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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh wow....this was a wonderful part.....
thanks Sumi 😊 😊 😊

however need sum final clarifications...hehe. However...I thot this was one of the best parts of Chahat....not for Rajveer's disclosure.....but the overall part was wonderful yaar!!
are waah, thank u dear and u will get more fun to read the next part 😉 😉 😉

The sweet romantic encounters of Vyom n Naina....his playful nature....I cud imagine those mischievous looks....and of course that convo wid the senior....that was sum thing catchy for me.
thanks dear, it means i am successful in writing if u can imagine those scenes.
😍 😍 😍

And then Aalekh ke sath uska convo.....all was sumhow very beautiful....and from the very beginning I was feeling veryyyyy nice while reading.
are waah jee aaj bahut meetha ho gaya hai mere liye 😉 😉 😉

So this was a gr8 job Vertika....pls dooo try to continue soon....more becoz its at a high
point...hehe
thanks sweetheart and off course i will do that soon. .😍 😍 😍




thanks a lot Sumi 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: poojabi

yes yes akhir rajveer ki entry ho ho gayee.yahoooooooo.par yeh kis mor pe laake tune chora,ab main koi comment nehi denewali,excitement se mera awaz atak gaya hai.jaldise nxt part ka update kar.



haan haan ab itna excite hone pe aisa hi hoga na, koi baat nahi next part me aur likh dena. 😆 😆😆
😆
Thanks Pooja
😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggg ! amazing ,,i really enjoy after read the whole story .......omg vertika..........u are one of the brilliant story writer.
i am waiting for ur rocking next update............
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Posted: 14 years ago
main nee karti...tere precap pe comment...ja...
mujhe toh ud chahiye...chahiye...aur chahiye...
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika
Hello dear 😊 😊 😊

Update was too gud👏 but so many questions were left in my mind after reading the last part..
ye to hona hi tha & thanks 😛 😛 😛

Vyom as always was trying hard to impress Naina and he is determined to make her fall for him..😃
Vo jaanta hai na aisa ho jaayega aakhir us ka charm hi kuch aisa hai. 😉 😉 😉

he is entering Pune Academy as her husband and I think he is to happy abt this prospect..after all it was his master stroke..👏👏 but Naina is still too confuse abt her feelings..
Vo nahi chahti na ki aisa ho,😕 😕 😕 par maan gaye Vyom ko kya plan banaya hai us ne? 👏 👏 👏

Wat she feels for Raj is eternal but Vyom is making her respond to him in a similar manner but in a different way..Raj was more subtle in his approach while Vyom is boldly declaring his feelings for her..
Naina is in dilemma where she is unable to decide what to do & she is
unable to resist Vyom too.
😳 😳 😳

their kiss was too passionate..😉😳
😳 😳 😳

Alekh is still confused but he has full faith in Vyom..😃
Alekh baba ki jay ho vo sab jaante hain. 😆 😆 😆

Last part was just too gud.👏👏 Did Naina always knew that Vyom is Raj and she is hiding it from every1??
Aage padhna to clear ho jaayega. 😉 😉 😉

I think then it will b tough for her to resist Raj😉😳😆
Vo to obvious hai na. 😳 😳 😳
Pls continue very soon..😊
Bye



Thanks sweety so much for such beautiful reply. 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooome...........

superb..
fab......
loved it...
thanx for the pm.......



Thanks a lot dear 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Ohoooo humari to kismat hi khul gayi ki aap ne is ko update kar diya. 😆
abe karti kaise nahi bus thodi busy thi na. 😆 😆 😆

Good n sweet one.👏
thanks dear 😃 😃 😃
I mean ab jaa k saari doubts clear ho gayi ki Vyom hi Raj hai so no more gaaliyan for u sweetheart.😛
thank God is baar mai bach gayi. 😉 😉 😉
Vyom has said so many times that he loves her n Naina ka us ko daatna bhi sone waali baat par sahi tha kyounki shayad Naina k liye asaan nahi hai abhi ye sab.
Bilkul hona bhi nahi hai na,😕 😕 😕 aakhir vo ab kisi aur se pyaar nahi kar sakti na.
Alekh ne sahi kiya, i mean Naina ko jo kaam mila hai ki us ko Vyom ki patni banana hai vo sahi hai jis se us ki zindagi me aur koi khushi to aaye na.😊
Sach me ab aage badhna hi hoga na us ko kab tak dard sehti rahegi. 😭 😭 😭
Loved the convo of HQ with Naina,😉 that's not going to be easy for Naina but i know for country she can do anything. 😃 Sab jaa rahe hain vapas ab.
Bahana hai na country, Vyom kaafi intelligent hai na ek theer se do nishaane. 😆 😆 😆
Ohoooooo lovely kiss of my RN, 😳 aur is baar Naina k liye bhi bahut mushkil tha na apne aap ko rok paana aur na chahte hue bhi she responded to his kiss.😳
Kitna control karegi, ye face us ko vaise bhi sab kuch bhula deta hai. 😉 😉 😉
Update abki jaldi aana chahiye otherwise i will kill u.😡



Abe aise sareaam dhamki mat de varna report kar dega koi agar mai mar gayi to. 😆 😆 😆

Thanks a lot dear
😍😍😍
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice part. loved it
Thanks Rakhi, 😊 😊 😊

naina want to avoid vyom .but vyom determined to stay near to naina.
vo Naina ko chod kar kahin jaata hi nahi hai to kitna avoid kar paayegi us ko? 😉 😉 😉

vyom is rajveer or not. interesting.
socho, par jyada mat socho next part padh lo aur khud samajh jaaoogi. 😛 😛 😛

update soon





Thank u for reply
😃 😃 😃
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was good
plz continue soon




Thanks sweety 😳 😳 😳
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

too gud ud....yaar...

thanks Priya dear 😊 😊 😊

tere ko peetne ka jo plan banaya tha...voh cancel ho gaya...kyoun ke vyom hi jo Raj nikla...isiliye ab koi complaine nahi hai...
thank god i am safe now. 😆 😆 😆
vyom ne sach me kai baar apne pyar ka izhaar kar diya hai...!!! jab ki Raj kabhi kar nahi paya tha...!!! yeh achha kiya us ne...
kuch to alag kare na aise, varna us Raj par to mujhe aksar gussa hi aata tha. 😛 😛 😛
vaise task kafi interesting hai...!!! naina ko badhiya kaam mila hai...Vyom aka Raj ki wife ka role play karne ka...!!! ab yeh natak karte karte sab kuch kab sach me hoga is ka intezar hai...
Kuch naya hai na, mai humesha se yahi soch k rakhi hue thi ki aisa hoga. 😆 😆 😆
vaise naina ke liye yeh sab asaan toh nahi hai...par naina hamesha apne kaam ko jyada mayne deti hai...isiliye pata hai voh yeh karegi...!!! par sonewali baat par jo scene tha voh mast tha...
😆 😆 😆, sir ne kaha hai na ki hum sab apne desh k liye hi jeete hain to pehle desh k baare me hi sochna hai. 😉 😉 😉
n sab se khubshurat scene tha kiss ka...jo ki naina chah kar bhi khud ko raj se dur nahi rakh payi...!!!
Kitne der control kar paayegi bechari, ab to akele hai na dono. 😳 😳 😳
cont soon.



Thanks a lot sweetheart.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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