MyFF:Tamanna , Part15 posted-- (pg45)

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

i readed ur part b4, but didnt comment..

it was nice as always👏👏

i liked veer-vikrant fight! wow! im wondering if viki will create more probz there...

finally all 3 are winners😆😆😆 so good guruji😆

omg..after 5 years?? but how old are dv now??

and ananya? how old is she? sorry for asking but...can u tell me?😛

dharam buying a doll and veer teasing him 😆 wat a friend...😆

sorry for commenting late, but commented😳

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
i readed ur part b4, but didnt comment..
it was nice as always👏👏 [🤗🤗]

i liked veer-vikrant fight! its vikram yaar...wow! im wondering if viki will create more probz there...u have to wait for that...😆

finally all 3 are winners😆😆😆 so good guruji😆 ya he just wanted to test there willingness to win

omg..after 5 years?? but how old are dv now?? they r 9yrs now

and ananya? how old is she? sorry for asking but...can u tell me?😛 she is 5yrs

dharam buying a doll and veer teasing him 😆 wat a friend...😆 ye hi to hoti hai dosti😆

sorry for commenting late, but commented😳 glad u commented🤗

sorry thank u sorry thanku......tumhe mujhe pareshan karna achcha lagta haina ashu.???

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kiran

@crazy_kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#83

lovely fan fic i just read it its fantastic pls keep updating soon

👏👏

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: suryogita
the part was really good😉cool too

thankuuuu 😳

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran
lovely fan fic i just read it its fantastic pls keep updating soon
👏👏

thanks for reading and commenting😳
am soo happy that u liked my FF 😃
yup will update it tomorrow....⭐️

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: starpisces123

sorry thank u sorry thanku......tumhe mujhe pareshan karna achcha lagta haina ashu.??? ha

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#88

Part6:

The whole palace was decorated and everyone there was very happy seeing their future maharaj dharam
Dv entered the palace and went to the darbar where maharaj aryawardhan and jaywardan were waiting for them
Both went near them and took ashirwad from maharaj and jaiwardan

Someone called them from behind "dharamveer humse nahi meloge"
Both dharamVeer turned back and they ran to him and just hugged him
It was agni son of jaiwardan he was a very calm, sweet ,very undestanding and loved all his cousins... he was 6 years elder to them.. that means he is 15yrs old now.

Then maharani swathi came there and both took her ashirwad from her.
Veer loked here and there and asked : "maa kahan hai mamiji"
Maharani swathi: "beta wo ana chahti thi ,lekin teek waqt par sumaina mai koi samasya aapadi hai , isi liye wo nahi aapayin"
Veer was a little upset by this
Swathi: "are baba naraz mat ho, wo parsoon zaroor ayengi...kyun ki rakhi ka tyohar jo hai.."
By hearing this veer gets a little relief

Dharam: "maa likin ananya kahan hai?...hume kahin dekhai nahi de rahin?"
Swathi : "Ananya wo to yahin thi, tumhare ane ki khushi main wo subha se bohot uthsahith ho kar har kaam kar rahi thi..."
Dharam: "phir wo aab kahan hai? hum uska chahra dekhne ke liye taras gaye hain"
Swathi : "tumhari behen hai to tum hi dhondo!!"
Veer got irritated when he hered ananya's name and interrupted them: "mamiji mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai , pehle kuch khane ko do naaa...."
Swathi : "han haan aaj humne to saari tumhari pasand ke chesaan banaye hai"
Veer hug swathi from behind and says: "mere pyari mamai aap kitni achchi hai.."
swathi: "achcha baba ,ab maska marna band karo! aur chalo,....dharam tum bhi chalo"
Dharam: "maa aap jayiye hum ananya ko lekar aate hai"
Swathi :"teek hai"

Dharam starts searching her in all the rooms but did't find the princess....he searched the whole palace but she was no where...atlast dharam went to his room and fell on his bed as he was very tiered searching ananya...at once he heard payals sound in his room!! he started looking around and said "ananya kya wo tum ho"

He notices that she was hiding behind a pillar and goes near to it and said:"dekho baba ab hum thak chuke hain ab tum samne aajao....tumhe dekne keliye humari aankhe taras gayi hai"
He hears no reply and then continues.."achcha ab agar tum samne nahi aaogi to phir hum ye tohpha jo hum tumhare liye layen hai wo hum veer ko dedenge.."
Ananya: "veer ko!!!! ..likin humara tohpha aap use kyun denge???" and she comes infront of dharam
Dharam was so happy to see the grown up ananya, she was soo beautiful with long hair,big eyes and also a very angry face at present
Dharam went near her , took her in his arms and hugged her.... and said very softly "ye raha aapka tohpha"
Ananya :"gudiya!!!!!!!!... hume to gudiya bohot pasand hai!..shukriya bhayya..."
Dharam felt touched by seeing her smile and kissed on her forehead and said:"ab chalo maa ne khane par bulaya hai ,aur veer bhi humara intezaar karraha hoga..."
Ananaya:"kya veer?wo bhi aya hai??? aur ate hi khana khane laga?..... bhayya ab zaldi chalo varna wo veer saara khana kha lega!!!..hum dono ke liye kuch bhi nahi bachega...maa ne bataya tha ki veer ko bohot bhook lagti hai...aur maa ne humari man pasand kheer bhi banayi hai!!.....ab kahin wo veer use bhi na khale!!"

Edited by starpisces123 - 17 years ago

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#89

hey guys sorry for keeping u waiting.....
i was not able to update as i have my exams going now...i hope u ppl will understand my situation....

Edited by starpisces123 - 17 years ago

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#90

wooohoo....update! love uuuuuuu 🤗 lool...once again...wah an update dude...lool...Veer doesnt like Ananya...lol n she dnt like him...😆😆😆...dts so cuteee... every1 nos dt Veer likes foood...lol dis Ananya is veri cheeky i must say...lol...i dnt fink she will find her kheer at da dinner table now....hmmm...i wna no wah happens nxtttttttttttt 😆....so i cnt for da nxt updte!....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update snn....tc...*hugs n kissess*🤗

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