The Ordeal Of Karma AK,AR,KA Pt 4@Pg 20 06/20 - Page 10

Originally posted by: sadique137

nice part thanx a lot

their thought reading was nice but i think u should either change the colors put their thoughts in bracket

cant really makeout which r the thoughts and actual conversation.i will make sure of that next time thanx for pointing out

when r the preservers going to use any of their powers its only custodians using the powers.in next part...pukka promiseon the whole it was fabulous. thanx alot

waiting for the next part continue soonwill do

Originally posted by: prenawaghray

hey amneet hey prena
thanks for the pm sweety anytime
awesome dear thank you
this was one rocking part thanx a lot
esp the way angad read each one's thoughts was hillarious n kavya getting jealous hmmm
amzingyou are in for lot more surprise
actually my net was not working for a fornite so now im filled with pms so have to read all of them n have to reply to each ff to the replies will be short for now but a big reply from next part onwards pucca i will count on that
sorry for now

Originally posted by: ~*shaili*~

hey excellent part.thanxhad been really anxious to read it!ih god! again its wonderfully written..i luv d bro-sis relationship btwn angad-anjalihey i never mentioned in my ff that they are brother and sister..kavya jealous was damn cute..that was my fav toon it was d best part for me! angad is really entertaining..!! really swt of him to save alex! it was hilarious wen he commented on odaz thoughts..n the way he responfded to kavyaz thoughts .. you will definately see more of that lol..over all wonderfully written..onderful expressions and a very interesting part!chane ke jhaad par mat chadhao mujhe plz continue asap

Originally posted by: swanesa

amazing part sweeetie thanx hun

i loved it sooooooooooo much and i love u for loving it

toooooo gooood thanx again

i will comment lateri m waiting for that later

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part thanx deeya

angad was very sweeti can only second it

Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey...great part....thanx a lot fankoo 4 dah pm anytime...ermm wonder who the prince is???take a guess sweety

Originally posted by: stars_shine*

hey hello

loved the part luv u for luving it

aww angad is a softie and saves people he is a sweet heart

plz PM me whn u update will do

awesom partthank you so much

continue soon

Originally posted by: twinkle94

cute interesting!thanx twinke

Originally posted by: aravi

abbey teri toh.. kithe gaya mera PM???????????😆 so sorry i forgot...i was half sleep when i was pming...will do next time pakkanewaz firstly after d lonnnnggggg wait u give us such a smallllll prt n ask 4 lonnnggg commentsnot fair at all😆u call this a small part😲 aravi it took me forever to write it!!!!!!!! n i 've already said i think angad is d prince charming here yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!well u will know in next update newaz anju was so cute😛 here but angad was d best 😉isn't he always😳d way he could read everybody's thots was amazing yaar😆😆😆!!!!!!!! but krips seemed offended here n kavya feeling J widout ne reasonhe had a very good reason....ANJALI n den angad sensing all dis purposely c/d anju "his sweetheart" aawwww... so nottyyyyy yeah afterall he is angad i hate manthan nehow ,just can'y stand him u noe but i wonder wen u introducing us wid kavya n party 's powers hmmmm???????? in the next partwaiting 4 d next part ............. me too😉 luv aravi

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

its a really nice part!!thanx dear...lol i missed u even i love d angad-anjali relationship!! and angad calling her sweetheart to tease kavya was damn cute n naughty!!u r going to get more of it kavya was really cute getting jealous for no reason!!oh come on he has all the reasons angad is really sumthing😆 i will be a good girl and second that lol luvd his comments and enjoyed his mind readig part alot!! amaan a chamelion 😆i think kripz will hate angad now..u r on right track lol.waiitng for d next prt..esp for more ka scenes n ak too :)i m repeating myself but ur wish is my command

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab aprtthanx yaar

angad is a real sweet heart.... so caring... wonder what is his secret???u will know in next part

kavaya surely seems to b fallen for anjali...he dare not.😉

continue soon