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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Kaushalya is shocked when she saw RagVir filled with dirt. Looking at her Vasundara lks at them and becomes shocked too. Kaushalya goes near Ragini and takes her away to her room.Over here Vasundara takes Ranveer to the corner and the conversation starts.
(Now pls see the conversation. Its going on b/w the 4 but still b/w the pairs. I mean to say what Ragini said to her mom is said by Ranveer to her mom too and what is said by kaushalya to Ragini is said by Vasundara toRanveer too..Hope u guys understand.)

Kaushalya: ragini kahan the tum donon itni der? saare mehmaan aa gaye aur ye kya haalat banaa rakhi hai. (Also asked by Vasu to Ranveer)

Ranveer: sorry maa woh ham mall me the..Bhabs ke liye bracelet aur AB ke liye watch kharid rahe the. aur aate samay baarish aa gai..

Vasundara: Baarish aa gai to bheeg jate lekin ye to poore gande ho gae tum dono. (asked by Kaushalya too)

Ragini: err.. maa woh main gir gai ... to ranveer bhi saathme... maa ab tum ye sab chodo ..bahar mehman intezar kar rahe hai .. main tayyar hokar aati hu...

Kaushalya: haan jaa bete aur Sadhana ko bhi le aana ...(not said by Vasundara)

In the main room:

Ranveer comes dressed in offwhite sherwani with a dupatta. He goes and sits near Aalekh who is dressed in dark pink sherwani like below.



After few minutes Ragini brings Sadhana. Ragini lks really pretty in her white chudidaar and pearl set. She makes Sadhana sit beside Aalekh. Sadhana is gorgeous in her pink saree and the bracelet Aalekh gave her.



Dhol bajana and everything is going on ... A lady comes to put mehendi on Sadhnas hand. After she has done with her half mehendi..

Lady: Aalekh babu hamne aapka naam ka akshar sadhana bitiya ke haath par likh diya hai ab aapko dhund kar batana hai ki woh akshar kahan hai aur apna poora naam sadhana ke dil par likh dena hai ..

Both Aalekh n sadhana smile.. Sadhana shws her hand to aalekh .. he takes time to find it but finally does it.

Lady: arey waah! aapne to abhi se apna naam sadhana ke dil par likh diya... sharmaji aapki beti badi naseeb wali hai ..(sadhana blushes) Ab ek aur pariksha reh gai hai .. Sadhana bitiya ki mehendi ke rang ka.. Agar mehendi ka rang gehra hua matlab isey bohat zyada pyaar karne wala pati mila hai..
(Saalekh blushes😳😳😳)

Ranveer gets bored with this rasam n traditions.. he tries to think wht to do n finally he goes to Ragini who is applying mehendi as well.

Ranveer: Rags chalo yahan se

Ragini: Ranveer kahan? main mehendi lagaa rahi hu.. abhi nahi..

Ranveer: chalti ho ki nahi .. (Ragini does nt listen...Ranveer pulls her by her hand)

Ragini: arey ranny kahan le jaa rahe ho ... meri mehendi...

Ranveer: chup karo ... Rags ye mehendi ceremony itni boring hoti hai pataa nahi tha... hamein ise mazedaar banaana padega ...

Ragini : haan magar kaise ..

Ranveer: ruko .. chalo mere saath...

RagVir steps b/w everyone and Ranveer announces..

Ranveer: excuse me everybody .. ye ceremony thodi boring lag rahi hai ..ise mazedar banane ke liye maine aur Rags ne ek plan banaya hai (Ragini widens her eyes) ki ham antakshari khelenge..👏 is game me AB aur bhabs ek group me honge.. Rags aur main ek group me ..mom aur dad ek group me aur aunty aur uncle (Prakash n Kaushalya) ek group me.. baki sab ham charon ke grp me aa jaiye (everyone makes the grp properly.) To tayyar? (everyone shouts saying 'YES')
Baithe Baithe kya karein karna hai kuch kaam shuru karein antakshari leke uparwale ka naam!

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Thats it for part three. The main game will be posted in the next part. By the way if anyone is reading this fanfic and is interested i wud like to ask all of u to find dresses for Salekh's marriage. It shud be matching , keep in mind. You can post here n i ll chose the best dress.
Please leave comments. Thanks.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
omg i love this TT... it is so fun to read and I have a big smile on my face with every passing line! I can't wait to see what comes next... its just as exciting as the show.... you have a great future as a writer for tv dramas... i hope some big shot executive is reading this right now! lol thanks friend =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettylady

omg i love this TT... it is so fun to read and I have a big smile on my face with every passing line! I can't wait to see what comes next... its just as exciting as the show.... you have a great future as a writer for tv dramas... i hope some big shot executive is reading this right now! lol thanks friend =)



omg pretty .... that was such a big comment! btw, i m ok writing this fanfic ...just writers shud read this n try to put some fun like this😉😆
thnx fr reading!!😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prettylady

omg i love this TT... it is so fun to read and I have a big smile on my face with every passing line! I can't wait to see what comes next... its just as exciting as the show.... you have a great future as a writer for tv dramas... i hope some big shot executive is reading this right now! lol thanks friend =)

I agree, I also love it. Badai creatives should read this, am sure they will also love it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya***

I agree, I also love it. Badai creatives should read this, am sure they will also love it.



hahaha stop flattering me nw guys .... thanks priya.😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely work taurus, do continue... you really do have a talent for writing! ;)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome, really enjoyed reading.
btw if u want to have a look at some shadi dresses for A/S, we had a Shadi contest maybe u can pick something from there if u like anything

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapna-babul-ka-bidaai/904771/voting-shaadi-designer-contest


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Kruthi*

Lovely work taurus, do continue... you really do have a talent for writing! ;)

thanx a lot kruthi, this was a boost for me 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkykhan

awesome, really enjoyed reading.
btw if u want to have a look at some shadi dresses for A/S, we had a Shadi contest maybe u can pick something from there if u like anything

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapna-babul-ka-bidaai/904771/voting-shaadi-designer-contest


thnx pinky n thnx fr the link too , i ll definitely lk into it ,,,,😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg!!!
my sadhna alekhG. k itne cute scenes..aww mehndi se alekhG. ka naam likhna n mehndi ka rang ziada ayaa tu alekhG. luvss her alott..
awww its all soooo soo cutee!!
TT luvv ya sis too guddddddd!!!
plzzzzz do continuee..
i know ab ranvirG. will definitely dance wiv ragini..hehe..awwwww
really luking forward to it!!

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