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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 23:-

"Aap theek to hain na……..mera matlab gun shot k baad mai to dar hi gayi thi ki kahin aap………….." she was unable to complete.

Vyom came close to her, "Mujhe kya?"

"Vo mai ………kahin aap ko kuch hua to nahi?" she asked looking in his eyes.

"Mujhe hua hai na bahut badi bimari jis ka dava bus aap k paas hai." He came more close to her.

"Mere paas kaun se dawa hai?" she became surprised.

"Nahi jaanti aap?" he was so close to her itna ki she was almost feeling his breath on her face.

"Mujhe kaise pata chalega?" she replied innocently.

"Jaanti ho Naina mujhe ab tak jo lagta tha ki bus mai feel karta hoon vo baat ab baaki k log bhi feel karne lage hain mere aur tumhare baare me." He said looking in her eyes.

"Kaun si baat mai samjhi nahi." She said again.

"Baat ye hai ki mujhe lagta hai ki mai………….." poori hone se pehle hi Huda aa pahucha vahan.

"Phoolan tu yahan………….?" He asked and when he saw them with each other he understood.

"Haan Huda bus aa rahi hoon mai." She said n was about to leave when Vyom caught hold of her wrist.

"Meri baat abhi poori nahi hue hai par mai ye jaanta hoon ki mai jo kehna chahta hoon vo tum jaanti ho pehle se hi." And he left her hand.

Naina was shocked how can some one do this to her? Raj ki jagah lene ki koi koshish bhi kaise kar sakta hai? Sab jaante hain ki Naina k liye Raj kya maayne rakhta hai? Kabhi kya Naina kisi aur ko dekh sakti hai Raj ki jagah? 'Nahiiiiiiiiiiii mai aisa nahi kar sakti vo mera pyaar the aur pyaar bus ek baar kiya jaata hai na, baar baar to nahi ho sakta na.'

"Kya soch rahi hai Phoolan?" Huda asked.

"Kuch nahi Huda tu ready ho gaya?" she asked him trying to ignore the question he asked.

"Mujh se abhi bhi baatein chipati hai na?" he asked with a sad face.

"Nahi Huda aisa kuch nahi hai par mujhe abhi ready hona hai mai tujh se baad me baat karti hoon is bare me." Naina said n left immedieatly.

"Tu kuch bhi keh le ya kar le Phoolan par tera Huda jaanta hai tujhe ki Vyom ko le kar pareshaan hai tu." Huda sighed.

Later all were dressed in their best outfits and all the rituals started for baarat to go. Yudi was groom so naturally he was looking awesome.

So as Ali, Karan n Huda.Gals were dressed with their heavy outfits and make up expect Naina she was simple but looking gorgeous and Vyom was unable to take his eyes off from him and as I told Vyom to hai hi best na.

Karan ne Naina ko dekha aur phir Vyom ko, "Hmm mujhe lagta hai dono taraf hai aag barbar lagi hue."

"Kya matlab hai tera?" Vyom asked him.

"Dekh maine aaj tak bahut saari films dekhi hain aur sab ko dekh kar mujhe ye lagta hai ki shaadi ka mahole best hota hai propose karne k liye kyoun?" Karan teased him.

"Kis ko propose aur baat kis ki kar raha hai tu mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai?" Vyom asked with confusion.

Naina has wore a simple saari of this type.

Ye rahe Vyom jee

This was Neelu's dress.

Kuch aise dress hai humari Shreya madam ki.

Karan

Ali

Pooja

Huda

N last but not least Alekh

SO the barat started and the guys got busy soon in dance and masti.Yudi was impatient to see his Shalu today.

When they reached there they will be welcomed by Shalu's mom and she completed formal ritual of welcoming the groom and soon he was brought to the stage for varmaala.

His eyes were waiting impatiently for Shalu. Soon his wait got over and she was brought by her beautiful sis Anvesha and a group of gals. Yudi n Huda was mesmerized by their beauty and they got bold.

Anvesha has wore this dress.

Shalu's dress.

"Kahan kho gaye Yudi bhai aap?" Ali asked him waving his hands in front of him.

"Vo……….ummmmm………mai kahan khoya hoon." He said.

"Vahi to hum sab pooch rahe hain dood." Karan said teasing him dreamily.

"Tum sab bhi na yaar bus karo." Yudi said blushing.

"Oye hoye apna chikne ko sharmana bhi aata hai, bus tu ek kaam karna apna ye sharmaane vaala scene tu wedding night me mat revise kar daalna." Alekh teased him.

"Bus bus ab mat pareshaan karo na mere bhai ko." Neelu said n Shalu was finally on the stage.


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Posted: 15 years ago

superb update. now vyom tell his feelings to naina but this huda ,oh iye humesha ise time mein hi aajata hain,

Naina ka confusion bhi sahi hain.
lovely part.loved it.
continue soon dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice ud Mahak,finally Vyom ne Naina ko nearly-propose kar hi di.par Naina to abhi bhi confused hai apne feelings ko lekar.😕

waise confuse to mai bhi hu ki kya Raj aur Vyom ek hi hai ya nahi😕😕jab bhi mai sochthi hu ki ye hamara Raj hai tum aisa kuch likh deti ho ki lagtha hai ye Vyom Raj nahi hai.kuch to hint do na yaar ki ye dono ek hai ya nahi, plzzzzzzzzzz.

aur shaadi ka atmosphere bhi bohut accha tha,sab log bas becchare Yudi ke peeche hi pad gaye😉

waiting for more.................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi vertika........how r u?
the ud was really nice..
vyom ne to naina ko propose kar hi diya tha par huda ne thoda kaam kharab diya...but the scene was really good.....naina ki confusion bhi theek hai....she loves raj alot........karan ne vyom ko jo comment pass kiya....that was really nice....
aur sab ka yudi ka chedhna was just awesome....
plz update soon
luv preet
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awe...that was a wonderful part....and I need not say Vyom was the best part in that...hehe. I liked the way he talked wid Naina....and waise to Naina ki confusion sahi hai....but....umm...lets c yaar....ye Vyom akhir hai kaun....phir baatein hogi iss bare me...hehe. Filhaal to main kahungi....the dresses were beautiful n Aalekh's teasing was quite surprisingly interesting....hehe. Pls continue soon dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Vertika
How r u???
Update was really gud...
Vyom ne na keh kar bhi bahut kuch keh diya..Naina was so shocked to see this change in him..He is simply mesimerized by her..
I think God has plannned something for dem..😛
Naina loves Raj n no1 can take his place.
"Sometimes at night,
when I lay down to sleep,
I embrace myself,
I start to think...
Then I imagine
that you lie beside me...
hugs and kisses
all over my body.
I wish you
could really be here,
just to whisper,
"I love you," in my ear.
I would turn around and say,
"I love you, too."
But will it ever be true?
So I turn around
and I wonder some more,
still wanting your embrace,
so I close my eyes and picture your face...
I fall asleep dreaming of you.
In my dream it seems so true.
It's as if I can really feel
your kisses against my lips...
Then my eyes pop open
and you're nowhere to be seen,
And I feel so lonely
once AGAIN!"
Huda really knows wat Naina is thinking...He knows dat she can never b his..
All the dresses were too beautiful..😛
Karan is teasing Vyom so much but atleast utna nahin jitna Alekh tease kar raha hai Yudi ko.😉😳
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina was scared for Vyom and is asking him if he is alright!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vyom was hinting at his feelings for her and about to confess his love to her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Huda wahan aa jaata hai aur baat adhuri reh jaati hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yeh Huda hamesha unke beech aa jaata hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Vyom phir bhi apni baat samjha deta hai yeh keh kar ke jo woh kehna chahta hai woh Naina jaanti hai pehle se hi!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is shocked aur uska confusion bhi sahi hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina is right that she has only loved Raj aur Raj ki jagah koi nahi le sakta!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pyaar toh ek baar hi kiya jaata hai, baar baar toh nahi ho sakta na!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda realised ke Naina Vyom ko leke pareshaan hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

All the outfits were beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina was looking gorgeous and Vyom was unable to take his eyes off her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Karan is teasing Vyom and telling him to propose kyunki shaadi ka atmosphere best hota hai propose karne ke liye!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi se toh intezzar hi nahi ho raha and finally Shalu was brought by Anvesha and a group of girls!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi and Huda are mesmerized by their beauty!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Aalekh is teasing Yudi aur usne sahi kaha ke wedding night pe Yudi ish sharmane waale scene ka repeat telecast ka kar de!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Not fair...!!!


You update like once a month and that too sooo short...?????


Anyways...tumhare updates itne ache hote hai, isliya tumhe maaf kiya...!!!

Vyom ne keh hi diya tha....!!! Naina ke saath saath humari bhi confusion badhti jaa rahi hai...!!!!

Aalekh's last comment was superb...!!!

Pleaseeee update soon...!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part vertika.
finally finally vyom ne Naina ko propose kar hi diya😛m sooooooo happy BUT ye but hamesha bich aa jata hai.😕jo confusion Naina ki hai vo hamari bhi hai to plzzz dear bata de ke vyom n Raj ek hi hai.
waiting for next part.......n the ceremany was superb.poor Yudi.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Vertika!!

The UD was superrrrrb !!! 👏 👏 👏
par bahoooooooooooooooooottttt chota tha yaar !
Yeh kya mujhe laga abhi start hua hai, par usse pehle khatam bhi hogaya!
Khair...yeh itna beautiful tha ki tumhe maaf kardiya!
Vyom and Naina convo was ekdam mast( Assuming that Vyom is... ahem ahem...😆)
Par yeh Huda as usual beechmein agaya aur sab satyanash...baat bhi poori nahi hui!
But Naina is right, Raj ki jagah koi nahi le sakta.
everyone's attire was nice....
and last ka Aalekh ka teasing was...well surprising but cool!
Ab yeh Vyom ki mystery bahot badhti ja rahi hai yaar...isse clear kardo.
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago

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