Sacrifice (AK,AR,NP) Note PG 22 (26/10) - Page 14

awesome part!!

a very well written part..good going..👏 please continue soon..😊

Wow nyc part...gud 2 c d romantic part of Shiv!! Bt I thnk d update wz really shrt!! Srry!! I wanna noe hu tat gal is hu Adi burnt & hu's Tia?? mayb dey bod r d same!! That's wt it soundz 2 mee lykk!! Well hueva she iz hope shez nt a -ve character n hope she brings in some more excitement 2 d story.

wow shiv is sooo sweet he changed sooo fast wowo i love it.

fantastic part

In the beginning of the story I thought you are describining it in Karam Apna...style. Nice story but why are running the story so fast?

Great part👏.So Adi too have a bad past.Hope he gets rid of his past soon by Tia😊

cute part

wow gr8 part hun keep up da gd work!

Hey All,

I know you hate me now for not continuing this ff for so long, I have an explanation for that its just that I was busy with school I am in grade 12 so have to prepare for unis and there is so much homework but when I don't get homework I have to do other things also. Part 5 is almost done, now I want to post it by Saturday hopefully so please give me till then, also updates will probably take long now too sorry. And I don't have time to pm anymore eitherLso please check weekly for an update I will pm only if I have time I hope I didn't lose all my readers please forgive me.

Now Here is A Promo Just For Your PatienceJ:

Teaser

"Duh." Says Aman, well Tia slaps her forehead.

"Don't Bug him guys." Payal says.

"Why not." Aman says.

"Its not nice Honey." Payal says romantically so he will listen to her.

"Ha, don't play games with me Baby." Knowing exactly what she is doing.

"Aman you better listen to me." She gives him the look.

"Why?" He asks grinning.

"You know in our apartment we share the bed, well you won't be sleeping there anymore." She smirks well pretending to look at her nails.

"Okay I will stop." He replies scared of what she is planning to do.