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Posted: 17 years ago

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lol hey this looks great! You are quite a story-teller my friend =)

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: prettylady
lol hey this looks great! You are quite a story-teller my friend =)

hey thanks ... im actually not .. i just have habit of dreaming n imagining n cooking up things which resulted in this .. hehe

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Nice FF...!!! Sorry dunno your name...!!! Keep writing...!!! And this is for you: 👏 for such a nice introduction and part...!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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I love it. Please continue.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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ya do post further ASAP😳😳😳

btw i culdnt pm u my idea as i was a bit unwell n culdnt cum online since last 2 days m a bit better now i'll pm u my part very

soon😳😳

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Originally posted by: born-leader
Nice FF...!!! Sorry dunno your name...!!! Keep writing...!!! And this is for you: 👏 for such a nice introduction and part...!!!

Aimen

thanks a lot .... i m Affy ... yeh sure i ll write as soon as i get time ...

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Originally posted by: dina
ya do post further ASAP😳😳😳
btw i culdnt pm u my idea as i was a bit unwell n culdnt cum online since last 2 days m a bit better now i'll pm u my part very
soon😳😳

oh so hws ur health nw n waiting for ur pm so i can add it at the appropriate place.

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Part 2

Half an hour later Ranveer goes to pick up Ragini at her house.

Sharma's house:

Sadhana: jiji dekho aisa hi matching bracelet le aana .. mujhe aaj hi pehanna hai.. aur shaadi ke din wala bhi le aana .. aur jaldi aa jana ..

Ragini: haa pagli le aungi...kyu ghabrati hai ... apni shadi ki bohat ghai hai tujhe .. hmm...😛

Sadhana: (covers her face with the dupatta she had in her hand) Jijii...😳

The door bell rings ..

Ragini : Ranny aa gaya hoga .. chal main tayyar ho jati hu ..tu jakar darwaza dekh ..

Mr and and Mrs Sharma welcome Ranveer.

Ranveer: Namaste uncle .. Namaste aunty ..kaise ho aap sab .. Rags hai ?

Kaushalya: bete andar to aao ... ragini aati hi hongi .. tayyar ho rahi hai...

Sadhana comes and lks at ranveer .. Sadhana raise her eyebrows as if asking ranveer something ... ranveer gets confused and then suddenly ...

Ranveer: Bhabs, AB thik hai 😉 fikar nahi karo ..😆😆

Sadhana : besharam ..😳😳 (she throws the dupatta on him n runs away from there)

Everyone starts laughing😆😆😆. Ragini comes and they both leave.

Ranveer: ab kaho kahan jana hai?

Ragini: ham city mall chalein?

Ranveer: jaise tumhari aagya memsahab.

Ragini: chup karo ... jaldi chalo ..ghar jaldi pohachna hai ...

At the mall they ask the shopkeeper to show bracelets which Sadhana had asked Ragini.

Ragini: ye wala kaisa hai ranny

Ranveer: ek minute dekhu to ... ummm ek kaam karte hai ... tumhara haath dikhao .. tum pehankar dekho ...tumhare haath par accha lagega to Bhabs par bhi accha lagega .. (he puts it on raginis hand, ragini keeps lking at him but gets bk to senses.) Wow! superb... mam pls pack this one.. nw lets see a watch for AB.

Ragini: ab tum haath aage karo ..(she tries the watch on ranveer n packs the one which suits him. They both lks at the same watch and the time is 4:00pm , they both panic.) Ranny chalo its too late...

The whole shopping takes too long for them... the mehendi ceremony is abt to start and all r worried at home.

Sharma's house:

Sadhana: Maa, jiji ab tak nahi aai... kahan reh gai aur mera bracelet ..

Kaushalya: tujhe bracelet ki padi hai bewakoof .. dono kahan honge kya pata. function shuru hone me aur mehman aane me sirf ek hi ghanta baki hai ...

Meanwhile theres a knock at the door. Theres a driver from Rajvansh's family with a parcel.

Kaushalya: Sadhana tumhara koi parcel hai. (Sadhana comes to receive it)

Theres a letter written by Aalekh which says.
Ek khoobsurat tohfa tumhare liye,
jo tumhari khoobsurati ko aur badha de.
With love,
Aalekh.
And theres a sweet bracelet with pink stone which matches with Sadhanas mehendi dress.Sadhana is totally surprised and happy.

At the mall:

RagVir start moving towards the car which is kept far away from the mall when it starts raining heavily.

Ragini: oh shucks. ye barish ko bhi abhi hi girna tha. ranny aaj to ham fansne wale hai .. ab tumhe bhi jane ka koi mauka nahi milega. tum bhi ghar chalo.

Ranveer: Rags😡 par ghar kaise jaye ye to socho.. chalo jaldi .. mera haath pakdo ...

they both hold each others hand n start running n here she goes. ragini falls in the puddle.... ranveer gives his hand once again but ragini cudnt get up, infact ranveer himself falls in it ...ragini gets angry and starts doing masti and they start putting the puddle water on each other..😆😆

At Sharma's House:

Rajvansh's arrive. Everyone greets each other. After few minutes family, friends and other relatives start arriving too but no sign of RagVir.

Vasudara: Kaushalya ji .. ye dono bacche kahan reh gaye .. inka koi pataa hi nahi .. kya inka koi phone aaya tha..

Kaushalya : ji nahi ..mujhe bhi bohat fikar ho rahi hai.. (she turns and cudnt believe his eyes)

It was Ragini and Ranveer fully covered in dirt. They both were feeling guilty and shocked too. All the relatives were lking just at them.

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Thanks for reading. If u have really read pls leave comments or suggestions.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: just_in
Nice!!

thnx 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Precap Part 3

Ranveer and Ragini makes everyone specially Aalekh and Sadhana play antakshari. Aalekh and Sadhana are in one group.

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Dont forget to read and comment/criticize. Ur comments tells me if u read or no and if u like it or no and again if i shud continue it or no.
Thanks.😊