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Faiza

@*F^a^i^z^a*

Voyager

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

lovely part; I loved every bit of it. angads mysterious charcter is quite amusing, I guess a father being in jail has its affects on the child, lol but kripa's freaking out was fnny; I was cracking up. it actually reminded of edward and bella's first meeting in twilight, lol the way he gared except angad spoke a few sarcastic words, awesoem part; I loved it; ur story is on my favourites, lol, keep it up choco

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Rima

@Rimsie.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#42

awesome part

loved the way how you showed angad's descriptive character

AHHH!!OMG!! he sounds so hot and sexy!!

wow!! prem and angad in fight!!! that's def interesting!!

can't wait for more of AK scenes

do cont soon

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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#43

haha!! hoody boy!! kripa is soo cute! and angad is sooo hottt! lol! well obviously hoody boy is angad! but i liked his characterization...different from all ur other fan fics! kripa is really something isn't she? man she makes me laugh like crazy! soo she gots the hots for her hoody boy! but who wouldn't?

and aww angad's dad in jail...wonder why...and omg! suspension twice! whoa! but he gets good grades soo not bad! hmm i like this bad boy slash good boy angad lol!

great part! looved it!

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aditi

@AngelsHeaven

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

i am in love with the hoody boy.... plz set me up with him....

fab part

just loved it...

continue soon

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Kaj!

@Kaj!

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

lmao...kripa is so funny. love this girl. n her interaction with her hoody boy was hot n cute at the same time. "u sure u dont wanna take a photo" lol

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

awesome part cont soon plz👏

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Oh it's funny really😆Now Kripa will be happy,since she has seen the face behind the hoody and nomore she has to turn behind in the English class and try to see his face again and trouble her English teacher🤣Gosh it was real fun reading Kripa's feelings.I am sure she got attracted towards his sexy and deep voice and handsome face.Awesome part.Continue.....

Edited by teri_susan - 17 years ago