Rimzhim rimzhim bheegi bheegi rhoot mein……….5 pg3

Rimzhim rimzhim bheegi bheegi rhoot mein???.Rimzhim rimzhim bheegi bheegi rhoot mein???.

I don?t know the further lyrics bt that?s not rqd bcoz I m eating

pani puri from a roadside thela under shed bcoz its raining cats and dog beats singing when every1 around is searching for cotton(to stuff in their ears).

?u stupid, jerk?????.?

Srry normally I don?t use such language bt how can one resist when ur greatest enemy zoomed in his bike meanwhile spraying ur fav pink dress wid dirty water.

Normally I would not mind bt wid my pink dress getting spoilt I can?t resist, and come to think of it only my pani puri saved him bcoz I cannot resist that either.

I m a forgetful species m I not, I didn?t even introduce myself.

Well I m me that?s obvious, panchi.

That?s me as the name suggest I love my freedom and hate chauvinists and that the name does not suggest.

As I wrote pink is fav colour and pani puri my fav dish(if we can call it one) and I value food more than clothes.

And that stupid jerk well that?s the limit I can go when saying something bad or in this case writing it so u can guess was my once best friend now greatest enemy raj.

Y that?s simple he follows his name too and thinks he is the ruler of the world and don?t miss any chance to push me down.

Well come to think of it that?s not tough I m always slipping either on the floor or on the road or on the??. well u name the place.

So the conclusion is its difficult to find me steady.

And one more bad habit I keep on talking.

So where were we yes raj, the typical chauvinist male, and I don?t understand y he interferes in everything.

I mean I never pester him abt his numerous gfs so y does he irritates me abt my one and only bf. He has the audacity to call him bhondu(stupid).

Before my bf came along everything was right he supported me in everything now he is my opponent in anything and everything.

He competes wid me well that?s gud it inspires me to work harder bt even in eating pani puri that?s the limit y bring my sweet pani puri in it.

And here he comes again???????

nxt tomorrow

thanx for the banner richa

Hey hi ppl

This is my first attempt to write anything story based

So plz plz comment a lot so that I can know if I m boring😲 or I m blabbering😆(that i do often) too much or I m good😉.

Well I forgot this story is not based on any of the soaps b'coz they r crying oriented and I hate it most so no glycerine induced tears here😛😛😛.

And please bear wid my large no of buts😃.

The story will be unexpected as I m even I cannot tell what turn it will take bt I promise no compromise shaadis in it.

And the nxt post will be at random b'coz my coll have started plus my mba classes sorry for that bt I will post the date at which I will update below the first piece of my work😉.

anshu

hey hi

Hey Anshu. I like the intro and concept. May be people want more familiar characters. You can always write a happy-go-lucky story with familiar characters like AR or AK. Don't write any tearful parts if u don't want to but continue as u have a good style and good concept.

Great start Anshu! Your title was very attractive, and the first chapter was simply cute! Please do give it a try, share a few more chapters at least? I'd really like to read more. 😳

Originally posted by: bheegi

Hey Anshu. I like the intro and concept. May be people want more familiar characters. You can always write a happy-go-lucky story with familiar characters like AR or AK. Don't write any tearful parts if u don't want to but continue as u have a good style and good concept.

Originally posted by: Dark Love

Great start Anshu! Your title was very attractive, and the first chapter was simply cute! Please do give it a try, share a few more chapters at least? I'd really like to read more. 😳

hey just saw the ff it is really good so far good intro post soon

Originally posted by: superstar15

hey just saw the ff it is really good so far good intro post soon