FF: Dil To Hai Dil Part 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Maybe it sound filmi but i dont care
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This fanfic has nothing to do with any serial.. its just made up story..

Anyways.. my charecters are

Raj Malhotra: married ? businessman

Kiran Malhotra: Rajs sister
Priya: Rajs wife..

Prem Kapoor : a playboy and Rajs best friend..

Bua: the very wcked bua

Vijay Khanna: Kirans fianc?o:p>

More will come up later..

The concept:

Raj Malhotra is a known.. businessman.. is married to his college friend.. Prem rajs best friend.. is a playboy who cant get serious with anyone.. whenever he is in trouble he calls up Kiran to help him out.. ..Rajs sister Kiran is getting engaged to Vijay Khanna.. but the same day.. Raj & Kirans bua.. discloses some fact about ., Kiran & Prems one night together.. hearing this .. all are shocked.. even Kiran & Prem r shocked how it came out.. Vijay .. breaks the engagement.. and leaves..

No one Is listening to Kiran or Perm.. few years later.. one day Kiran and Prem meets outside India.. in a coffee shop..

So my question is for u all..

Whats gonna happen now..

What will Kirans brother say..

kya hai kahani na aanth
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds interesting

Continue Soon
I think they will decide to get married...?
Her brothers will most likely be aginst it
Do Continue Soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1..

It's morning.. the servants are making breakfast.. a car stops outside.. their house.. and handsome guy comes into the.. house.. and start calling out for Raj..

Raj: arey aayaa.. Prem tum bhi na..

His wife priya.. comes with wallet and watch..

Raj: yeh Prem bhi na.. hamesha aisa hi rehey gha.. he will never change..

Priya: uisay ladkiyoon se fursaat miley to na.. hamesha ladkiyen ke pechay hi hota hai..

Raj: arey yad aaya.. Kiran .. where is she..

Priya: aaj din kya hai..

Raj: Wednesday

Priya: aur Date..

Raj: 21st may.. Ohh yeah.. Aaj to Vijay ka cricket match tha..

At the cricket ground.. Vijay was about to the batting.. he looks around.. but don't find Kiran there..

Friend 1: arey Vijay kya hua.. lets start..

Vijay: im waiting for Her..

Friend 2: arey I don't think she will come now.

Vijay: no woh aaye ghi

Its traffic jam.. and we see someone walking top of the cars.. everyone is shouting ..to make the person stop..

The person jumps down.. and turns around.. its KIRAN.. she says sorry.. and run further..

Vijay is waiting.. for her.. even the match is stopped coz of him.. all are looking at each other..

At the same time Kiran comes .. and Vijay sees.. her with a smile on his face.. she waves at him.. and says good luck.. with her hands..

The match goes well.. and they wins.. vijay comes toward Kiran.. she congrats him..

Vijay: its not accepted..

Kiran: why..

Vjay: coz u r late..

Kiran: late .. par aayi to sahi..

Vijay: come on Kiran.. waisay .. papa wants to meet ur brother to fix the engagement and wedding date..

Kiran blushes..

Kiran leaves.. after it..

At Malhotra house.. Prem is still waiting for Raj to come down.. Raj is talking to Priya.. while.. coming down..

Prem: Raj my friend.. happy 5th Wedding anniversary..

He hugs Raj.. and is about to hug Priya.. Raj stops him..

Raj: she is ur bhabhi..


Prem: ok fine.. but accept to kar meri congrats..

Priya goes in to the kitchen

Raj: chal ki.. but tell me .. aaj to meri wedding anniversary nahin hai to phir kyon..

Prem:its coz im not here on the date.. im out of country..

Raj: ohh .. acha to yeh baat hai.. waisay .. tell me.. kab tak iin ladkiyoon ke pichay .. bhagta rehey gha. Shaadi kyon nahin kar leta..

Prem: shaadi.. lol.. Sab se acchi ladki to tum ne le li aab main kya karroon…

Raj: hey ..

Prem: joking.. man..

Raj: ok chalo .. lets have breakfast..

Few days later.. Prem is sitting with another friend.. in restaurant… when a girl come toward Prem.. and hugs him..

Prem: hi… jyoti.

Jyoti: why didn't u call me .. u r so mean ..

Prem: actually kya hua woh..

Prems friend.. Anup was just looking at the tamasha.. coz he knew Prem will be in trouble now…

Jyoti: well now .. I want to be with u sometime.. u always makes excuses.. come on.. chalo..

Anup: well main chalta hoon.. u both can stay here..

Anup leaves and both were about to have lunch together.. Prem was about to drink .. when someone one shouted "Hi Prem" he threw out the water.. he looks back .. and its another girl.. Naina..

Prem: (thinking) marr gaya..

Naina: tum yahan… aur yeh kaun hai..

Jyoti: I wanna ask the same.. who is she Prem..

Prem: yeh woh.. I ..

Naina: are u cheating on me..

Prem: no ..

Jyoti: so u r cheating on me then.

Prem: no actually..

Both slaps him.. and leaves..

At Malhotra house.. all fo them r laughing..

Prem: its not funny..

Raj: it is funny.. I told u to change urself par ..

Raj got a business call.. he leaves.. Priya goes for some work.. Kiran is laughing from upstairs..

Prem: tumhein buhat hanssi a rehi hai..

Kiran: (while coming down) aur nahint o kya aaisay kaam ka aisa hi anjaam hota hai..


Prem. So tum hi betado .. mujhe kya akrna chaiye..

Kiran (looks at him) don't try to flirt with me ..

She leaves..

Prem: ufffff kaash yeh raj ki Bahin na hoti..

To Be Continued..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG..loved the story yaara...ufff aur waise aapki stories hamesha MINDBLOWING hote hain..i have read ur earlier fanfics and i know u will give us a marvelous story..looking forward to the next part...

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