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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIII HOW R U DEAR?

Mai theek hoon tussi batao. 😊
AND SORRY FOR LATE REPLY DEAR.
no problem.😃 😃😃😃
UR UD WAS MINDBLOWING,AWSOME,FANTASTIC
thanks😃
KAB HOGI 'RAJ' KI ENTRY
MISSING HIM
are kitna pareshaan ho sab k sab Raj k liye.😉
PAR NAINA KYUN HAS RAHI THI.
abhi pata chal jaayega.😛
ANYWAYS UD WAS TOO GOOD.
thanks dear.😊
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
LOVE DEEP.

thank u so much Deep for comment.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR KAISI HO?

THE UD WAS AS USUAL TOO GOOD SWEETY,
I LIKED IT VERY MUCH,
BY THE WAY WHY NAINA WAS LAUGHING?
AUR HAAN HUMARA RAJ KAB ENTRY LE RAHA HAI?
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HIM.
ALL THE BEST FOR THE NEXT PART DEAR.
WITH LOTS OF LOVE,
AND GOOD WISHES,
PRITI.

Hello Preeti kaise ho mai to theek hoon.😃 Yaar ek baat kehni thi ki ye suspense aur action thriller hai saath me RN ka lots of romance bhi.😉 So thoda intezaar to karna padega na.😕 thanks for reply.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Here's next part friends:-
Karan was lost in her smile. Kyounki aunty se Raj aur Naveen k bare me pata chala tha us ko aur aisa lag raha tha ki Naina aaj bahut dino baad hassi hai.

"Oye hello mai yahan aise khada hoon aur aap ko itni hassi aa rahi hai." Karan complained.

"Hi ............." still she was laughing.

"Tu ruk mai batata hoon tujhe." Karan ran towards her n she also started running n soon Tom n Jerry fight started.

Finally after 10 minutes they both stopped. Naina was smiling now.

"I missed u a lot yaar." Karan said Naina n hugged her tightly.

"Me too Karan." She too hugged him back. Aaj bahut dino baad Naina ko lag raha tha ki koi apna mil gaya hai us ko aur us k aas paas koi apna hai.

Karan detached him soon from her n said, "Apni haalat dekho kisi sadak par bheekh maangne waali lag rahi ho."

"Kya?????????????" she cried n saw her self in mirror.

Ab Naina ko samajh aaya ki Karan ne us ko hug kyoun kiya tha. Naina ne paas rakha ek danda uthaya aur daudane lagi Karan ko. Naina peeche Karan aage vow! kya scene tha. Dono daute daute garden me pauch gaye.

Tabhi Naina ka pair garden ki patthar me fussa aur Naina girne hi waali thi ki kisi ne us ko thaam liya apni bahon me.

"Naina.................." Karan screamed.

Naina saw the face of the stranger who held her hand firmly. She got the shock of her life after seeing the face of him. She was in an utter shock so she was not finding words.

The guy looks like his Rajveer sir. She touched his face with her fingers. She was unable to believe that his love is safe n he is in front of her. She held his both hands in her hands n hugged him.

Jaane wafa ho kar bekaraar,

Barson kiya maine intezzar;

Par kabhi tune nahi ye sab kaha,

Ja ab kahaaaaaaaaaaaaa;

Dil bebasi me chup k rota hai,

Kya karoon haiye kuch kuch hota hai;-2

(Guys imagine SKR n Kajol?s scene in K2H2 when they meet after 8 long years.)

"Kahan the aap , kahan the? Aap ne ek baar bhi nahi socha mai aap k bagair kaise zinda reh paaongi . Ek pal aisa nahi tha jab maine aap ko yaad na kiya ho. Ek din me kitni baar saans leti thi ye to nahi pata haan par ye jarror pata hai ki aap ko kitni baar yaad karti thi. Bina kuch kahe chale gaye aap na. Ek baar mud k bhi nahi dekha ki mai zinda hoon ya mar gayi hoon. Aap itne selfish kaise ho gaye? Mere bare me ek baar bhi nahi socha na aap ne. Aap ko pata hai na mai aap k bina bilkul nahi reh sakti hoon. Fir aapne waada bhi kiya tha ki humesha saath rahenge to chod kar kyoun gaye aap mujhe boliye............boliye." she said all in a single breath n hugged him tightly with full force. She clutched his collar strongly and nearly she was shaking him.

Karan was puzzled; he was unable to find out that what?s going on. Soon her (Naina's) parents came out n saw the guy who was absolutely like Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. They were stunned too.

"Naina ..Naina... kya hua tujhe aur..............." Karan was left incomplete when Mr. Ahluwalia indicated him to be quite.

Karan stopped but he was shocked. Mr. and Mrs. Ahluwalia brought Karan with him n told each and everything with detail to him n also show him Rajveer's photo. Naina ki ye kahani sun kar Karan ki aakhon me aansoon bhar aaye. He was quite because he doesn't know what to say.

Here in the garden Naina was still questioning the guy. He was listening him quietly. After 20 minutes Mr. n Mrs. Ahluwalia came there with Karan .

"Naina........" Karan called her softly.

"Dekho na Karan sir ko mai in ko daat rahi hoon aur ye kuch bhi nahi bol rahe hain." She said in complaining tone.

The guy smiled. Karan too smiled at her such childish behavior.

"Naina ye tumhare Rajveer sir nahi hai. Ye mera dost hai is ka naam Vyom Rathode hai. Ye mere saath yahan aaya hai kuch dino k liye." Karan tried to tell her.

"Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta tum jhooth bol rahe ho. Ye mere Rajveer sir hi hain."

?Nahi Naina ye sach ke raha hai ye tere sir nahi hain Vyom Rathode hi hai.? Her parents too tried to calm her down.

"Nahi papa aap nahi jaante ye jhooth bol rahe hain mai apne sir ko acchi tarah pehchaanti hoon." She again quarried.

Now Vyom said, " Ye dekhiye mera paasport n visa. Ye mere bank debit card." He showed her each n every possible proof to prove him Vyom Rathod.

" Yaar accha ye bata maine tujhe Airport par chod diya tha aur address diya tha. Par mai fir bhi tujh se pehle aa gaya jab ki tu car se aaya.?" Karan commented on Vyom.

Vyom ka dhyana Karan ki baton par nahi tha na hi Naina ka dhyana tha Karan ki baton par.

"Oye mai kuch pooch raha hoon tere se?? Karan asked again.

Vyom couldn't ignore some type of different feelings in her eyes. Pata nahi kya tha us ladki me jo us ko bus dekhte rehne ko man karta tha.

Here Naina was dumbstruck that how can she touch some one like that without knowing who is he. Kaise vo aise soch sakti hai ki koi bhi Rajveer ban k aise aa jaayega jab ki vo jaanti hai ki us ki aankhon k saamne hi Rajveer ki jeep jal k khaii me gir gayi thi. Raj ka namo nishaan nahi mila tha. Phir jo hua it was so painful for Karan specially. Naina ran away in her room crying hard.

main taan jiyaan...

na maraan.....

haye ve, dass main ki karaan........

dil jude bina hi tutt gaye

hathh mile bina hi chutt gaye

ki likhe ne lekh kismat ne

baar baar ronn akhiyaan

tainu jo naa vekh sakiyaan

kho leya hai yaar khud rabb ne

kattaan main kiven din

teri saun tere bin

main taan jiyaan na maraan

chann se jo toote koi sapna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona lage

koi rahe na jab apna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona -

hai to? ye kyun hota hai?

jab ye dil rota hai?

koi sisak sisak ke hawayein jag soona lage

chann se jo toote koi sapna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona lage

koi rahe na jab apna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona lage re....

soona laage....

roothi roothi... saari raatein........

pheeke pheeke.... saare din..

viraani si viraani hai

tanhai si tanhai hai

aur ek hum hainnnnnnn pyaar k bin

palchin

chann se jo toote koi sapna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona lage

koi rahe na jab apna

jag soona soona lage

jag soona soona -

hai to.......ye kyun hota hai...........

jab ye dil rota hai.......

koi sisak sisak ke hawayein jag soona lage

She was crying n her crying knows no boundation.

To bataiyega jaroor ki kaisa tha update.

waiting for replies.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
splendid!!!!!!it was too good........
very emotional too.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
how could u do this to Naina yaar so bad
i hope vo Raj hi ho
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
HIIIIIIIIIIII DEAR HOPE U R WELL
AND NOW ABT THE UD WAS
SUPERB,MINDBLOWING,TOOGOOD,FANTASTIC,AWSOME DEAR
I MUST TELL U R A VERY GOOD WRITER
I HOPE KI JALDI HI RAJ ENTRY MAARE HERO MAAFIC
I AM FEELING VERY BAD FOR NAINA
ANYWAYS WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
PLEASE IS BAAR JALDI UD KARNA
LOVE DEEP.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
superb👏.cont soon.........
Edited by *Rajeevian* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
I think Vyom is Rajveer....Why does he always do dat to Naina???????????/
update was just too emotional
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
wow amazing....what a twist!...now i am very eager to know is vyom rhe real rajveer..i feel he is rajveer otherwise why will naina would have recognized him instantly......now i am waiting for next part..update soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
tat was realy mindblowin,super i'm finger crossed realy,

awesum dear,so Vyom rathod again naina track,gr8 loved,

RN rockin,

awesum n gr8 dear,

weldun,

contn,

All the best 4 the next aprt,

Aarthi

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