FF:Jaane Tu, Ya Jaane Na Pg12 Pt9 Updated - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: nidhieya

mmmmmmmmmmmmm i dunno nything.....ranbir wont cum back but he will be our detective for truth no.1!!! (y ayaan is behind kanya)!

Nidheya

Oooooooooo, interesting!!!!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
i would like 2 thank u for da pm
i jst read ur update it was amazing
sori i replied late
otherwise amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
yaar y do u keep thnking me 4 pms??? itz been a habit nw naa????? nyways thnx!!!!
Nidheya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 9
Ranbir is sad and upset. He is living in a hotel suite now. Pia cried a lot but she knew whatever she did Ranbir wouldn't come back. She missed him so much. He was a fatherly figure to her. Never in her life did she ever feel a father's love. But since Ranbir came to visit she felt that she always had a father. As if there never had been a hole. Now it was all over. She couldn't believe that her mother would be so mean.
Kanya- Pia! Pia! Yahaan aawo!
Pia- Kya hain?
Kanya- Aaj mein aur Ayaan dinner ke liye bahar jaane waale hain. You will stay right here and do your homework. Dinner's in the microwave heat it when you are hungry and have it. Watch only half an hour of TV. I mean Suite Life Of Zack and Cody. That show does rock! And you will sleep at 9:30 pm sharp. Do you understand?
Pia- Okay. When will you return?
Kanya- I dont know. But when I am back, that is if it is after 9:30 and you are not asleep you will be grounded for two months.
Pia- You never ground me.
Kanya- Ayaan thinks punishment is the best way to keep brats under control.
Pia- Brat? You are calling me a brat? All these years with you I was the best daughter ever and suddenly I become a brat?
Kanya- Dont you dare talk back to me! Now keep quiet and go inside.
Pia- Mom but.........
Kanya- Just listen to me okay?
Pia- Okay.
Kanya- Good. Now I am leaving.
Pia sadly goes inside and starts crying. Kanya leaves. Pia goes to the balcony and makes sure that Ayaan and Kanya have left. Then she takes a coat, wear's some socks, packs clothes in her school bag, ties up her hair and leaves the house. She comes back inside and takes a little food. After that she runs down, takes her bicycle and starts cycling. She cycles for a long time and she reaches a bus stop. Did I forget? Pia also took some money with her.
IN THE BUS STOP
Pia hides inside the bus. After rolling for two hours the bus reaches a halt in Pearl Hotel. The passengers get out and Pia also creeps out. The she runs inside Pearl Hotel. The receptionist is shocked.
Rec- What do you want?
Pia- Is Mr. Ranbir staying here?
Rec- Kaunsa Ranbir?
Pia- Mmmmmm Ranbir Nanda?
Rec- Room number 2589. Aap unke?
Pia- Beti hoon.
Rec- Beti hokar papa ke surname nahin jante ho? LOL!
Pia- Actually he and mom are divorced so mom married someone esle and my surname has been that since.
Rec- Okay okay. You may take the elevator. 20th floor. Turn right 4th house to the left.
Pia- Thank you. Have a nice day.....I mean night!
Rec- Thank you! Sweet kid! U too!
Pia- Sure!
Pia goes in to the elevator, goes to the 20th floor and finally gets to Ranbir's door. Then she starts knocking at the door.
IN THE ROOM
Ranbir is wearing only his bathrobe and has shaving cream on. He opens the door warily without knowing anything. He is shocked when he saw Pia.
Ranbir- PIA?
Pia runs inside, shuts and locks the door, throws her stuff onto Ranbir's bed and jumps into Ranbir's arms.
Ranbir- Pia what are you doing here?
Pia- Arent you happy to see me?
Ranbir- Sure I am but where is your mom?
Pia- I ran away from home.
Ranbir- Whattttt?
Pia- yes.
Ranbir- Are you crazy? Come with me. I will drop you home.
Pia- I dont wanna go home.
Ranbir- Your mother will be worried.
Pia- Who cares about her? I mean she hardly cares for me.
Ranbir- But she is your mother.
Pia- I want to stay with you.
Pia explains how she took a bus and all and came here.
Ranbir- But how did you know I am staying here?
Pia- when I was surfing the net I found out that you were making inquiries about this hotel and I thought you might be staying here. I took a lucky guess and here I am.
Ranbir- Pia what if I weren't staying here? What yould you do then?
Pia- I dont care. I would search for hotels all over the world until I found you.
Ranbir- if your mother finds out---
Pia- She wont. I have deleted browsing history.
Ranbir- She will think I made you come here.
Pia- I wont go with her. I hate her. And she wont even care if I am there or not. You know she went for a dinner date with Ayaan and heaven knows when she would come back.
Ranbir- That is not the point.....
Pia- All she cares about is Ayaan Ayaan and Ayaan. I want to live here with you and I will live here with you.
Ranbir- Okay. Go have a bath and relax. I will order hot chocolate and dinner.
Pia- Okay.
Pia happily goes into the restroom and takes a bath happily.
Thats all for now guys. Next update I will describe Kanya'Ayaan date and also her reaction! Hope you all liked it! This part shows the bond Ran-Pia share! Its lovely isnt it?
END OF PART 9
Nidheya
Edited by nidhieya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
thats it?
nyways thnx u 2 guys!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
I like it... sorry for posting so late... busy lately ..... hope kanya gets some sense in her head...
poor ranbir n pia.... hope alls good....
update soon yaaršŸ˜ƒšŸ‘

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