Trauma... Kahani ab tak..New Episode too

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EPISODE 6:

The total gang takes time to settle. Seeing their old pals, they are too confused if they should be happy or be depressed at the thought of being kidnapped. They try to shout, yell for help but no one comes. They try to hit the doors, but it only hurts them. The fact that none of them had anything to eat or drink in the last 12 hrs makes it even worse. The start shouting for help again and this time the door opens. They are all scared but as it now seems routine, another person is thrown inside- no prizes for guessing who, yes kirthi it was. But kirthi was badly hurt, he has bruises all over his body. Evidenly all of them have been drugged before being kidnapped but kirthi seems to have put in some struggle.The guys go and free him and then repeat the same story. Suddenly a strange noise and smell fills the room.

Instead of being scared, all of them look at each other with a disgust in their face, sandeep and arijit who stood closer to rex started moving away from him wiht their fingers closing their nose and trying to stop their uncontrollable laughter. Later the whole gang realises and start laughing. Rexy turns whole red, he says, kya yaar.. maine raat ko thoda jyada khaliya tha, Qazi adds, har roz ki tarah...
The problems slowly start comign to them. No where to attend nature calls, no food, no water, hunger, tiredness and physical discomfort makes it miserable for them.

The door opens after nearly two hours and slowly a lady, whom they have never seen before walks in, dressed in a khakhi jeans and similar shirt and armed,she points to the girls and asks them to move out. they are all scared but dont speak anything. Amit and kirthi try to stop them but as the lady is armed and seemed like she is no mood to talk other than with the gun she is holding, they dont move an inch. The girls are taken and the guys are left alone. They have nothing to do expcept think and worry how the girls are. After an hour the girls come back, totally different, totally fresh and looking better this time. Suprisingly all of them had same dresses in different sizes , the guys ask what it was, they say nothign we just had breakfast. Now it was the guys turn , they are taken in to a common bathroom, with open showers. Qazi while in shower asked, yaar, ladkiyan bhi yahin ayi thi kya? Everyone laughs but
amit doesnt. He is serious and says nahin,
deepak : tujhe kaise pata?
Amit: yeah floor dekh rahe ho, yeah dry hai,even if they had tried to dry it, the walls, us par ek bhi pani kaa boond nahin hai, yeah alag bathroom hai.
sandeep: amit tu kya detective kaa part time kaam kartha hai?
Amit: common sense, jo shayad tum sab log wahin chod ke aagaye.
rex: gussa mat kar, jaldi nahan jyada time nahin hai.
Deepak: aur rex ko bhook bhi lag raha hai.
Kirthi: Yaar yeah kahan aagaye hum.
Amit: rajasthan.
Arijit: kya
Amit: shayad hum rajasthan main hai.
Shamit: tumhe kaise pata.
Amit: yeah pani, bahut garam hai. is mahine me, kaun se state mein itni garmi hoti hai?
rex: tumhe kaise pata, hum india mein hi hai
amit: kaun hum par, itna paisa waste karega? none of us are billionaires, and think, we are all here coz of FG. thats the only common thing between us here. so not for moeny not for anything, either they are gonna kill us for nothing or trade us.
Shamit: chalo, pehle kuch kha ke soch the hai.

They all come out of shower and food is kept on a table outside the common bathroom. they hog as if they have never seen any food before. The lady comes back and signs them to move back to their room. Arijit and rex stuff the remaining left over food in their pockets and leave. Due to to total exhasution of travel and now with the shower and food, the guys feel better and are all ready to sleep, but while walking back arijit has this discomfort feeling in his chest, and he falls flat on the ground. Shamit few steps ahead of him sees and yells arijit but hte lady hits him on his jaw and shamit also falls on teh ground. The rest of the gang just keep looking

EPISODE 5:

Aunbhav wakes up with a heavy feeling in his head. He finds it hard to look around , its pitch dark and the only thing he can see around is darkness. He is scared. He tries to recall what happened and when he realizes what happened to him, he gets even more scared... Mona!! Mona was with him during the exam. He saw her running towards him and seeing him being carried away... where is she? how is she? is she safe...? All kinds of thoughts cross his mind... he gathers his courage and moves his hands around and feels something.... yes someone else also is there beside him, on to his left, and when he moves to his right, there is someone lying there. He gets scared, but gathers courage to open his mouth and make a sound which seems like m..O...N...A... no response, he hardly could hear his own voice, then makes a bigger effort and MONA... MONA... some female voice starts conversation, tumhare awaz bahut surela hai par philhaal to aap khatre mein hain... he tried hard to remember the voice, none known. he was too scared but he asked,

kaun hai?

Female: amit, is that you?

anubhav: no , mein anubhav.

Female: anubhav, mein monica....

Anubhav takes time to place monica?? monica who? then realises yes that female who arijit voted for over shamit. he has hazaar qns but keeps to himself. he is more worried abt mona now.

Few minute pass, and the first rays of sun pass thru the small raised window of the small room .Anubhav has hope, he waits to see where mona is, but as time passes by and as light is thrown on all the people around him, he is suprised and more suprised. On to this left he finds amit, deepak, sandeep and on to his right arijit and shamit. he nearly faints and right in front of him , as if arranged in a different row are the girls, deepshika, chavi , gurpreet, monica and mona, yes there she is, still drowsy. he literally crawls to wake her up but disturbs the rest of the group. The group slowly wakes up, shamit wakes up to realise that arijit is right beside him and is even more shocked to see the rest of the gang. Amit , deepak and sandeep wake up and dont seem as shocked as others. Seeing each other ,everyone starts talking hyperly and asking questions. Shamit goes to amit and

shamit: amit, rex ne bola tha ki..

amit: shamit , tu kab aya? hum kal hi aagaye.

shamit: kal? kya baat kar rahe ho?

amit: shamit, do u realise that we all have been kidnapped.

The word kidnapped made everyone stop for a while. they are unable to think even more when the door opens with a bang. Four masked people are thrown in and the door closes equally fast. The earlier gang gathers courage to go near then and when they open the mask of the first person, they are confused if they should be shocked or be happy again. In sub-concious state was ruprekha, next to her was arpita, next was rex and Qazi. The group wakes all the four, and at first it seems more like a re-unioun to everyone than the fear of being kidnapped. After a lot of talking from everyone from all sides, amit finally yells,

junta, please , sab log chup raho... i think we are all kidnapped. There are two ways

Qazi stops and says: Acha hum kidnap hogaye. badi baat hain , mein ne zindagi mein....

arijit: qazi. chup kar re, amit ko bolne de

qazi: mein kyun....

SANDEEP: Qazi tu bhi kya..

rex: leechi tu chup kar re...

rex: shamit, hum kahan hain yaar

amit: SHUT UP!! EVeryone shut up.....

Qazi: sunlo bhayyi aur behanooo....agar hum kidnap hue to hum sab danger mein hain. boletho mere zone mein hain, aur mein danger zone ka king hun.so u should all listen to me.

The group just breaks in to smiles. A middle aged man in his armani , who is next door hearing to all these conversations smiles and leaves closing the main door where 8 heavily armed guard are posted.


Episode 4:

It was rex calling, shamit was irritated, but he took the call, rex was out of breath and was literally yelling and crying at the same time,

Rex: shamit

Shamit: rexy kyun ro raha hai? Kya hua?

Rex: amit… amit….

Shamit: kya hua amit ko…

Rex: amit ke ghar se phone aya, who kal se ghar wapas nahin aaya

Shamit: kya!!!!!

Rex; han mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai,

Shamit: mein Calcutta mein huin, arijit hospital mein hein and who jab test ke liye gaya, who gayab hogaya

Rex: what?

Shamit: haan, mein pagal ho raha huin tension se, par amit gaya kahan.

Rex: terekoo pata hai na, sab log gurpreet ke ghar gaya, chavvi, ,deepshika, Deepak, amit sab log gaye uske ghar and wahan se tere engagement mein anewale the

Shamit: then realized that none have turned for the engagement.

Rex: shamit ,shamit

Shamit coming back to his senses:, rexy who log mere engagement mein nahin aye…

Rex: kya? Tho sab log kahan gaye…..

A small shiver runs down shamits spine, but he is no mood to think about anyone else, he just thinks about arijit and he looks around, he doenst find arijits father who was just standing beside him, and then he runs out to the balcony of the floor, he sees everyone, the last thing he wanted at this time was to hear that arijit also is not found. He is franatically searching for arijit when he thinks he hears, shamit bhayya, faintly but clearly, he looks around, no everyone around is busy with their work, one more time and this time, he sees arijit, five men are holding him in a SUV and the back door , the luggage door is open and it was as if there was a display of arijit there, just for him to see, he wasted no time, he ran as fast as his long legs took him , fearing the SUV might go gone, but it was still there, but now the doors are closed. His heart beat increased and though in middle of the day, with the loud traffic and all the noise, he could clearly hear his own heart beat. He runs near the van to see if it is the same van he saw from the balcony, yes it was, some people were looking at him strangely when he was checking out the van but then he was moving around the SUV in circles to see whats inside, and where arijit was, that's when the back door, the luggage door opens and he is pulled in instantly. He finds arijit unconscious lying down , he struggles to free himself but he realizes his hands and legs are already tied down in the small time he wasted in checking on arijit. He turned back to see who it was, but a strong knock on his head made him fall unconscious. A croaking sound slowly says, Welcome Shamit bhayya!!!


EPISODE - 3

Shamti is punching numbers on his mobile phone franatically and before he calls his phone rings, he is perplexed but seeing where the call is from he relaxes and takes the call.

Shamit: abhi nikal raha hoon, ticket confirm nahin hua.

Anubhav: bhayya yeah kaise hogaya? Acha tho tha pehle

Shamit: mujhe bhi pata nahin, mein jaake wahan se phone kartha huin, tum worry mat karo. Aur mona kaise hi, who mere baju mein hain, baat karo

Mona:bhayya, aap kab nikal rahe ho? Aur bhabhi kaise hai? Function kaise raha?

Shamit then remembered, that it was only yesterday that their engagement function was over and he was leaving sumana and going to kolkotta, as always he expected she would understand, he looked at her, her mehendi is still fresh from last evenings function and the tiredness is still evident, she is busy packing his stuff in a bag pack and the sound of her bangles made quite a strange sound. It took him a complete minute to come out of his thoughts

Shamit: mona, tum aur anubhav apna viva exams acha karna, don't worry about anything, I wll call u as soon as I reach there.

Mona: ok anubhav se baat karo

Anubhav: bhayya, don't worry, phone karthe rehna.

Shamit: ok bye

Shamit grabbed his packed bag , kissed sumana on her forehead and was rushing towards the door but something pulled him back. It was sumana holding him, he felt that feeling that she did not want him to go but is letting him do it coz he wants to do it. He comes back and kneels down and tells her, sumana, I know you are worried and u don't want me to go today, par tume janthe ho, who mera chota bhai hai, usne jobhi kiya mere saath, mein uskoo doshi nahin thehravunga.. reason jobhi hai I want to go and meet him, usko meri zarrorat hai.

Sumana: ok , par hospital pahunchthehi phone karna.

Shamit hugs her and asks her to take care of his mom till he returns, catches a cab and runs to the airport. He is able to squeeze in to the available flight to Calcutta checks in and sits in his seat. Though he is very tired, his mind kept repeating the same words he heard from arijit last night.

(flash back of lastnight … engagement function mein bahut shor aur naach gaaana chal raha hai)

shamits frined comes to him with a phone: arijit ka phone hai

shamit face glows like a diwali cracker

shamit: hello mere bache , where are you tu abhi tak aaya kyun nahin.

Arijits father: beta mein arijit ka papa bol raha hoon. Arijit ka tabiyat… breaks down… arijit ka tabiyat kharab hogaya, who tumse baat karna chahtha hai… and hands over the phone to arijit

Arijit: shamit bhayya….. shamit bhayya,…. Aap kal aa sakthe ho mujhe milne… mujhe dar lag raha hai, dar lag raha hai ki aap se milne se pehle mujhe kuch..

Shamit. Snubs him in middle and says, pagal aise baat mat kar, mein kal subah aa raha hooon, tun kahan hai? Mushirabad??

Arijits father takes the phone: bete hum yahan Calcutta general hospital, cardiology ward mein room no 216 main hain.

Shamit: uncle ji, aap tension mat loo mein kal aa raha hoon.

Sir!! Sir!!!!! Shamit is woken by the airhostesss, Sir please fasten your seat belts we are landing. IT seemed so fast for shamit.

After landing in Calcutta, sumanas relative came to pick him up and he dropped himself in the hospital. There was media covering the illness of arijit and when shamit came, it was like they were waiting for him to come and talk to the media, shamit excused himself and ran to meet arijit. When he went in to the room, he found only arijits mom there , sitting sadly and found the bed empty. His bed missed a beat, he feard am I too late, but cursed himself for thinking that way.

Auntyji: arijit kidhar hai,

Arijits mom: shamit beta!! Weeps!!! Shamit beta!! Tera intazaar kar raha hai, uski nazar eee door par hi thi, kuch bhi sound aatha tha, shamit bhayya karke utt that ha!!! Uske papa aur doctor usko X-Ray ke liye leke gaye…

Shamit: (almost in tears) auntyji , don't worry, mein agaya huin na, aapka bada beta agaya samjhiye, mein abhi usse milkhe aatha huin.

Shamit drops his bag in the room and runs toward the X-Ray room. He finds arijits father there, who tells him that ki abhi arijit kaa x-ray chal raha hai. Shamit calls anubhav from his phone and there is no response. He thinks anubhav exam mein hoga , aur mona ko phone kartha hai, mona picks up the phone and enquires about arijit, shamit tells him everything and asks for anubhav, mona says , I m in another room, let me go to him, she comes out of her room and is walking thru the corridor when she feels a strange thing, she feels someone is following her. She ignores it thinking someone must be walking and looks around for anubhav, but he is not with his friends, she comes out of the room and looks towards the ground, strangly at a very odd time of the day she seems a guy running and 4-5 guys chasing him, she finds it funny but when she looks closely she finds the first guy running is anubhav, she is shocked, she opens her mouth to screem his name but something shuts her mouth, some strange odour and she falls , she thinks she might fall on the floor but she collapses on the shoulder of a strong man. Shamit was waiting on the other line all the time, assuming anubhav is taking his exam, and mona is unable to get him, he does the mistake of disconnecting the call, thinking he wll call once he meets arijit. He starts talking to arijits father about his health . shamit becomes quite restless, its been only 10 minutes but seems like ages that arijit has gone for the X-ray.

Shamit: uncle mein Andhra jaake dekhtha huin, kya horaha hai.

Arijits father: teekh hai beta

Shamit gently pushes the door and goes in, it's an X-Ray room filled with all equipment , he doesn't find anyone but hears some moaning, he is scared a little bit and goes inside, behind the dress changing cabin, he finds a man dressed in all white, might be some ward boy who had brought arijit for x-ray , fallen on the floor, he runs to him and literally yells:

Shamit: arijit kidhar hai? Arijit kidhar hai?

Wardboy: trying to get up, but is badly shaken with terror, in broken English, took away, took away.

He shouts for arijits father and when he comes, the wardboy tells in bong , arijits father is shocked, he starts worrying, he translates it for shamti in hindi: arijit ko koi utha ke leke gaya, 5 log the bol raha hai. Shamit is shocked. His brain stops working and then his mobile rings………

EPISODE- 2

Qazi wakes up Screeming, litchi……..

Rex who is the only other male contestant left wakes up to this and when he switches on the light is surprised to see qazi on bed, all wide awake,

Rex: Qazi kya kua, kyun chillaya bey? Bura sapna aaya kya?
Qazi: Litchi….
Rex: litchi? Litchi ko kya kua? Who ghar chala gayana, humne usko vote out kiya….
Qazi: Litchi……… litchi….. (Still in shocked mood)
Rex: shaayad kuch bura sapna aaya rahtha, thu bahut tired hogaya practice karthe karthe tu abhi so ja, le pani pee aur soja, kal baat karenge…
Qazi: Rex mein ne kuch dekha….
Rex: sapne mein sab log kuch dekthe hain, tu abhi soja,
Qazi: Rex mein jo dekha, who acha nahin tha,
Rex: shaayad bura sapna hai, pakav mat yaar, raath ke 2:30 baj rahe hai, kal phir gala kaa shooting hain, soona mere baap,

Rex switches off the light and goes back to sleep, but qazi sits on his bed unable to sleep and still thinking about the weird dream he had about sandeep. He wanted to tell padma maam about it first thing in the morning.

Back in Delhi, when in the morning sandeeps mom wakes up , she finds sandeep on the floor of the dining room. She is shocked first, wakes sandeeps father who put him back on the sofa and try to wake him up. Sandeep is woken and he feels normal. They ask him what he was doing in dining room and he goes blank, after much recollection he remembers and utters: Qazi!!!. His parents feel that it must be due to the stress he has had in the last one month and the atmosphere he was used to in fame gurukul, might be change of place , he was unable to sleep and felt he will be alright over time. During the morning sandeep was busy with his friends and neighbours and fans and press, he has no time to breath but when he had a break he tried hard to remember what happened last night. But no result to his efforts.

Back in Mumbai, Rex, Ruprekha, arpita and qazi are busy shooting for their final gala. There is lot of tension in all the participants as these are the final rounds, but there is something that is eating on to qazi, he wanted to approach padma maam but she was busy training with arpita, he did not want to meet ila maam or prashant sir as he felt they would brush away his fears as just night mares, there was something in qazi which told him that they were just not some nightmares but he felt they were real. As there is no way to communicate to outside world or to write letters, he picked up a piece of paper and pen and wrote his dream and folded it and addressed it to sandeep and kept in his jacket pocket. Later all the contestants were called for shooting of gala, and when the shooting was being done, qazi felt quite strange, when he asked rex if he was feeling strange , rex said yes, I m feeling tense as these are the last rounds. Qazi did not feel the same, he felt someone was watching him, he felt the heaviness on him when someone watches you, he looked at the judges, they were normal and manav and mandira, they are busy with their scripts, he looked at the production team, nothing strange, and the audience, he cant really say because everyone was looking at one of the four of them or all four together. He was looking at each and everyone to see if he can find something strange.

Back in Delhi, Sandeep goes out to lunch for the first time with his parents. They go to a traditional restaurant where all the food is being served and people are squatting down and eating. Sandeep felt happy spending time with his family after long . when he got out of the car, he was mobbed for autographs and photographs and when he came in to the restaurant there was a loud applause and everyone greeted him. They got the best place to sit and got the best served food in the hotel. The manager himself had come to meet them and greet sandeep. Sandeep was quite happy with all this and his parents were particularly happy with all the attention his son is getting. Before leaving sandeep excuses himself and goes to the bathroom to freshup.

While Qazi is scanning all the audience, his eyes fix on a particular guy who doesn't seem to be too keen on the contestants or on the show but he was busy on his phone and seem to be talking in a manner which no one should hear. Qazi fixes his eyes on him , he later sees that as the audience roar is getting louder, that particular guy goes out to take his call , but surpisingly never comes back. Qazi ignores this for a moment and concentrates on the show as his performance is coming up and he didn't want to be shown distracted when camera is zoomed on him. After couple of hours qazi finishes his performance and everyone goes to green room to change their dresses. When qazi goes to find his jacket, he finds that it is not in the same place as he left it and when he searches for the paper he had written his dream about, he finds them all torn and neatly placed in another bigger cover. A Small shiver runs down his spine, he realizes someone has read this and torn in to pieces, he doubts rex who has access to his jacket and the greenroom but rex was with him all the time. He had to change immediately and go to press conference but strangly he didn't find padma maam after the show.

Back in Mumbai, sandeeps parents realize that he has been in the bathroom for too long and his father goes to look for him. When he goes in to the bathroom, he finds one of the booth door closed and thinks sandeep is still in. He calls for him and there is no response, he waits for another 10 min, and then knocks on the door, no response but finds the door open, so he opens the door to find it empty, thinking he was mistaken, he turns around to go back, but stops. He comes closer to the washbasin and near the dustbin finds the sandeeps chain. He runs out to ask the management about it where near the bathroom main door he sees the scarf soaked in blood. He is shocked.

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EPISODE 1

Sandeep is sad and happy at the same time, the true gentlemen he is, he packs his bags and doesnt weep at all. I guess he is the only contestant who was very genuine, who didnot weep infront of the camera and who didnot bad mouth any of these contestants.Though he was bullied a lot of times by qazi and Rex, he never got even with them on a personal front. But the event organized by prashant sir was hilarious and Sandeep did make qazi dance to his tune in that game.

Anyways sandeep packs his bags and goes to Delhi. When he is dropped in mumbai airport, he finds himself stranded on the airport as there are no flights that day. Organisers of Fame Gurukul disappear the moment they drop him in the airport. So he had to wait there, without any help, but junta who watches him in the airport, mobs him for autographs and photographs -obvioulsy thru their LG CDMA Mobile phone which manva is selling on TV these days. His dress is literally torn apart by girls who want to ask him about not him but Qazi. Later the airport authorities have to rush him to VIP lounge with security. Then he relaxes and finally catches his plane and lands in Delhi. When he lands in Delhi, same situation no one to receive him, but there are hundreds of cops and search dogs, bcoz of the bomb scare for flights they are searching, once when the search dogs are searching his flight, they come and stop infront of him. They dont bark but they start wagging their tails and go around trying to lick his foot and nibble him. The cops are shocked, it is then they realise that during the dinner time of these search dogs, FAme gurukul channel will be on as all the dogs the show a lot. So to pacify those dogs, Sandeep sings a song for them on dogs pharmaish, and this time he sings a english song... no prizes for guessing, WHO LET THE DOGS OUT, and the dogs join in chorus whuff whuff, who lets the dog out.. and after the total song being sung and each doggy given a signed biscuit they leave sandeep. As no bomb is found, all are let out and then sandeep sees that his whole family, his friends, his apartment neighbours and his total society has come to welcome him. With total dhamaka he goes home.

But later that night after dinner, he was unable to sleep, he wakes up in middle of the sleep, he hears qazi singing and calling him litchi litchi... he wonders if he is dreaming, but he is not, he wakes up, searches his house but he doesnt find anyone, he doesnt wake up his parents, but he can repeatedly hear qazi singing and calling him litchi, litchi.. he switches on the light in his dinning room and opens the balcony , he finds someone standing there, a small sweat drops from behind his ear, he feels dehydrated and runs his tongue over his dry lips, and he gathers his guts and opens the door of the balcony and puts his shoulder on the man standing there, and when the man turns... its Qazi Tauqeer.... sandeep screems and falls backs in to the dining room and loses conscious.

At the same time, 1800 km away, Qazi Tauqeer wakes from his dream screeming...........

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow,thanks for the post, keep posting more traumas.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow aditi! such a good job. It is so good!.Full of suspense and hilarious at the same time. I was rolling with laughter. You are such a good writer. 👏 . Now I am looking eagerly for the 7th episode. I was not this eager even for the fame gurukul programme. Great!!
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😆 oh dear, what imagination.

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