Rhymes - Page 21

Originally posted by: Tintina

bohot khub.... 👏 mei our ek rhyme likhneki koushish karrahihu....


lakin agar shamit aur arpita ajatehe
to pure fg mei andheri cha jatehe

aisa hum janta kabhie na pura hone dete😉

Nanha sa ek phool khila
Kashmir ki haseen vaadiyon mein
uski mahak se qayanat yoon mahki
jaise mahki nahin thi sadiyon mein

Goliyon ke goonj mein pal kar bhi
Naaz hain usme gulistan ki
bade bade sapne sanjoye
raah dhoonde usne suron ke carvaan ki

Khushboo se uske mahak utha sara desh
kya kanyakumari kya bombay kya kashmir
har sache dil mein khich gayee
uske masoom khoobsurat si tasveer

Logon ne jab uski hansi udayee
khada raha wo chattan banke
himmat nahi haari kabhi bhi
chahe kitne aasoon chalke

Jab jeet ka naggada baja
saare duniya fakra se jhoom uthi
Jhooton ka phir hua mu kala
Sachchai ki jeet hui

Nice one Sheela.. Are you a poet?

hi ammara tumar rhyming kahan tuk aii 😆

IM NOT A POET BUT I'LL TRY 😉

kaun hai tumara sabse pyara?
tum hogaya uska deewana...

mein sirf ek ki fan hu
aur woh hai hamara SHAMU (Shamit Bhaiya) 😃

sorry if it wasnt good...enjoy anyways 😳

Originally posted by: amnu

Nanha sa ek phool khila
Kashmir ki haseen vaadiyon mein
uski mahak se qayanat yoon mahki
jaise mahki nahin thi sadiyon mein

Goliyon ke goonj mein pal kar bhi
Naaz hain usme gulistan ki
bade bade sapne sanjoye
raah dhoonde usne suron ke carvaan ki

Khushboo se uske mahak utha sara desh
kya kanyakumari kya bombay kya kashmir
har sache dil mein khich gayee
uske masoom khoobsurat si tasveer

Logon ne jab uski hansi udayee
khada raha wo chattan banke
himmat nahi haari kabhi bhi
chahe kitne aasoon chalke

Jab jeet ka naggada baja
saare duniya fakra se jhoom uthi
Jhooton ka phir hua mu kala
Sachchai ki jeet hui

Amnu that was awsome👏.U rocks😉

Originally posted by: koenigbobo

hi ammara tumar rhyming kahan tuk aii 😆

Hi sameer,bus sab in logon ki meherbani hai k is rhyming ko jaari rakha hau hai.😛

Originally posted by: sapnokirani24

IM NOT A POET BUT I'LL TRY 😉

kaun hai tumara sabse pyara?
tum hogaya uska deewana...

mein sirf ek ki fan hu
aur woh hai hamara SHAMU (Shamit Bhaiya) 😃

sorry if it wasnt good...enjoy anyways 😳

Rhyming to sahi nahi thi but atleast u tried it👏 .gr😛.u rocks.😉

Originally posted by: lucky_rose

Rhyming to sahi nahi thi but atleast u tried it👏 .gr😛.u rocks.😉

thx 4 ur sympathy of ymrhyming skills 😆