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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desi_angel101



U sure afreen? I mean I'd really really luv to its just that I've never done it before just read all ur parts n I wudnt wanna screw anything up... 😳

richa.....give it a try....am sure it will be better than mine😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
y can't v celebrate armi n ridz's wedding anniversary...
bth of dem planng 2 suprise each other

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: firdous


<FONT face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color=#ff0000 size=3>richa.....give it a try....am sure it will be better than mine😉



Oye don't say that yaar I don't think I'll ever b that good!

K guys I'm continuing! Joote belan taiyaar rakhna 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww afreen dat wass soo cute
very nce
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Posted: 17 years ago
guys k I'm updating in about half an hour so plz no one else continue for now 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
willl be waiting for ur update:D
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Posted: 17 years ago

Okay guys so SKL ke itihaas mein yeh pehli baar hua hai ke main ek part likhrahi hoon in fact I've never done anything like this before isliye plzzz bear with me n any mistakes that I'll probably make...nd I wanna dedicate this part to all my SKL friends but especially 3 people: Afreen (for encouraging me), Yachu di (for being her sweet self) and Amy di (wherever she is lol missing her)...

Plz mujhe zyaada mat maarna!

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Armaan: hey...mujhe lunch ke liye jaana hai...c u at 8:00 at home...luv u sooo much..byee

Ridhima: love u too...bye

Armaan hangs up and smiles, then leaves for the canteen.

Meanwhile on the other hand Ridhima hangs up and lets out a sigh filled with longing. She looks at the clock and frowns when she sees the time. "Abhi sirf 1 baje hain! Matlab saat ghante..." she thinks, then hears Arima crying from upstairs and goes and checks on her. She takes her into her lap and soothes her and says, "I know baby, Papa ke bina saat ghante to kya, saat minute bhi rehna mushkil hai, isn't it?" Arima smiles and Ridz tickles her, and then angel starts laughing her cute little baby laugh. "Chalo, ab angel aur mama kya karenge? Hmm, let's go watch TV..." And she scoops angel into her lap and takes her downstairs n switches on the TV. She keeps flipping the channels and then she sees MTV and a song is playing...

Dil deewana, bin sajna ke mane na

Dil deewana bin sajna ke mane na

Yeh pagla hai, samjhaane se samjhe na

Dhak dhak dole is us bole din raina

Yeh pagla hai samjhaane se samjhe na

Ridz looks over at a pic of armi on the side table. She lays arima down on the couch n goes over and picks it up, then sits back down all the while just staring at it and smiling.

Duniya maange apni muraadein main to maangoon saajan

Rahe salaamat mera sajna aur sajna ka aangan

Is ke siva dil rab se kuch bhi chaahe na

Yeh pagla hai samjhaane se samjhe na

At those words Ridz remembers how armi hurt his hand, and how he cried when they weren't together the night before, and her eyes fill with tears. She looks down at his smiling face in the picture and says, "Itna pyaar karte ho tum mujhse armaan, aur main hoon ke hamesha tumhe dard deti hoon...pata nahi maine aisa kya kiya jo tum meri zindagi mein aaye aur mujhe itni khushiyan di... There can't b a more lucky girl than me, itna sensible, loving, caring, and not to mention HOT husband jo mila hai;)...jaana tum ghar kab aaoge??? I miss u..."

Jee yeh chaahe bana ke aanchal tumko lapetun tan pe

Kabhi yeh sochoon main udjaoon tumko liye gagan pe

Aur bhi kuch hai dil ke iraade, kya Kehna?

Ridz picks up arima and starts dancing around the house, mouthing the lyrics while arima giggles in delight.

Yeh pagla hai samjhaane se samjhe na

Dil deewana bin sajna ke mane na

Yeh pagla hai samjhaane se samjhe na

The song ends and Ridz sits back down. She picks the pic up again and says, "Armaan I luvvvv u soo much plzz plzz aajao aaj tumhari bahut zyaada yaad aarahi hai..."

Just then the phone rings. She picks up and guess who it is?

Ridz: ARMAAANNN!!!!

Armi laughs: Lagta hai kisiko meri kuch zyaada yaad aarahi thi?

Ridz: Haan jaanu...tum jaldi se aajao tumhare bina man nahi lagraha hai

Armi gets naughty: Lekin mera to yahaan poora man lagraha hai!

Ridz, confused: Matlab...?

Armi: Matlab yahaan do nayi nurses hain...aur wo poore din mujhe, u kno, assist kar rahe the;D

Ridz gusse se laal peele neele sab kuch hojaati hai: Armaan mazaak mat karo

Armi: mazaak nahi babes, sach mein, two very hot...i mean nice nurses have been with me all day and...

Ridz: naam to batao un dono ka, main wahan aake unhe aise theek karti hoon ke unhe unki nani yaad aajayegi!!!!!

Armi starts laughing uncontrollably: Oh God, its just too much fun freaking u out like dat basket...

Ridz: Kya! Tum aur tumhare ghatia mazaak.... I hate u armaan!

Armi: but I lu...

Just then the phone gets cut off and snatched out of armaan's hand. Shocked he turns around and then almost faints from fright as he sees a fuming mad Dr. Keerti there.

Keerti: DR. ARMAAN!!!!!! Aaj aapko hua kya hai? Pehle police ke chakkkar mein itna late aaye, aur phir do baar cellphone ke saath pakde gaye... pata nahi kya important baatein kar rahe hain...lekin is baar to apne patients ko chhod kar??!!!

Armaan scared as hell: Dr. Keerti, I'm very sorry

Keerti: U shud be! Ek aur baar agar maine aapko time waste karte hue dekhliya to aap ko apne phone se juda karke aap ko night duty doongi is that clear??

Armaan: Yes Dr. Keerti

She walks away

Armaan: Yaar meri love story mein sirf yehi do villains hai...ek mera phone connection aur doosri ye K...k...k...keerti...haha main to bilcul Shah Rukh ke tarah bolne laga hoon I'm just a little more handsome:D...but anyways Armaan beta lag ja kaam pe...

On the other hand Ridz is totally mad...How could he play such a prank on her...She looks over at Arima lying there and picks her up. "Dekha aapne beta, kaise aap ke papa ne mama ko kitna daraaya?" Arima scrunches her cute little face up into a little frown... Ridz thinks for a moment and then a naughty smile comes onto her face. "Theek hai Dr.Armaan, two can play this game! If u think ur da best at this well then main bhi to tumhari biwi hoon ab dekhna tumhe mai kaise daraati hoon... Angel aap mama ki help karengi na?" Angel giggles. "Very good! Ab Armaan agar maine aaj tumhe zindagi ka sabse bada shock nahi diya to mera naam Dr. Ridhima Armaan Malik nahi!"

She looks at the clock. "2 baje...to taiyaar rehna Dr. Armaan Malik...cuz I'm coming hehehe"

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Alright I kno I kinda dragged this part but I have a really good idea for the next part, or at least I think its good, but I'll only write it if u guys liked this part so plzz comment n tell me what u thot...and if u hav to throw something at me then throw laddoos not jootas lol

Luv Richa

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey awsome part yaar!!!!!!!!


LOVED IT!!!!!

it seems like riddhi was missing her JANU very much !!!!!!!!

Lets see wat ridz is planning!!!!

and armu got caught by GABBAR 2nd time! (heheh) poor him! looks like he had a bad day!



PLZZZZ continue soon!!!!!!
Edited by ami_princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg u kidding i luved it
u sure dis is ur first time lool
seriosuly amazing wrk it was great
ooo wundr wot ridz is gna do to gt
her payback really lkin 4wrd to readin more of ur
updtes to continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

7:30, Sanjeevani

Armaan is at his locker. He keeps looking in there and can't find his phone. He then remembers the incident when Dr Keerti snatched the phone out of his hands and thinks, 'Yaar shayad Dr. Keerti ne mera phone leliya...unko dhoondna padega. Subhe se basket ne pata nahi kitne msgs bheje honge...hey bhagwan aadha ghanta?? Aadha ghanta kaise katega...' Ye sochte sochte he goes and checks all over the place for Dr. Keerti. Lost in his thoughts he reaches the nurse station and then all of a sudden stops right there. He sees Ridhima standing right there in front of him. She's wearing a blue sari and the magic winds of sanjeevani are blowing her hair all over her face. Armaan is totally mesmorised. He slowly walks towards her, eyes fixed only on her face. He comes in front of her. She says slowly, 'armaan...' He whispers back, ' Ridhima' He takes her hands in his and pulls her closer to him. She says his name again more frantically this time. He says, 'Don't worry, I luv u jaanu, koi nahi dekhega.' He closes his eyes and leans forward to kiss her when all of a sudden he hears a scream. 'DR. ARMAAN!!!!!!' He opens his eyes and with a jerk almost faints for the second time again as he realises that he had been about to kiss...u guessed it...DR. KEERTI!!

Keerti: Dr. Armaan! Aap hosh mein to hai na??!! Yeh aap kya kar rahe the? Yeh kaisi batameezi hai??

Armaan, dumbfounded, apologises and says: 'Ridhima...I mean dr keerti...wo mai yeh kehne aaya tha ke plz mujhe mera phone waapas dedijiye I promise agli baar aisa nahi hoga mai kabhi duty chhod kar phone par baat nahi karunga!' Armaan begs.

Keerti: Um, dr. armaan, aapka cellphone mere paas nahi hai...

Armaan: Huh? to phir kiske paas hai?

Keerti shakes her head and says: Pyaar sach much insaan ko andha kardeta hai

Armaan: What?

Keerti: Dr. Armaan shayad aap apni biwi ke khayaalon mein itne khoye hue hain ke aap ko aas paas kuch dikhai nahi deta. Zara dekhiye aap ke haath mein kya hai?

Armaan looks down and blushes with embarrassment as he realises that his phone had been in his hand all this time.

Armaan: Oh um,uh...sorry Dr. Keerti

Keerti smiles and shakes her head. Armaan quickly turns away and sees Rahul and Atul standing right behind him. They'd seen everything. They wait for keerti to leave and then start howling with laughter. Armaan scowls and says, 'Abbe ja saalon dekhli teri dosti dost pe hasrahe hain idiots...Maine tum dono ke girls ko pataane mein itni madat ki aur tum dono...' Rahul and Atul just keep on laughing, and trying to breathe Atul says, 'Yaar aisa nahi hai...lekin yaar teri shakal dekhne layak thi...' and then he just collapses laughing. Rahul says, 'Yaar I understand...Bechara hamara ammy...Jaana tha Japan...pahaunch gaye Chine!!' They're both on the floor laughing...armaan is really embarassed and starts to walk away and then they start singing "Kahi pe nigahen kahi pe nishaana" and then they see armaan's 'I'm- gonna -kill- u- guys look' and immediately run from there. Armaan quickly leaves Sanjeevani, thinking, 'Yaar if I don't c ma basket soon to I'm gonna land up in some paagal khaana.' Little did he know what was waiting for him at home...

8:00, Armidz House

Armaan reaches home. He opens the door and sees no one there. He comes in and calls out Ridhima's name. 'Hey angels, I'm home!' Armi goes upstairs into the baby's room and sees Arima lying awake in her cot. He goes and picks her up and hugs her against his chest. 'Kaisi hai papa ki angel? Achchi hai?' Angel giggles and says 'Pa!' Armaan smiles. There was absolutely no feeling in the world as beautiful as when his baby called his name. He couldn't be happier...well actually he could because he was missing Ridz. 'Angel, aapki mamma kahan hai aapko pata hai?' He all of a sudden hears Ridhima scream from their room, 'Armaan!!!'

He gets worried and puts Arima down in her cot, then runs to their room. He opens the door and stops dead in his tracks. The whole room is dark and lit up with candles. There are rose petals on the bed, and sitting in the middle of the bed wearing a knee length and quite revealing red nightie is Ridhima. Armaan is shellshocked to see her in these type of clothes. Looking at Armaan's expression Ridz almost doubles up in laughter, but somehow controls herself. 'No,' she thinks, 'if I laugh then I'll give everything away.'

She puts on a seductive smile and says in a very sultry voice, 'Welcome home Armaan. I've been waiting sooo long for you baby. ' His mouth drops wide open. She then gets up slowly starts walking towards him, and he keeps backing up against the wall, afraid of what had happened to his sweet and innocent Ridz. She corners him up against the wall and whispers very slowly to him, 'Pata hai main tumhare intezaar mein kab se bekaraar hoon?' He gulps, 'K...k...kaun ho tum and what have u done with my wife?' Ridhima could feel the laughter within her boiling up, but she did her best to suppress it. Instead she flashed him a slow smile and then turned and walked away from him a little. Armaan gave a little sigh of relief, only to have a near heart attack when he saw her shut the door and then come back towards him, that same sultry look on her face. Armaan was genuinely scared. He thought, 'Yaar did she hit her head today and I don't know about it? Or then did she accidentally drink something...maybe she hasn't been getting enough sleep cuz of angel keeping her up so she's just losing it...oh god why is she looking at me like that...not that I mind or anything...uh oh music...what is going on??'

Ridhima switches on the tape player and begins to dance...

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,...dances around himdeewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,...at this she looks at his burnt hand n feels like kissing it but holds herself back cuz she knows that any sweetness would give her awaymushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane ...pulls armi closer to her yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paaya...puts her arms around himpyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye-2...takes his hand and kisses itjaane kyun badle main, jaan loon nazrana...continues wid her dance yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain,...puts his hand to her heart, armi pretty much ready to faintaane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain,-2 ...tugs at his shirt buttons;)bhool ka na tujhe dil ka yeh nagrana ... armaan apni izzat bachaane ki koshish karta hai lekin ridz won't give up yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewanadeewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane, yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,...finishes dancing and comes real close to himdeewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,... gives him a long passionate kiss They break apart, and Armaan begins to swoon. 'Ridz, what happened to you...tum pehle kabhi aise...i mean...' Ridz naughtily replies, 'Badi khatarnak beemari hai: dil ka dard...jiska sirf aap hi ilaaj karsakte hain...Dr. Armaaaann... aao na jaanu...mere paas...mujhe ilaaj ki sakt zaroorat hai' Armaan is pretty much well ready to die. Ridz takes one more look at his expressions and can't control herself anymore. She begins to break down laughing, while poor armi is left scratching his head and on seeing her laugh like that gets even more worried. 'Basket yeh sab...' But our poor basket is just too busy rolling on the floor laughing like a madwoman. She finally catches her breath to say, 'Kyun armaan, main tumhari un nurses ke tarah hot nahi hoon kya?' She looks at him again and cracks up. 'Darr gaye na? Dekho apna chehra to dekho! HAHAHA' and she begins her laugh riot once more. It finally sinks into Armi that she was doing this as revenge, and all the naughtiness comes back into him. 'To matlab ab ilaaj ki zarurat nahi hai?' He smirks and she looks at him and thinks 'Oh sh** I don't like that shaitan expression on his face.' He begins to corner her. 'Come on na jaanu. Waise bhi mai doctor hoon...ilaaj karna mera kaam hai...khaas karke tum jaise special patients keliye...kyun basket?' Now Ridz is the one scared saying, 'Armaan, no armaan plzz mat karna aisa...' but armi won't stop and pins her against the wall.... ************************************************************************Okay guys I'm done for today some1 else can continue n make up how armi gets his revenge lol... hope u liked it! srry agar kuch zyada hogaya then tell me n I'll edit it. Luv Richa
Edited by desi_angel101 - 17 years ago

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