MyFF:Tamanna , Part15 posted-- (pg45)

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Kiran Baidya

@kiru_maau

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

very sweet update.i love ur ananya. she is just so cute.

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: kiran_baidya
very sweet update.i love ur ananya. she is just so cute.

thank u🤗
yes ananya is sooo cute..
thankx for commenting kiran...

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Subha

@Life_Is_Dutiful

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+ 40

Posted: 17 years ago

#133

I just loved ur last update.So now there will be a sword fight btw veer and ananya.
Veer ananya fight was cute,lagta hai inki taqdeer mein ek doosre se jhagadna hi likha hai,serial mein bhi aur sabke fics mein bhi. 😆
Plz continue.

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: subha2601
I just loved ur last update.So now there will be a sword fight btw veer and ananya. yes but for that ananya has to learn how to fight first😆
Veer ananya fight was cute,lagta hai inki taqdeer mein ek doosre se jhagadna hi likha hai,serial mein bhi aur sabke fics mein bhi. 😆 sach kaha lekin ye dono ladte jhagadte hi achcha lagte hai...😆
Plz continue.

am soo glad that u liked it
thankx for reading and commenting...

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seema

@heaven princess

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

HEyy... long long long commetn will be coming soon

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#136

hi nisha,tis is my 1st reply 2 u,i hve no wrds 2 describe ur fanfic,tamanna,its beautifully wriiten wid proper mix of feel n emotion,luvd the 4yr old dv,their masti while goin 2 ashram n learng the horse ridg n aftr 5 yrsthe sword fight challenge,ur stry is completly diff,lovd dv sweet n cute moments!veen n annaya sweet nokhjhok is ,the way veern annaya fight 4 the kheer,n ananyas determination 2 learn the swordfight,dharams luv 4 his darlg sistr,all in all so beautifully xpressed n written!i lovd it n pls update soon!

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: sugarpie_26
hi nisha,tis is my 1st reply 2 u,i hve no wrds 2 describe ur fanfic,tamanna,its beautifully wriiten wid proper mix of feel n emotion thanks the complement 🤗,luvd the 4yr old dv,their masti while goin 2 ashram n learng the horse ridg n aftr 5 yrsthe sword fight challenge,ur stry is completly diff,yes i tried to do it diff and am gld that u liked it lovd dv sweet n cute moments!veen n annaya sweet nokhjhok is ,the way veern annaya fight 4 the kheer,n ananyas determination 2 learn the swordfight,dharams luv 4 his darlg sistr,all in all so beautifully xpressed n written!i lovd it n pls update soon! yes i will update it today

hi mehran😛
thanks for reading and commenting dear.....🤗
im soo glad that u liked it😃

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#138

recap:all the three doing abyas and ananya left to play with her friends...

Part 8:"A lesson to veer"

In the abyas room:
maharaj aryawardan saw dv and agni doing abhyas and went near them
seeing maharaj all the three stoped doing abyaas and went near maharaj and took his ashirwad

maharaj smiled and said: "hum tum teeno ko istarh dekhkar mahein bohot khushi horahi…" he loked here and there and said" ye ananya kahan hai?...subha se dekhai nahi derahi?"

dharma: " je wo pitaji ananya ki.." agni interrupted dharma from saying anything "ji maharaj wo yahin kahin hongi"
dharam veer got confused why agni lied….and looked at him with a confused face…agni also saw them and closed his eyes and nodded his head as a signal of belief...

maharaj smiled and said: " achcha teek hai, waise aaj hum chahte hai ki aap sab humare saat rajdarbar main baiteen, aur wahan par kary(tasks) kayse karte hai wo dekhiye….saat main ye bhi jaane ki raajya kase chalate hai"

all three of them noded there heads… but veer was not willing to go …
dharam : "ji pitaji aap chaliye, humsab tayyar hokar ate hai"
maharaj: "teek hai" and moved on

dharma turned to agni and asked: "agni bhayya aap ne pitaji se jhoot kyun kaha, ke ananya yahin kahin hai?? Aur aap ne mujhe bhi roka kuch kehne se?"
agni : "baat ye hai ki ananya ke jo do saheliyan hai wo dono asal mai shramik hain!!, aur tum to jaante ho ke hum main se kisi ko bhi shramik se baat karne ya unki basti main jane ke liye ijazat nahi hai . Agar maharaj ko pata chaljata ke ananya ke do dost hai aur wo bhi shramik ,to wo ananya se bohot naraz hojate…"
dharma: "par ananya un shramiko ki basti main kaise gayi?…aur usne undono se dosti kab aur kaise ki?"
agni : "ek baar wahan par ek mela laga tha ,to ananya ne mujhse zid ki ke wahan chalet hai,maine use mana kardiya…lekin tumto jante hona ke wo kitni ziddi hai….aur hum wahan us mela main chale gaye…wahin par uski mulakaat indo ladkiyoon se hogayi….aur tabse lekar aaj tak wo dono yaha par aajate hai sirf ananya se milne, aur ananya ne rani maa se unke yahaan ane ki ijazat leli"

continuing this conversation they started moving towards their rooms…..

veer: "lekin bhayya ye to batao ke hume wahan jane ki ijazat kyun nahi hai?"
agni: "tum to jante ho ke baghi shramik hum aryawarthon ko nuksaan puhchane ka koi bhi mauka nahi chodte…isi leye maharaj ne ye hukum diya hai ke jab tak hum 15 saal ke nahi hojate tab tak hum un shramiko ke bech nahi ja sakte…"
they reached their rooms and agni: "ab chalo bohot bateen hogayi...jaldi se tayyar hojao ,maharaj humsab ki prateeksha karrahe honge.."

all of them got ready…..

dharam came to veer's room to take veer with him…veer was sitting on his bed silently...

dharam: "veer kya hua chalna nahi hai kya??"
Veer: "nahi"
Dharma : "kya?"
Veer: "haan dharma humein wahan nahi aana chahte"
Dharma: "par kyun veer?"
Veer: "tumto jante hona ki mujhe ye rajya paat ki baatain samajmai nahi aati….aur waise bhi aaj mera man bhi nahi karraha…chalo na kahin bahar chalet hai ya phir koi khel khelte hai"
Dharma: "nahi veer agar aaj hum wahan nahi gaya to pitaji hume bohot datenge…tum nahi aana chahte to na sahi par hume jana hoga…"
Dharma was just about to leave and swathi entered veer's room
Swathi: "kya hua dharma? Kahan jaraheho?"
Dharma turned to veer and said : "maa ab aap hi ise samjhaiye …ye to humari koi bhi baat nahi manta" and saying this dharma left the room with a upset mood...

Veer got up from his bed and moved towards the window and was standing there…in a very upset and dull mood…
Swathi also moved near him keept her hand on veer's shoulder and with a concerned face asked him: "kya hua veer, ye dharma kya kehraha tha? aur tum itne udas kyun hoo??"
Veer kept him head down and started looking here and there but not in swathi's eyes and said: "wo kuch nahi mamiji , dharam maharaj ke saat raaj darbaar main jaa raha hai…wo maharaj ne hum sab ko wahan bulaya tha…lekin mera man nahi tha to maine dharma ko ane se mana kardiya aur wo mujse pata nahi kyun naaraz hogaya…"

Swathi observed veer's wet eyes so to chear him up she said: " tumhe pata hai veer jab tum yahan nahi the to hum aur nivriti tum dono ko kitni yaad karte the"

Veer smiles by hereing this and she continues "tumdono bachpan main kitni sharartain karte the! Har waqt mehel main kuch na kuch !!!"and she smiles remembering the past

She took veer's hand in her hand and took him to bed and both sat on it and continued "veer beta tum jante hona ke tumhari maa par kitna sara booj hai…unpar sari sumaina rajya ki zimmedari hai, ab tum samajdaar ho chuke ho tumhe abhi se ye rajya pat ke baare main janna chahiye,kyun ki age chalkar jab tum sumaina ke maharaj banoge tab tumhe apna rajya chalane main asani hogi"
Veer calmly litens to her with a deep thought…

A sainik came there and said " rajkumar veer aap se milne koi aaya hai"
Veer: "humare liye?? Achcha teek hai, tum chalo hum ate hai"
swathi: "veer ab tum jao aur haan humne tumse jo bhi kaha hai uspar dhyan dena....teek hai" and she smiled
veer :"ji mamiji" and veer hugged her and leaved that place

Veer went to the garden of the palace where a girl was waiting for him…

precap: veer caught in ananya's trap...

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#139

wooow...Agni is such a nice bro! Veer upset...oh dear! dt too cos of Dharam...hmmm...reali like Swati's dia's to Veer....she tkes care of him like his mum n not mamji...so cute! hehe im xcitd abt ur precap once again mwah xxx