MyFF:Tamanna , Part15 posted-- (pg45)

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: deeksha_dvs fan
wao........ nisha .it is supperb yaar.............😍😍plees continue........im waiting 4 next part.

hi deeksha
good to see u back
thanks for reading and commenting yaar
am soo happy that u liked this...
yes i will continue and will update tommorow......

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abira

@zeestr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

hi nisha

the story is superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr and very interesting👏

sweety u have done a great job 👍🏼

u r greattttttttttttttttt😃

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: abira
hi nisha
the story is superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr and very interesting👏 oh this for u 🤗

sweety u have done a great job 👍🏼 ooow am soo glad that u liked it

u r greattttttttttttttttt😃 are yaar ini badi badi tariph mat karo main aasmaan main unde lagoongi....😆😆
😆

hi abira😛
im soo happy to see u back😃

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#64

hey nisha. 🤗

Loved both the parts...dear........😳

u wrote those cutescenes between Dharam and veer so...beautifully....👏

loved the convo between DV a lot 👏

Dharam ne veer ko dara diya.....

🤣

lolz plz update soon..

coz even Dharam veer have grown now...😳😆

now time for rajkumari's entry 😛😍😆

Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Rash2cool
hey nisha. 🤗hi rashi😛
Loved both the parts...dear........😳 am glad that u liked them

u wrote those cutescenes between Dharam and veer so...beautifully....👏[🤗🤗]

loved the convo between DV a lot 👏[🤗🤗]

Dharam ne veer ko dara diya..... haan😆

🤣

lolz plz update soon.. yup will update today

coz even Dharam veer have grown now...😳😆 yup but they r still only 9 yrs....

now time for rajkumari's entry 😛😍😆 yes but now only ananya ....sia's entry will take time...

rashi this is for u🤗

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esha

@bunny007

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Posted: 17 years ago

#66

i loved it yaar do cont...

esha

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: hiri
i loved it yaar do cont...
esha

thank u esha...😃

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#68

Part5:

After 5 years…….
Two people were fighting with their swords like the biggest enemies in a war
Every one was encouraging them and also dharam…..
It was a competition between veer and vikram which guruji conducted.the one who wins will qualify to the finals and have to face dharam there

the fight was becoming very interesting and no one was able to decide about who would win…
guruji then stopped them and said: "hum aap dono ke pradarshan se bohot khush hua, rajkumar dharam aap bhi yahan aayiye aap teeno main jitne ke utsaah ko dekkar hume bohot prasannata hui hai,….isi liye hum aap teeno ko vijayta ghoshit karte hain"hearing this everyone was happy except dharam,veer and vikram as they challenged each other that the one who loose has to do what ever the winner will say…

guruji continued: "hum aur humare sare sawak kal subha hote hi ramgad gaon ki yaatra main nikal rahe hai, hum mai laotne main karib 4 ya 5 din lagsakte hain, isi liye humne soncha hai ki aap sab loog in 4 dino ke liye apne mehal ho aayeye"
and then guruji and all others leaves from there
but there were three people still standing….
Vikram: "aaj phir tum dono humse bach gaye"
Veer says with a angry face: "ya shayad tum?"
Dharam: "hume yakeen tha ki aaj phir aysa hi kuch hoga"
Veer: "maine kya kuch nahi soncha tha….."
Vikram starts laughing and says: "yehi na tum mujhe maroge….ya phir tum mujse kabhi jeet paaoge…."
Veer: "shayad tum bhool gaye vikram ki tum veer se baat karrahe ho.."
Veer and vikram come closer with lot of anger…
dharam stops veer and says"vikram tum humdono se kabhi nahi jeet sakte ye baat tum achchi tarah se samaj lo...kyun ki jab tak dharamveer saat hai jeet humesha unhi ki hogi"
Vikram: "wo bhi dekhlenge dharam" and then vikram leaves from there…
Dharam: "chalo veer ab hum bhi chalte hain, mehel ke liye nikalna hai"
Dharamveer leaves from there
And then all the rajkumars start their journey to their respective mehal….

On the way veer was very silent and dharam was very deep in his thoughts and was smiling…
Veer noticed this and asks: "kya sonch rahe ho dharam?"
Dharam: "yehi ke ghar par sab kaise honge??..aur hum itne saal baad mehel ja rahe hain aur wo bhi bina bataye…wo sab to chonk jayenge….aur ananya wo bhi ab 5 saal ki hogayi hogi"
Veer: "mehel main to saab teek hi honge, aur rahi baat humare achanak se jaaneki to phir tum chinta mat karo…"
Dharam : "kyun???"
Veer: "maine kalhi sandesh bhaj diya tha…"
Dharam: "kya?? Lekin tumhe kal kaise pata chala??? Guruji ne to hum sab ko aaj bataya hai na?"
Veer: "haan!! Lekin kal humne unhe apne sawak se baath karte hua sunliya tha…"
Dharam: "to tumne hume kyun nahi bataya ,aur mehel sandesh bhejne ki kya zarurat thi"
Veer : "kyun"
Dharam: "chodo ye sab tumhari samaj ke baahar hai…."he was interrupted by a small girl how was selling toys "rajkumarji aapko khilone chaliye kya ?"
Seeing that girl he remembers ananya and says "haan, hume wo gudiya chahiye"
veer:"dharam ye tumhe kya hogaya hai .....tum ab gudiyoon se kheloge??"and laughs
dharam: "veerrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!....ab bas bhi karo"
The girl gives him that toy and dharam pays money for it….and starts smiling seeing that gudiya…
Seeing this Veer also smiles and asks : "ye ananya ke liye haina?"
Dharam: "haan" dharam keeps that toy inside a bag which he is carrying
And then they continued there journey and finally reached mehal…

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#69

👏👏👏wooohoo...DV finally on da way home...i wonder wah suprises are waiting for them der....once again...fab update..fnx Nishi...🤗🤗🤗mwah...cnt wait for ur nxt update now..hehe🤗🤗🤗

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Megha

@meghaparti

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#70

oh wow...lovely what a nice update cant wait for the next part where DV & ananya will face each other I hope she is very cute & veer gets jealous of ananya by dharam giving her more attention than him

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