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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lrl_01

v.v..nice plz update more

Thanks dear.😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Here comes the next part:-

"Vyom kahan hai vo nahi aayega kya?" Naina asked.

"Are tum chalo na us ko jaana hoga kahin aur mujhe bhi jaana hai kahin wahi se aata hoon abhi." He said n left before Naina can say something.

"Par'''ajeeb hai ye dono bhi kabhi kabhi itna strange behave kyoun karte hain pata nahi." Naina thought.

Here in restaurant:-

"Kaun ho tum aur kis se bata rahe the Naina k bare me?" Vyom asked the person punching hard.

"Tum kuch nahi jaan paooge mujh se chahe kuch bhi kar lo." That man replied still he was feeling it hard to breath.

Karan entered and saw Vyom punching a man, "Kya hua kaun hai ye?"

"Hum sab jab se restaurant k andar aaye to maine lagtaar dekh raha tha ki ye aadmi Naina ko kaafi der se ghoor raha hai . Maine socha ye koi aise hi hoga , par jab hum nikalne lage to is ne apne boss ko phone kar k bola ki boss vo log nikal rahe hain. Tabhi mai samjh gaya ki kuch gadbad hai .Isiliye maine tum ko ishara kiya ki Naina ko wapas le jao aur phir yahan aao." Vyom told.

"Kaun hai ye aur ye aisa kyoun kar raha tha bataya ki nahi is ne?" Karan asked.

"Nahi yaar." Vyom replied.

"Theek hai agar tu nahi batayega to mai abhi tujhe yahin maar deta hoon kum se kum mujhe chain to aayega." Karan said taking out Vyom's revolver.

"Kya kar raha hai tu Karan? Chod is ko chod." Vyom screamed.

"Nahi mai mai maar doonga is ko." He pointed the gun on his head.

"Nahi ruk jao mai batata hoon." The man said.

Par is k pehle ki vo kuch keh sakta a bullet hit him on his head and he lay down dead. Vyom aur Karan kuch kar paate is k pehle hi jis gadi me vo aadmi baitha tha vo gaadi teji se nikal gayi.

"Oh shit damn it ab kya karein?" Karan asked.

"Kya kar sakte hain ab?" Vyom replied.

"Yaar ye maamla bahut tuff hota jaa raha hai aur bahut risky bhi." Karan said looking tensed.

"Haan Karan mujhe pata hai par hum kuch nahi kar sakte na." Vyom said.

"Par Naina ko kya batayenge?" Karan asked.

"Tere faltoo se dimaag me abhi koi idea nahi hai kya?" Vyom asked.

"Haan hai na; dekh tu mere dimaag ko faltoo mat kaha kar samjha." Karan said in warning tone.

"Kya kar rahe ho tum log yahan? Mai kab se bahar wait kar rahi hoon tum dono ka?" Naina asked while entering there.

They both saw each other's face. "Bata dein Vyom?" Karan asked.

"Kya?" Vyom replied.

"Vahi jo hua." Karan said.

"Nahi na please yaar." Vyom was unable to understand that what is going on in Karan's mind.

"Tum logon ne kya laga rakha hai aakhir baat kya hai?" Naina asked with a confused face.

"Naina mai soch raha hoon ab tum pata hona chahiye sab sach sach." Karan said.

"Baat kya hai batao na." Naina insisted.

"Please Karan nahi." Vyom said.

"To baat ye hai Naina ki '''''" he stopped.

"Oh Karan I will kill u bata do ab bus." Naina ka patience khatam ho raha tha.

"To baat ye hai Naina ki khana khane k baad humare pet me pressure ban raha tha to bus hum pressure release karne aaye the. Now v r thande thande cool cool." Karan said.

"Kya? To ye baat thi." Naina surprised.

Vyom smiled at Karan and Karan gave him a high five.

"Madam chale ab itni der mai cab nahi rok sakta hoon." The cab driver entered and said.

"Haan haan chaliye, tum dono ko to mai baad me batati hoon." Naina said and moved out.

Vyom and Karan smiled at each other and came out. They started journey.

Hum jo chalne lage
Chalne lage hai yeh raaste
haaan haaan
Manzil se behtar lagne lage hai yeh raste ]2

Aao kho jaye hum
Ho jaye hum yun lapata
Aaao milo chale
Jana kahan na ho pata

Hum jo chalne lage
Chalne lage hai yeh raste
haaan haaan
Manzil se behtar lagne lage hai yeh raste

[Baithe baithe eshe kaise koi
Rasta naya sa mile
Tu bhi chale mein bhi chalu
Honge kam yeh tabhi fasle]2

Aao tera mera na ho kisi se vasta
Aaao milo chale
Jana kahan na ho pata

Hum jo chalne lage
Chalne lage hai yeh raste
haaan haaan
Manzil se behtar lagne lage hai yeh raste

[Aankhen khole neendein bole jane
Kasie jagi bekhudi
Yahan wahan dekho kahan
Leke jaane lagi bekhudi]2
Aao mil jaye na ho jahan pe rasta
Aaao milo chale
Jana kahan na ho pata

Hum jo chalne lage
Chalne lage hai yeh raste
haaan haaan
Manzil se behtar lagne lage hai yeh raste

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They all enjoyed the song so much. Naina was happy after all these days. Vyom was watching her face constantly. Soon Naina noticed him watching her, she felt uncomfortable a littlie bit. Jab jab dono ki najrein mil rahi thi Naina apni najrein neeche jhuka leti thi.

Soon the entered in Ambala . Naina was lost when she reached there as if she was trying to recollect each and every point.

"Maana padega Naina Ambala bahut acchi jagah hai." Karan said.

"Hmmmmm, acchi to hai."Naina said.

"Naina ek baat kahoo agar tumhara mood na kharab ho to?" Karan asked.

"Kya baat hai Karan bolo." Naina asked.

"Naina mera man hai ki Pune jaane k pehle agar hum kisi din free hue to hum ko apni KMA jaroor ghumana." Karan said.

Naina was not happy by this plan but she thought may be the old things will not be repeated this time. "Theek hai jaroor." She said with a heavy heart.

Vyom knew that KMA is disturbing her but neither he nor Karan can do anything. So they decided to remain silent in rest of journey.

They reached there in next twenty minutes. It was a huge bunglow decorated with flowers. Karan was watching the group of girls busy in doing some work and chatting.

Naina came out of cab and was about to pay the entire bill when Vyom stopped her and paid it himself.

"Rajveer sir aap yahan?" somebody said.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Update was interesting...😊😊😊
But wat is dis mystery behind Vyom..I think he is Rajveer ..The way he cares for Naina i firmly believe dis.
Song was very gud indeed ...😛😛😛
Today u didn't informed abt the update..😭😭...I know its difficult to inform each n every reader,but still
Do update soon😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey update was superb
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiiiiiiii Vertika ! kaisi ho dear......!!!!!!!!!!!
this ud was just too good ............yaar!!!!
kuch mystery to hai.....btn... raj & vyom....!!!!!!!
kahin na kahin mujhe lagta hai k vyom hi raj hai......
ok....let's c...... ki ab hamari writer ab humain kya surprise deti hai!!!!!!!!!
ud soon
LOVE & WISHES
PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow super update yaar..raj is so protective..loved him..continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ne jab pucha ke Vyom kaha hai toh Karan bahana banake chala gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Vyom ush admi se pucch raha hai magar woh batane ko taiyaar nahi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Karan ne maarne ki dhamki di toh sab kuch ugalne wala tha!!!!!

Lekn usse kisine sar pe goli mardi aur gaadi tez chala ke bhaag gayi!!!! Damn it!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Vyom ne Karan ke dimaag ko faltoo kaha toh Karan kehta hai uske dimaag ko faltoo ne kahe!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina aagayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Vyom toh samaj hi nahi paya ke Karan ke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Karan bahut drama build up kar raha hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Kisi reality show ka host tha kya pehle??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Karan ne bhi naa kya excuse banaya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Vyom Naina ko hi dekh raha hai and Naina is feeling uncomfortable!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jan nazrein milti hai toh woh apni nazrein jhuka leti hai!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Karan ko Ambala acchi lagi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aur woh KMA ghumna chahta hai!!!!!!

Naina is not happy magar phir bhi maan gayi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Vyom ko pata hai ke KMA ke mention se woh dukhi ho jaati hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Interesting!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waha pahuch gaye toh kisine Vyom ko Rajveer Sir bulaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aur kyun naa bulaye akhir wohi toh hai Rajveer!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Bas yeh baat Naina ko pata chalne ki der hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiii...loved the update...it was really good...sorry lamba comment next time doongi👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooooooooooooow super,

so finaly sumbosy callin Rajveer sir,a shock 2 Naina tatz intrestn,

super dialogues,

cant wait til the next part,


amazin,



Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA KAISI HO SWEETY?????????????

THE UD WAS SUPERB👏

MIND BLOWING👏

FANTASTIC👏

TOOOOOOOGOOOOOOO👏

ROCKING👏
MAST👏
THIS IS FOR U SWEETY👏
UD ASAP
EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
LOVE
DEEPA.........

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