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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR KAISI HO SWEETY? MAINE TUMHARA UD PADHA DEAR, MUJHE BAHUT HI PASAND AAYA, KAAFI EMOTIONAL PART THA YEH WAALA, PLZZZ JALDI SE RAJ KI ENTRY KARAO NA SWEETY. WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART. WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

thanks aur haan aage aur bhi accha ud hoga.😛😛
Ye thoda action pack fic hoga.😉😉😉
Par accha lagega aap sab ko.😊😊
I am shure.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

part 1 of the update was really emotional n touchy....But 1 thing pls do bring back Rajveer ..So Yudi is finally getting married

waiting for the next part

yeah thanks dear.
Mai koshish karoongi ki aap sab ko ye fic humesha aachi lage.😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

thanks Shaina ji.😊😊
Naina's pain is so well portrayed!!!!😊 😊 😊She is hesitant to go back to Ambala and KMA kyunki waha usne Raj aur Navin dono ko khoya tha!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
haan sach me yaar.😭😭
Aalekh baap banne wala hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats good news!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
haan shaadi ki hai to kabhi na kabhi baap banega hi na.😆😆😆
Naina ke cousin Karan ne usse khat likha!!!!😊 😊 😊Thats good!!!!
Cousin nahi hai Karan.
Karan us ka bachpan ka dost hai.😉😉
By the way is the role of Karan played by Hiten Tejwani??😊 😊
vo is ud me pata chal jaayega.😉
Yudi ki shaadi ho rahi hai magar kisse??😕 😕 😕
vo to Yudi ka surprise hai vahi jaane.😛😛
The song was very nice!!!😊 😊 😊 It portrayed Naina feelings beautifully!!!😊 😊 😊
thanks i love this song too much,😊😊
Poor Naina!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Raj ko kitna miss karti hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Raj aur Navin dono ne hi usse akela chhod diya!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
haan ye to hai par umeed par duniya kayam hai.😉😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Here's next part:-
A man called his boss, his boss picks the phone.

"Haan bolo kya khabar hai?"

"Boss vo Pune Academy me aa rahi hai."He told.

"Bahut acche kisi ko us k aane k bare me pata to nahi hai na. Mera matlab maksad to pata nahi hai na." The Boss asked.

"Nahi boss us ko bhi nahi pata hai ki us ki posting yahan kyoun ki gayi hai." The man said.

"Theek hai , tum najar rakho us par aur mujhe khabar karte rehna." He instructed him n hung the phone.

"Welcome Captain Naina ah' Singh Ahluwalia." The man said n smiled.

Here the same day Naina ko yaad aaya are aaj hi to hai 18th Karan to aaj hi aane waala hai na. She thought n called Karan; par koi fayda nahi phone is out of coverage.

Karan ( Karan Singh Grover) is childhood friend of Naina and Naveen . He was their neighbor . He loves Naina much more than any one. This feeling was only as friends . Often people take their relation in wrong way.

Par Naina k dil me to Raj hai na aur to koi aa hi nahi sakta na.Ye baat bus vo log jaante the jo Naina k bahut kareeb the jaise us k dost aur Huda bhi jaanta tha ab to. Jab Naina lagaatar M.B.A. k liye jaane ki jid kar rahi thi to Huda ko bataya tha us ne ki he loved Rajveer. Huda k dil par kya beeti thi ye to Huda hi jaane.

Par pyaar to kar liya than a ek baar Naina ne bus vo pyaar poora nahi ho paaya kabhi Ritu Mishra aur kabhi maut ne aa kar raasta rok liya Naina aur Raj ka.

Naina ne poore ghar ko set karna start kiya aur set kar te karte achanak use yaad aaya ki us ne Yudi se poocha hi nahi ki us ki shaadi kis se ho rahi hai. She called Yudi n after five minutes it's connected.

"Hello Naina kaise ho?" Yudi asked her with happiness.

"Mai theek hoon tu bata kaisa hai?" Naina asked.

"Are ab to bhai bilkul theek hain aur hona bhi chahiye." It was Neelu who snatched phone from Yudi n started talking.

"Kaise hai Neelu tu? " Naina asked.

"Mai theek hoon tu bata kya chal raha hai?"Neelu aksed.

"Chal to tere saath raha hai na kuch." Naina said naughtily.

"Accha is ka matlab tere bhai ne sab bata diya tujhe." Neelu said.

"Haan , vaise bhi agar tu nahi batayegi to vo to batayega hi na. Kya naam socha hai mere niece ka?" Naina asked.

"Tujhe kaise pata ki beti hogi?" Neelu asked.

"Mujhe lagta hai beti hi hogi na." Naina said.

"Haan mujhe bhi lagta hai. Pata hai Alekh bhi chahta hai ki beti ho."Neelu said shyly.

"Oho to Neelu ji ko sharam bhi aati hai." Naina teased her.

"Vaise maine ye tere upper choda hai ki naam kya rakhegi tu beti ka.?" Neelu told her smilng.

"Accha maine to naam bhi soch liya hai beta hua to Alankaar aur beti hue to Akarshita." Naina told.

"Accha dono ka naam usi k naam se aur mera kya?" Neelu asked in a fake complaining tone.

"Jab doosra hoga na to us ka naam apne naam par rakh lena theek hai." Naina said in a joking tone.

"Agar nand bhabhi baat kar chuki hon to mai apni dost se baat kar sakta hoon?" Yudi asked Neelu.

"Accha le." Neelu said Yudi n to Naina she said, "ok bye Naina 20th ko milte hain." N she handed over it to Yudi.

"Haan bol kaise hai?" Yudi asked.

"Mai acchi hoon tu ye bata ki shaddi kis se kar raha hai ye to tune bataya hi nahi." Naina asked.

"Vo surprise hai aana to dekhna. Maine kisi ko nahi bataya hai. Neelu se bhi mana kiya hai kisi se kuch bhi batane ko." Yudi said in a naughty tone.

"Accha theek hai chal fir 20th ko milte hain.Bye take care."

"U too Naina." Yudi said n both hung the phone.

Naina soch me pad gayi ki kis se shaddi kar raha hai Yudi. Khair surprise hai doston k liye to tabhi pata chalega na.

'Pata nahi aaj mai itna bechain kyoun hoon? Subah se hi lag raha hai ki kuch ajeeb sa hone waala hai aisa pehle kabhi to nahi hua na . Kyoun mai aaj aisa feel kar rahi hoon baar baar.' Naina soche jaa rahi thi. Phir us ne mom se bola apni ki Karan ka manpasand khana banaye.

Achanak Naina ka mobile ring hua. Screen par Huda ka naam aate dekh kar Naina ne phone uthaya.

"Hello Huda kahan hai tu aaj kal aur kaisa hai?" Naina asked.

"Oye Phoolan mai to theek hoon tu kaise hai? Aawaaz teri bhari kyoun lag rahi hai yaar?" Huda was concerned.

"Nahi bus thoda thaki hue hoon na isiliye. Par tu kahan hai ? Pata hai 6 months baad aaj tere se baat ho rahi hai meri. Maine kitni baar tera phone try kiya par not available to kabhi switched off."Naina ne bataya.

"Haan yaae ek screat mission par gaya tha. Jaane k pehle kisi ko nahi bata sakta tha." Huda told her.

"To kaisa raha tera mission?" Naina asked.

"Usi k bare me baat karni hai tujh se." He told.

"Par mere se kya baat karni hai mission se related?" Naina was confused.

"Tera transfer hua hai na Pune Academy? Bus us k hi bare me baat karni hai kuch." Huda told her.

"Tujhe kaise pata?" Naina shocked.

"Jyada chauk mat. Jaroori hai baat isiliye bola Phoolan. Bus mujhe tu ye bata ki tu Yudi ki shaddi me kab tak pahuchegi?" Huda was really tensed.

"Mai 20 ko pahuchoongi." Naina bhi ab tense ho rahi thi ki aakhir maamla kya hai.

"Theek hai tabhi wahan milte hain. See u there bye n take care." Huda said n hung the phone.

Naina bye bhi nahi bol paayi Huda ko. 'Ye achanak Huda ko hua kya hai' Aaj se pehle us ne kabhi is tarah se behave nahi kiya. Phir aaj achanak .Jaroor koi serious baat hogi varna Huda aisa kaise kar sakta hai. Mai apne doston ko acchi tarah se jaanti hoon. Vo apni jaan de sakte hain apne desh aur apne farz k liye. Huda kisi misson k bare me baat kar raha than a. Jarror us ki koi na koi link Pune Academy se judi hai tabhi vo keh raha tha ki Phoolan mil k bataonga.?

It's 12:30 p.m. aur Naina ka mood bahut accha nahi hai isiliye Karan ko lene nahi jaa rahi hai vaise bhi vo jaanti hai ki Karan kabhi bhi shariffo ki tarah to seedhe se aayega nahi ghar vo daudte bhaagte , uchalte, koodte aayega na. Vaise bhi Karan ne bataya to hai nahi ki vo kis flight se kahan tak aayega to kaise aur kahan jaaye Naina Karan ko lene.To us ne socha kyoun na ghar par hi baith kar aaraam kare vo aa jaayega aaram se.? Naina sochne lagi ki aisa kya ho sakta hai.

Idhar Huda:-

'Oye sorry Phoolan par mai jaanta tha ki agar mai aage baat karoonga to tu jo poochegi vo mai bata nahi apponga. Isiliye maine phone kaat diya aur accha hoga ki agar hum mil k baat kare.' Huda thought in his mind.This time his mind was racing ki kaise kya kya set hoga.

At atlest 2:00 p.m. the door bell rang. Naina went to open the door n she was shocked to see the sight in front of her eyes. She couldn't control n started laughing uncontrolled.Kuch der tak vo pet pakad pakd k haste rahi.Vo manjar hi kuch aisa tha ki dekhne waala paagal ho jaaye haste haste.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
ye y naina is laughing like dat?nice ud👏👏👏.plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
dis was fabulous updt.............rajs back..yippe..........n choice of karan is awesome..............just eager to know y's naina laughing
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lipi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wooooooow realy gud,itz realy intrestn n i'm gettn more excited,

Naina laughinin why?

but very nice realy super,


Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Wow!!!Very interesting!!!!
Too good dear.
Waiting for Raj.....kya kare adat se majboor hai na....😉😆😆

Continue soon.


Take care
love
Riya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Too good!!!Awesome!!!!
Pune academy jaane ke peeche koi maksad hai jo kisiko yahan tak ki Naina ko bhi pata nahi hai!!!😕 😕 😕
Raj ki entry ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏I am so happy!!!!😃 😃 😃I loved his Captain Naina Ah singh Ahluwalia!!!!😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Nanad aur Bhabhi ka convo was very nice!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yudi kisse shaadi kar raha hai jo Alfred Hitchcock ki tarah suspense de raha hai??😛 😛 😕 😕 😕
Karan uchalte kudte aata hai!!!😛 😛 😛 So funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Naina ne pyaar kar liya tha!!!😊 😊 😊 I loved that scene where she had said she loved Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Mujhe Huda ki shakal bahot acchi lagi thi ush scene mein!!!!😊 😊 😛 😛 😛 Woh dekhne layak thi!!!!!
But haa Naina ko pyaar ho gaya Raj se!!!😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😭 😭 😭 Pyaar zindagi mein sirf ek baar aata hai aur phir zindagi se kabhi nahi jaata!!!!😊 😊 😊
Uske Pune academy ki posting ke baare mein Huda bhi janta hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Chakkar kya hai??😕 😕 😕
Huda akhir kya chupa raha hai???😔 😔 😔 😔
Zaroor Karn aaya hoga jo Naina itna has rahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊
Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update was really gud..But wat is dat every1 is hiding from Naina??????????????
N why is she laughing .I think its Karan not Raj!!!!!!!!!!!!!..May b he had come as a juggler or something

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