Falling in love ~ Ranbir and Kanya ff KIT

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I don't if anyone here is a Ranbir Kanya fan. I am a huge Rankan fan and I wrote this quite sometime ago. If anyone is a rankan fan hope you enjoy it!

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INTRO:::

It started something like this.........

This is a conversation among 10-12 year olds.

Suhana: When I grow up i will become a supermodel.

Rema: so what?? main superstar banoongi.

Aayan: haha! Main to already hero hoon. Aur tum kya banogi Kanya?

Kanya: main....mMmm I will be a princess.

Suhana: princess aur tum???

Rema: ewww tum to khoobsurat bhi nahi ho.

Suhana: If you want to be a princess you will need a Prince. Aur tumhe kabhi Prince nahi milegi.

Rema: You are so skinny.

Aayan: tum log Kanya ko kyon cher te ho? I like her.

Suhana: You are only one who does!!! [starts laughing]

Kanya starts crying and runs. She bumps into Malika.

M: are beti kya hua?

K: [sobbing and wiping her tears off at the same time] Kuch nahi aunty mujhe ghar jaana hai.

M: Kyon beti. Party abhi tak khatam nahi huyi.

K: Nahi aunty mujhe ghar jaana hain.

M: [wiping her tears off, kisses her forehead] thik hai, Main tumhari mummy papa ko call karti hoon.

He calls her parents but the line is not going through. probably because of the rain.

M: Kanya line nahi jaa rahi hai. Tum thora der intezaar karo. Barish ho rahi hain.

K: [she looks over to suhana and Rema. They will be mean to her again] Aunty mujhe ghar jaana hai. Main akeli hi chale jaoongi.

M: Main jaanti hoon tumhari ghar paas hain beti but tum akele kaise jaogi. Just wait. Main kuch karti hoon. Tumhe Ranbir ghar chodega.

She goes and stands by the door. Looking at the rain.

R: Hi. [holding the umbrella over them]

K: [she looks up] Hi....[he is Aayan's cool 17 yr old chachu. All the girls talk about him!!! she never talked to him before. Ooo Suhana and Rema will be so jealous]

R: Chale??

K: [nodds]

They are are walking outside.

R: tum ro rahi thi?

K: nahi to.

R: jhoot maat bolo. Mom ne kaha tum ro rahi thi.

K: [doesn't say anything]

R: jhoot kehna acchi baat nahi hain. But...tum ro kyon rahi thi?

K: Rema aur Suhana ne kaha main khoobsurat nahi hoon, aur mujhe kabhi bhi Prince nahi milega.

R: Baas?? itni si baat?? Woh log aise hi shararat karti hain. But tum khoobsurat ho...bohut bohut bohut khoobsurat ho. Is liye woh log tumse jalte hain. Aur dekhna ek din tumhe zaroor Prince milega.

K: [she giggles]

R: tum ek kaam karo. Ghar jakar ek diary banalo.

K: kyon?

R: So you can write about all this. jab tum bara ho jaogi aur tumhe apna Prince mil jayega to tum yaad karogi ke Rema aur suhana ne tumhe kiss tarase satati thi. Aur tum haas parogi. Ho sakta tum mujhe bhi yaad karogi.

K: [she looked up and gave him a big smile]

R: lo tumhara ghar aagaya hai madam. Aab jao. Aur suno don't pay attention to the silly things Rema and Suhana says. Tum khoobsurat ho. Unse jyada. Aur tum jab bari ho jaogi naa to unke to khabar ho jayegi.

K [giggles]

R: [smiles] Good night.

K: Good night.

And then he leaves.

That night she wrote her 1st entry.

March 1st, 1999

Today I fell in love

10 years later................and it begins....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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::::Part 1::::

Kanya is on her bed lying down and reading a book. It's really late at night. She really should be sleeping but the book is just too good. Her phone rings.

K: Is waqt kaun call kar rahi hai? [it's Ira her best friend]

She picks up

K: hello?

Ir: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

K: [closes her eyes and covers her ears]

Ir: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!

K: my god. what's wrong??

Ir: main bohut bohut bohut khush hoon.

K: woh to sunai de raha hain. Lekin itni khush kyon ho??

Ir: hah!! nahi bataoongi.

K: Tum pagal ho?? Jaldi batao. Kya hai?

Ir: nope...tum kaal farm house chale aao pher bataoongi.

K: Ira.....

Ir: comeone kanya. Main bore ho rahi hoon tumhari bina.

K: Tum kaise bore ho sakti ho? Tumhari paas Aayan hai, Eva hai, Rema hain aure suhana bhi hai.

Ir: I don't care. Mujhe sirf itna hi maloom hai ke tum nahi ho. Please aajao naa!!! Please please pleaseeee

K: ok fine!!

Next day Kanya arrives at the Nanda farmhouse. She loves this place. Only because of the horses. She loves loves loves horses.

Ira: yay you are here. [comes running and hugs her]

Rema and Suhana walk in.

Rem: what's so special about that? [whispers to Suhana]

Ira: chalo andar chalo [dragging her]

Malika : Are kanya beti tum kabh aayi?

K: [while is Ira is dragging her] Abhi....

They go into Ira's room. Kanya sits on the bed. Ok Abh batao. Kya hai?

Ir: [confused] Kya hai??

K: You had to tell me something. Hurry up.

Ir: woh???? woh kya hai...

Rema and Suhana walk in.

Suh: how do I look??

Ir: hot!!

K: Koi special occassion hai?

Suh: Tumhari liye to nahi hai. But it is for us.

Rem: [laughs] haan tumhara boyfriend jo aaraha hain.

Suh: excuse me hone wala pati.

Ir: Ehh jyada sapne maat dekho. Chachu ne abhi tak haan nahi ki hai.

Suh: so what!! Haan nahi kahe hai to kehdenge. He has to marry sometimes. Malika aunty ne iss liye to Ranbir ko US se wapa laa rahi hain. And who will he marry without me?

Ir: kitni arrogant ho!! [laughs]

Kanya's heart is beating so fast!! Ranbir is coming back. She hasn't seen him forever. It's been 8 years and 9 months. She hopes he wouldn't like Suhana. he didn't like her before. But that was 10 years ago. What if he likes her now?

A car stops. Everyone runs to the living room He is here.

He walks in. [yes the sexy hunk in designer wear]

M: Ranbirrrrrrr!!!! [kitne din ho gaye tumhe dekha nahi]

R: what Mom...pichle mehne hi to aap New york mein the.

BD: oye. Chal aaja gale lag!

R: how are you sexy??

BD: [gives him a little slap] chup!! bara aaya line maarne.

Just when he starts walking toward Ira and Kanya. Suhana comes in between.

Suh: Ranbirrr...

R: Hi.

Suh: Oh I have so much to tell you. [sha grabs his hand and starts pulling him]

R: Right now? can't it wait.

Suh: No lets go. Sab se tum already mil chuke ho. There is no one important left.

R: Bye guys!! I will be back.

Kanya is upset. But she tries not to show it. He has changed. Well change of place and 10 years do that to you. So what he called her beautiful as a kid. He is just like everyone else. Going after the suhana kinds.

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