thanks😊
even i love HSSH.
i'll PM you when i post the first part.

Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey...great character sketch....cnt wait til u strt dis ff

thank you

hey PM me too

sure i'll PM you when i post the first part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one⭐️ so sweet😊 plz continue it soon😊 and plz pm me when u update it😊

'SONA' Kitane bhi thukade karlo,
Uski kimath kam nahi hoothi,
Aap jaise 'DOST' Kithne bhi door ho,
Aapki 'DOSTI' dil se kam nahi hothi.

thank you ver much
i'll PM you when i post the first part

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

nce character sketech

great updte
updte sooon
nizma x

thanks nizma 😃
i'll update soon

Originally posted by: swansea

amazing character sketch sweetie

thankssssssssss a lot for the PM means a lot
and do continue sooooon
can't wait for the first part

thank you very much😊
i'll update soon

Originally posted by: ~*shaili*~

hey to all! am shaili..new here..hope i get some space here :) anyway lovely ff. i am a die-hard fan of kavyanjali and am glad they are in! but how i wih they were playing salman-sonali or karishma-saif! :(( anyway looking forward to read more

thank you very much shaili😊
i'll update the first part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Part-1

A girl is opening the curtains she is wearing an orange and yellow sari and it's none other than kt. After opening the curtains she makes her way to the bed in the middle of the room and you see a guy sleeping with his head under the pillow. She goes near his near and softly whispers 'utho Na'.

V: hmmm''

Kt: (softly whispers again) good morning

V: hmmm'.

She gets annoyed and picks up a magazine and hits his back. He wakes up by rolling to the right of the bed and ends up on the floor. Then we see him scratching his head and now we see his face and its laksh and he was dream of his dream girl again. Just then the alarm goes on.

L: phir se sapna. (Then his eyes fall on the clock and say) Oh Sh**

He gets up and runs to the bathroom and takes a quick shower and comes running down the stairs and jumping over the furniture and sits next to a guy who's around 26. We see his face and he just opened his eyes and its armaan he looks at laksh kind of angry.

L: (holding one of his ear) sorry

Armaan just shakes his head and pays attention to the prayer again. Then we see an older man around his 60's next to armaan with his eyes close too and its Dilip khanna. Then we here a voice sing the arti and its none other Naina Khanna. Near the end of the arti we see an old couple around their 50's coming into the house with a box of sweets and garland in their hands and they are none other than suryaban and gayatri Naina's bhai and babhi.

Naina opens her eyes and sees them and screams: Bhai babhi...

Su: (puts the garland around dilip's neck and says) aap dono KO 25 anniversary bohut bohut Mubarak ho

Naina goes and hugs gayatri. Then Naina takes the box of sweets and puts a piece in dilip's mouth and he does the same. Then gayatri says: arre bacho KO be kha Lao

Laksh: yes thank you and puts his mouth out first to take the sweet but

Naina (holds his ear and says): kyu arre pooja ke liye sub se peecha aur meethi ke liye sub se aage.

L: arre ma aaj mai ek tam time pe aya tha pooche bhai Se

Ar: ma (bends down and takes Naina's blessing)

N: jee ta raho beta

While she is blessing Armaan, laksh come behind her and steals a ladoo from the box while naina yells at him. Then she takes another ladoo and puts it in Armaan's mouth. Just then a person and a lady comes into the house with a flower bouquet in their hands and there from the office. The man is Khan Sahib and the lady is RIA the secretary.

KS: dilip sahib bohut bohut Mubarak ho and babhi je aap KO bhi bohut bohut Mubarak ho

D/N: sukriya khan sahib

Then RIA goes to armaan and tells him that all the things are prepared for the party tonight. Dilip looks at RIA and says: arre RIA aap humare ki secretary hai ya bacho ki? Ek hafta se yeh log function ke taiyaria ma leke huye hai.

Su: dilip such pooche to ye he din hai sub logo ke saath khushiyan bat Na ke. (Looks at armaan and says): arre armaan tumare woh dost Anwar miya nazar nahi arahi hai?

Ar: tab bhi to ghar mai shor nahi. Woh kavya aur anjali KO receive karne Gaye hai.

Then outside the house we see a car coming and 3 kids come running out of the car towards the house and a couple with hands around each other walking into the house. The kids go running to naina and say: Nani'Nani'Nani

She pulls a jar of candy out and hands candy to each of the kids. Then anjali and kavya comes and hugs dilip and naina then anjali goes to armaan and hugs him and laksh just pulls Anjali's hair and also hugs her. After meeting everyone kavya opens a bag and takes out a Shervani and a white sari and gives it to dilip and naina as their anniversary present. Then the kids ask Anwar chachu what is he going to wear and then armaan asks that doesn't he have to go to his store.

Anwar: aaj chute (off Today)

Laksh: bhai kal main ek sapna dekha tha Anwar band and company pe taale (locks) lek rahe hai'

Anwar: oye'

G: aur nahi toh kya din pher to yaha rathe hai toh dukan (store) kaisa chal Te hoge?

Anwar: aap ke dua se ek dum first class chal rahi hai mamijaan. Aur phir admi KO chaye kitna, ammijaan ache ache khana khale thi hai aur abujaan Jin ake ache shalke (ways) shak te (learn) hai bus house full.

Su: arre wow armaan sub ke zindagi me ek assa dost to ho Na he chaye.

D: jee humare woh dost abhi tak nahi aye'

Here's the first part of HUM SAATH SAATH HAIN i hope you guys enjoy it and plz forgive me if i made any mistakes since it's my first time writing. The First Few parts are going to be just like the movie untill im done introducing everyone then i'll add romance between each couple a little different from the movie. plz leave your comment good or bad i like to read them.

Precap: Introduction of Kripa,Kt and most likely Angad's
Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
gerat part love it😳😳😳
can't wait for Kt's entry and others😳😳👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
i love hssh
i have this movie in my head and can never forget it
cuz i have watched it too many times....lolz
plz continue soon
i loved ur first part
i seriosly can't imagine armaan in the role of vivek
cuz i have always seen him in the roles of a person who is opposite of vivek.. lolz
plz pm me the next time u continue
loved this part
luv heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
wow hun its just like reading the actual HSSH with our fave chacrters...
gr8 start... plz cont sooon...
am a huge fan of the movie...
thanks for the pm...
Sonia

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