Chahat link new thread posted on pg. 154 - Page 9

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hi!!dear!!
A great update
Very interesting.....
hmmmm.even I feel that Vyom is Raj...
but will be waiting for the next update.
too good.😊
take care.



love
Riya.

Originally posted by: george eliot

tune dukhi kar diya :( kitna emotional update tha yaar, sooooooooooooooooo touching, you portrayed Naina's emotions soo well. i could almost imagine the scenes...poor her 😭

mera dil kehta hai, woh Vyom nehi apna Rajveer Sir hi hai...mujhse Naina ki dukh dekhi nehi jaati, tu jaldi se Vyom ko Rajveer banam ya fir asli Rajveer ko dhundhke la

it's an amazing update....

love ur writing

asur issbaar jaldi update dena pls

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR VERY-VERY NICE UD DEAR, I JUST LOVED IT. I HOPE VYOM IS RAJ. AWESOOOOOOOOOOME UD DEAR, WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hi yaar

SUPERB update.....very emotional....the way you have written about Naina's reaction and her emotions when she sees vyom ...... simply toooooooo good.

But yaar yeh to bada jhatke wala twist hai....i hope that Vyom is the Real Rajveer and that he comes out with this truth to Naina very soon.

Waiting eagerly for your next update.

Sorry guys mai bahut late hoon par mujhe datiyega mat ye meri city ka stupid net.

Ye raha next part:-

Ruthi-2 saari raatein,

Fike-2 saare din;

Becahini si virnai hai,

Virani si tanhai hai;

Au eek hum hai pyaar k din,

Mere dil;

Chan se jo tute koi sapna,

Jag soona -2 lage;

Koi rahe na jab apna jag suna-2 laage,

Jag suna suna laage re''''.;

He ro ye kyoun hota hai,

Jab ye dil rota hai;

Roye sisak-2 k hawayein jag soona lage;

It was so painful for her to have some one exactly like him. Vahi chehra, vahi aankhein, vahi hoth. Vahi personality sab kuch bilkul Rajveer jaisa hi tha. Dil mane ko nahi taiyaar tha ki ye Vyom Rathode hai aur dimaag us k dikhaye hue proofs ki taraf jaa k keh raha tha ki nahi vo Rajveer nahi hai.

"Hey bhagwaan mai kya karoo? Tum hi koi raasta dikhao pls." she pleaded.

Kuch der tak Naina wahi apne bistar par khamosh padi rahi, ansoon bhi nahi nikal rahe the us ki aankhon se. Kehte hain na ek had k baad aansoon bhi khatam ho jaate hain. Aisa hi kuch Naina k bhi saath ho raha tha. Her both eyes were swollen because of crying. Some one knocked the door of her room.

She got up n opened it. Karan was there. Karan ki aankhon me Naina ka dard dikh raha tha par Karan bhi jaanta tha ki is tarah se vo Naina ko theek nahi kar paayega to us ne bola.

"Mujhe lagta hai ki agar is get up me tum bahar jaogi to Ram Leela waale tum ko jarror apne natak me Shuprakha ya Kaikeyika role de denge." Karan said with a smile.

"Haan aur tum ko Kumbhkaran ka role denge; dekho tumhare naam me Karan bhi aata hai." Naina said smiling back.

"Chalo kam se kam Kumbhkaran rota to nahi tha na tumhare jaise. Nahi mujhe lagta hai ki tum Sita k role k liye jyada perfect ho kyoun?" He taunted which made Naina sad.

"Hey '..hey mera aisa koi matlab nahi tha . Pls. ''pls''''.pls'''. don't start it again yaar." Karan said.

"Mai kuch nahi start karne jaa rahi hoon samjhe tum." She said n paused, "Karan vo ''''.tumhara dost kya soch raha hoga mere bare me?" Naina was so tensed about what she did.

"Come on relax; bade-2 desho mai aise choti-2 baatein hoti rehti hain." Karan said in SRK's style.

"Oho don't be copy cat. U can never be like SRK." Naina said laughing.

"Yeah really; because I am better than him." He said with proud in his voice.

"Shakal bhi dekhi hai kabhi apni, aaine me." Naina commented.

"Roj din me kai baar dekhta hoon."Karan said with a grin on his face.

"Tab bhi itna over confidence kamala hai." Naina said n laughed.

"Naina ki bacchi ruk abhi batata hoon tujhe ki kis ko over confidence hai." He started chasing her.

She ran in her room n than in corridor n she bumps again with Vyom. He smiled at her but Naina frowned. She was feeling his warm breath on her face, which was making her restless.

Naina ne badi mushkil se kaha, "I am really sorry for what I did before some time."

"It's okay par aap kis k bare me baat kar rahi hain abhi jo kiya ya kuch der pehle lawn me jo hua us k liye?" Vyom asked naughtily.

"Vo lawn waali baat k liye''.. Maine aap ko apne Rajveer sir samajh liya." She said further.

"It's ok . Vaise bhi ladkiyon ka is tarah milna mujhe bura nahi lagta hai." Vyom said.

"Kya?" Naina confused n thought 'Mere Rajveer sir to aisa kabhi bol hi nahi sakte the. Sach me bus is ki shakal hai vaise ye sir nahi ho sakta.'

"Mai to bus aise hi keh raha tha.Vaise aap kahan kho gayi?" he asked n waved his hands in front of her eyes.

"Vo mai'.bus kuch nahi," she was about to leave when Vyom asked

"Aap ne apna naam nahi bataya" with a small smile.

"Mere naam Naina Singh Ahluwalia hai." She told.

"Kya kaha aap ne Naina 'ah'''.Singh" he said it with a pause. It made Naina' s heart skipped a beat.

Naina was confused. Does he really look like Rajveer Sir or he is? Kyounki Naina 'ah' Singh to sir hi bolte the na.

"Kya hua tum log yahan aise kyoun khade ho?" Karan asked coming.

"Kuch nahi bus mai aap ki dost ka naam pooch raha tha." Vyom said seeing in Naina's direction who was lost some where.

"Oye tu kahan kho jaati hai pal bhar me." Karan asked jab ki vo jaanta tha fir bhi bus Naina ka mood accha karne k liye us ne ye sab kiya.

"Nahi kahi to nahi'''''.kya hua?" Naina asked.

"Kuch nahi hua. Chalo neeche aunty khane k liye bula rahi hain." Karan said n all of them came for lunch n took their lunch.

After lunch Karan said , " Naina chal tere lie bahut kuch laya hoon dekh k bata ki tujhe pasand aaya ki nahi." He dragged her in his room . He opened his suitcase n showed her all things he brought for her.

"Vow itna sab mere liye." Naina exclaimed with joy.

"Nahi to kya keh raha hoon mai." Karan said to tease her.

"U r so sweet Karan." Naina hugged her instantly to which Karan also hugged her. He was happy to see her smiling.

"Accha laga na tujhe?" Karan asked.

"Accha nahi bahut accha specially ye pendent." She took the platinum pendent in her hands, " it's so beautiful u know." Naina ki aankhein chamak rahi thi.

"Thanks, mujhe pata nahi tha ki tujhe ye sab itna accha lagega." Karan said.

"Are ye bata tu yahan kisi kaam se aaya hai ya yu hi?" Naina asked while checking all her gifts.

"Haan kuch meetings aur deals final karni hai . Kuch Mumbai me hai aur kuch Pune me." Karan told her.

"G8!", Naina said.

"Kyoun g8! Kyoun?" Karan asked.

"Mere friend ki shaddi hai na 25^th ko '''''" Naina ki baat poori bhi nahi ho paayi .

Karan bola, "To us ki shaddi Mumbai me hai ki Pune me hai?"

"Mujhe bolne dega ki nahi?" Naina asked.

"Haan'''haan..bol." Karan said.

"Hmmmmmmmmm, mere friend ki shaadi hai Ambala me 25^th ko aur engagement hai 20^th ko . Mai vo dono hi function attend karoongi aur us k baad meri posting PuneAcademy me hue hai. Isiliye mai bata rahi thi ki kyoun na tum bhi mere friend k shaddi me chalo aur vahan se hum seedhe Pune chalenge. Mujhe wahan 27^th ko report karna hai." Naina suggested.

"Nice idea aur vaise bhi meri koi meeting nahi hai 27^th tak." Karan told.

"Good." Naina said.

"Par Vyom bhi to hai na saath. Mai us ko yahan nahi chod sakta na akele." Karan was confused.

"To mai bhi saath me chalta hoon na." Vyom said entering in room us ne Naina aur Karan ki saari baatein sun li thi.

"Yeah ye bhi aacha hai vaise bhi tu India apni holidays enjoy karne aaya hai na." Karan said.

"Vahi to agar Naina ji ko koi problem na ho to." He gave a look to Naina.

Naina ko pata nahi itna uncomfortable feel hota tha Vyom k saamne rehne par. Phir bhi mana to kar nahi sakti thi vo. So she said, "Nahi mujhe koi problem nahi hai."

"Than ok. Aaj shaam ko mai tum ko apna Dehradoon dikhaonga." Karan said n cheerful tone.

"Haan mai bhi soch raha tha ki hum kahin ghoomne chalein." Vyom said while unpacking his things.

"To Naina shaam ko ready rehna pehle hum lakejaayenge dekhne fir mountains dekh kar laute hue kahin dinner kar k wapas aayenge.Anuty ko mai bata deta hoon." Karan said n left.