Sacrifice (AK,AR,NP) Note PG 22 (26/10) - Page 11

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Kaj! thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
they r finally one! yay! i hope this isnt fake from shiv's side
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Posted: 17 years ago

fab part

m glad that now they have become one.
i really wanna know about shiv's past.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: superstar15

Part Three

Neha comes back to the reality, she is about to go upstairs when the phone rings, she picks it up 'Hello.' she says. 'Neha' the person says to her. 'Yeah Shiv.' she says back.

'I'm sorry about this morning I was upset.' he says tensed.

'Really.' she says almost happy.

'Yeah meet me at Ritz Cafe for lunch ok.' he says smiling.

'Ok I will bye.' she says excited.

'Bye.' he says relieved.

She starts dancing around, looking through her closet to find something to wear for lunch. Why am I excited, she thought, she starts to blush. Could I be falling in love, she thinks. As she dances around, the phone rings, she picks it up.

'Shiv why did you call.' she says happy.

'It's not Shiv Honey, it's Payal sweety.' she says smirking.

'Oh..um Payal, hey what did you need.' she says embarrassed.

'Nothing just wanted to talk but why are you so happy.' she says grinning.

'Shiv invited me for lunch and I can't decide what to wear.' she pouts.

'Wear the black and white Poke a Dot dress.' she says knowingly.

'Oh Yeah, that's a good one, bye.' she says.

'Okay bye Hun.' she hangs up. So does Neha.

Ritz Cafe

Where is he, he was supposed to be here at twelve, it's already twelve thirty, I've been here for half an hour, she thinks. As she was lost in her thoughts, Shiv came and kissed her cheek and sat down across her. She sees him and pouts in anger.

'Sorry, I know you're upset that I am late, but I got stuck because of a last minute meeting.' he says sincerely.

'I forgive you, now let's eat I am hungry.' she says in one breath.

'Okay.' he grins.

The waiter arrives and they order their food. After dinner, they share a yummy chocolate cake. Since Neha came from taxi, Shiv decided to take her out for the rest of the day. They went to the beach and just watched the waves, thinking of life. They played around in the beach. As they are enjoying their day, imagine this song:

http://www.musicindiaonline.com/p/x/4CmmMQWklt.As1NMvHdW/

Bachna Ae Haseeno- Aahista Aahista

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Dekh loon yeh khwab main
Ke raaton mein tu aa key eh kahega
Ke tu ji rahi hai meri zindagi
Sochi kya baat hai
Yeh ankhon se tu dheere se sunega
Kyun na rok loon main yeh din yahin

Kissi se bhi na
Kahenge hum na
Yahin pe kho jayenge

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho' ho'.
Hua yeh pehli bar
Ho'ho..ho'
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Mujhse ik pal mila
Yeh lamhe saare sab se chuppa lo
Teri jo kahani suna chala

Aur uss pal mein hi
Tum aa ke mujhe apna bana lo
Mujhko mera har ik kal mila

Phoolon ka hum na
Le ke bichauga
Khwabon mein kho jayenge

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Aahista aahista
Mujhe yakeen ho gaya
Aahista aahista
Yeh dil yahin kho gaya

Yun gira gira hai chand ya
Teri hai roshni
Yun udi udi si hai zameen
Aahista

Ho' ho'.ho'..
Hua yeh pehli baar
Ho'ho'ho..
Mujhe ho gaya hai pyaar

Neha and Shiv get back into the car and drive off home. Shiv looks at Neha and decides it's time for her to know the truth, they can't live like this forever. As they reach home, and go up to their room, Shiv calls Neha to the bed as he wants to talk to her.

'Neha.' he takes her hands in his.

'Yeah Shiv.' she says looking at him.

'I knew I should've told you this from the beginning instead of saying you're mine I wanted to say is that I love you, the only reason I didn't say it Neha was because I went through a bad past, I was afraid, the only reason I am like this is because of my past, but I want to us start fresh, I will tell you my past when I am ready is that okay, and if you don't want be with me it is okay I won't take the money I gave.' he says getting up turning from her.

Neha gets up and hugs him from behind and pressing her head to his back, leaving him shocked.

'If I wanted to leave you that would be my mistake as I have fallen in love with you, I understand your pain Shiv we can start fresh, I will wait till you're ready to tell me your past okay, I love you too I can't live without you.' she says happy.

With that, Shiv turns around and looks into her eyes, and sees just love. His lips descend towards her, and he softly touches his lips to her, the kiss turns more passionate, they don't realize when they started taking each others clothes off. They are now tangling around in white sheets, as Shiv waits, then he slips into Neha. Neha crys out in pleasure and a tear slips out of her eye. Shiv kisses the tear away. They fall asleep like that.

Scene Switches

'When do you think we should tell them?' a woman says.

'Soon.' a man says back.

'Aman you naughty boy what are you doing?' she says feeling him caressing her waist.

'What am I doing Payal?' he says naughtily.

She gives him an You-Know-What-I-Mean look. Yes, Payal and Aman are secretly dating for how long, the truth is since they have met. The fighting was just a fa'ade. They are sitting in the beach. Payal gets up and starts to walk so does Aman.

'You know Aman I love you a lot I don't want to hide this anymore.' she says seriously.

'I understand but Honey, you know my parents won't approve right away.' he says upset.

'Then how long am I to keep this relationship in the dark I want to tell Neha all about it.' she says sad.

'I know, I need time to convince my parents, can you give me the time.' he says consoling.

'Sure.' she says smiling now.

'Okay.' and they walk off.

Thanks For the Comments

Rhea

It was awesome! Loved it. Plz contine soon Rhea.😊 Your friend Harjot.
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Posted: 17 years ago

@pyari_pari- thanx yes they are together hehe. u will see shivs past soon. by the way wen r u continuing the ff u started.

@angullgrl91- thanx hun.

@Mimi_Rani- yep they are together alright no dreams. yes shiv needs to get rid of his insecurity if tells his past he will wen he is ready. thanx for the comment. love ya too

@monikaseth- thanx di for the comment. yes shiv loves her so much. use dar hai but his dar will be gone jab wo neha ko batayega ke uska past mein kya hua tha hehe. thak you so much di for the comment and welcum for the pm love ya.
@sun_423- thank you will try to cont on saturday
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one⭐️ so sweet and awwsome😊 to gud😉😳 so aman and payal r dating😉😳 oye hoah😳😆 such a sweet one😊 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"A SINGLE ROSE IN ANY COLOR-indicates simplicity and gratitude
2 ROSES- mutual feelings
3 ROSES- I love you
7 ROSES- I'm infatuated with you
9 ROSES- We'll be together forever
10 ROSES- You are perfect
11 ROSES- You are My Treasured One
12 ROSES- Be mine!
13 ROSES- Friends forever
15 ROSES- I'm truly sorry
20 ROSES- I'm truly sincere towards you
21 ROSES- I'm dedicated to you
24 ROSES- Forever yours
25 ROSES- Congratulations
36 ROSES- Remembering our romantic times
40 ROSES- My genuine love for you
50 ROSES- Unconditional love
99 ROSES- I will love you all the days of my life
101 ROSES- I'm completely devoted to you
108 ROSES- Will you marry me?
999 ROSES- I love you till the end of time!"

Than so much for your comment. yes aman and payal are dating secretly hehe. shiv
and neha will catch them i just gave some away hehe. i love the rose poem it is really
good.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Great part👏👏👏.Finally Neha and Shiv united😳.Payal and Aman are just acting infrontof Neha and Shiv and romancing behind them!😉When is Shiv going to reveal his past?😕Does his past wilaffect his relationship with Neha? 😕

Yeah they are together now.....yes payal and aman are sneaky......
im not going to tell you his past that easily or quickly.......as they say...
sabar kar phal meetha hota hai🤣😎....as i said u will see if his
past affects their relationship....man you've given me a new idea...
for a twist😈...thanx for the comment.
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Posted: 17 years ago
cute part
just loved it...
finally AK confessed their feelings... just loved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey! caught up with the first three parts!
wow is shiv possesive about neha huh
i feels so bad for her i mean seriously not allowing her to meet her parents is just cruel ...i hope he turns a little less possesive and allows her to meet her parents later on!
hmm wonder what his past is...i guess we will find out later on ...right? lol
anyway nice concept hun! 👏will be looking forward to reading more! continue when u can and sorry for my really late comment!
<3 choco🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
I'm commentin 4 d lst 2 prt here...srry cudnt comment due to hectic schedule...Ure FF is seriously rawkn.. I wz rilli happy 2 c em happy!!
Bt don u thnk thngs went a bit too fast? Bt neva mind...itz 4 d gud only I guess!!
Thnx 4 ure PM
Srry 4 d shrt comment
Plzzz cont soon...
Aishwarya
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaj!

they r finally one! yay! i hope this isnt fake from shiv's side

yeas they are and its NOT fake im not that mean

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