EK HASINA THI EK NAYI SURWAT

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LIKE ALL EK HASINA THI FANS I AM ALSO VERY SAD THAT THE SHOW HAS ENDED. BUT I HAVE A PLAN TO WRITE A FICTION ON IT. WITH THE SAME CHARACTERS BUT WITH A DIFFERENT TWIST I WILL START WRITING FROM TOMORROW. THIS IS MY OUT LINE


SAURIYA GOYENKA - THE PRINCE OF GOYENKA BUSINESS EMPIRE . A VERY HARD WORKING AND AMBITIOUS BOY.
KANGNA GOYENKA- SAURIYA'S SISTER AND A STUDENT IN GOYENKA COLLAGE. A COLLAGE FUNDED BY HER FAMILY.
SAKSHI GOYENKA- SAURIYA AND KANGNAS MOTHER. SHE HELPS HER HUSBAND IN THE BUSINESS .

DEV GOYENKA SAURIYA'S UNCLE ONLY SON. DEV AND SAURIYA BOTH WORKS TOGETHER TO EXPAND THE BUSINESS.
NITYA MITRA - DEV GOYENKA'S WOULD BE WIFE AND A PROFESSOR IN GOYENKA COLLAGE..
PAYEL MITRA- NITYA'S LITLE SISTER SHE AND KANGNA ARE CLASSMATES.

THAKURS

DAYAL THAKUR - A WELL KNOWN DOCTOR . HE RUNS A HOSPITAL IN KOLKTA.
DURGA THAKUR- DAYALS ONLY DAUGHTER WHO HELPS TO RUN THE HOSPITAL ALONG WITH HER FATHER . DURGA IS FRIENDS WITH SAURIYA , KARAN BASU, TARUN AND RISHI . THERE FRIENDSHIP IS WELL KNOWN IN KOLKATA . THAKURS AND GOYENKAS SHARE A VERY GOOD FAMILY FRIENDSHIP.

IF ANYONE WANTS TO READ THE FICTION PLEASE COMMENT . I WILL START WRITING FROM TODAY😃


CHAPTER 1

It has been two hours now Durga is waiting for Sauriya and Gang from a very long time now . She was thinking how they can be so irresponsible , after all Durga has other works to perform . She was thinking of leaving the place when Rishi entered .

Rishi- I know you are angry but trust me it is all because of Sauriya , he took too long to deecide on the final plan.

Durga- I know he is one of his kind where is he ? what does he thinks I don't have other things to do I mean , suddenly Sauriya enters Sauriya Goyenka the most eligible bachelor of Kolkata the cute heart throb of many girls in Kolkata . he was on phone he saw anger on Durga's face and he disconnected the phone. Durga was about to shout on Sauriya when he told her he was there to make the final arrangements and also to convince Dev that everything will be fine. In fact he was with Karan on the phone that is having a look on the final agreements .

Durga- Finally Dev is going to propose Nitya for marriage I mean why he is making so much agreements ? he should go and tell her- "Look we are dating for a long time, come on let's talk to our parents and get married. Hearing this both Rishi and Sauriya burst out in laugh Sauriya put his right hand on Durga's shoulder and replies.

Sauriya - Look Dev bhaiya has fallen for a normal girl I mean a girl who has her girly dreams about love and marriage proposal . She is not a tomboy like you, all the time hanging out with us and behaving like boys , Durga was about to say something when her phone rang. She picked up the phone and after a few munities she replied - I will get back to you on this in the evening Sauriya bye for now and without waiting for moment she lefts the room.Sauriya- jhalli hai ekdam. Sauriya and Rishi sat down on the sofa .

Rishi- Why you always pool her leg you know it makes her angry .

Sauriya- o come on she is my childhood friend I know her for years now and she is use to it . Now lets back to work we have to leave for the venue right now .

In the evening everything was set according to the wish of Dev white flowers candles and not to forget balloons . There was a little time left just before Dev and Nitya will reach to the farm house of Goyenka's . This place is near haridevpur kolakata . Durga was blowing up the balloons when Karan came to her and told her that dev massaged him and told him that they are stuck in traffic will be here in 10 - 15 munities . Durga quickly finished her arrangements and she like sauriya tarun and Rishi went to the back side of the farm house and watching nitya and Dev to enter the farm house. 4 years back dev proposed Nitya on this day and after two years of dating, they made their family aware about there relationship . Though Nitya and dev comes from a very different background but Suchitra Goyenka, Dev's mother gave her approval as she really likes Nitya a lot. When Nitya and Dev entered the lights turned on Nitya was surprised to see the decoration and everything . She was speechless. Before she could say anything Dev went on to his knees and said - Miss nitya Mitra my life is incomplete about you. I can not think about myself without you. Will you complete my life will you marry me. Nitya was totally spell bound she did not knew how to react she never seen this romantic side of Dev . She was num and little munity passed . This made Durga impenitent she was about to enter and ask Nitya for her answer but Sauriya and karan hold her back. Finally she said yes and Sauriya gave a signal to Tarun and suddenly a flower shower of rose petals is started happening . Nitya is smilling and she is very happy at this point Sauriya, Durga Tarun, Rishi and karan entered they all celebrated with Nitya and Dev there party continued for late night.

END OF CHAPTER 1*************************************************************************

HOPE ALL EKHASINA THI FANS WILL LIKE IT . PLEASE GIVE YOUR REPLY😃


HI EVERY ONE SEENS EVERY ONE LIKED MY EHT FF I AM UPDATING IT AGAIN BUT AS IT IS A DIFFERENT FORUM I HAVE WRITEN ANOTHER FICTION IN THIS THREAD PLEAS DO READ THAT AND GIVE YOUR COMMENTS FOR THAT ALSO 😛

CHAPTER 2

On the next day Sauriya was late on the breakfast table . Bari maa was sitting there

Barimaa with a asmile - Morning beta today you are late , you kids had a lot of fun last night .

( beta aaj tumhe der ho gayi . lagta hai kaal tum logog ne kaafi maza kiya hai.)

Sauriya was helping himself with a chiken sandwich he looked and Suchitra and said ya bari maa finally bare bahiya has proposed Nitya , and we were very happy .

(HA BARI MAA AKHIR BARE BHAIYA NE NITYA KO APNE DIL KI BAATA BATA HI DI AUR ISS BAAT SE HUM SAAB BAHAT KHOOS HAI)

Bari maa- But you people have done a very wrong thing last night

( PAAR KAAL RAAT TUM LOGOG NE EK BAHAT BARI GALTI KI HAI) Sauriya was in shock he looks at Suchitra she continues - last night you should have informed Nitya's parents . They were worried . This was not expected from you three.

( KAAL RAAT TUM LOGO KO NITYA KE MAA BABA KO BATANA CHAHIYE THA , WHO PARESHAN THE. TUM TEENO SE MUJHE YE UMID NAHI THI.)

Sauriya gives a cute smile and grips his own years - sorry bari maa , it will not happen in future I promise you that, and we were so hapy that...

(SORRY BARI MAA AINDA AISA NAHI HOGA MAIN AAP KO WADA KARTA HU. WHO KYA HAI NA HUM ITNE KHUS THE KI)

Bari maa- I know that beta I told them that you guys were having a party but next time be carefull ok.

(MUJHE PATA HAI BETA MAIN NE UNHE BATA DIYA THA KE TUM LOG PARTY KAAR RHE HO. PAAR AGE SE DHYAN RAKHNA THIK HAI) .

Sauriya hugs Suchitra - oh bari maa you are great thank you , love you . Now I will take your leave I am already late bye .

( OH BARI MAA AAP KA JAWAD NAHI SUKRIYA . LOVE YOU AAB MAIN CHALTA HU WAISE HI DER HO RAHI HAI. BYE)

Suchitra - bye beta .

On the same evening Nitya and dev were out for a dinner in a hotel of Park street -

Dev- Finally I did it . I proposed to you.

( AKHIR MAIN NE KAAR DIKHAYA MAIN NE AAP NE DIL KI BAAT TUM SE KEHE HI DI)

Nitya with a goggle - yes I thought you will never be able to say that you love me.

( HA MUJHE TO LAGA THA TUM KABHI KEHE HI NAHI PAOGE KE TUM MUJHSE PYAR KARTE HO)

Dev - ya maybe all thanks to Sauriya and his gang with out there help and encouragement I would not have been able to do it . Now it is a matter of few days then we will get married . maa will go to your parents very soon

( HA SHYAD PAAR INN SAAB ME HAAT SAURIYA AUR USKE DOSTO KA HAI UNKI MADAT KE BINA TO MAIN YE SAAB NAHI KAAR PATA. AAB HUMARI SHAADI BAAS KUCH DIN DOOR HAI . MAA BAHAT JALDI JAUENGI TUMAHRE MAA BABA SE BAAT KARNE) .

Nitya- Its nice but what about Sauriya and Durga ?

(HA YE ACHAI BAAT HAI PAAR SAURIYA AUR DURGA KA KYA?)

Dev with a confused look in his eyes - What about them?

(UNKE BAREME KYA?)

Nitya - Can't you see sauriya is madly in love with her , it can be seen in his eyes . Durga loves him too but I guess they are not aware about eatch others feelings .

( TUMHE DIKHAYI NAHI DETA SAURIYA PAGALO KI HAAD TAAK DURGA KO CAHATA HAI , USKI ANKHO ME DIKHTA HAI . DURGA BHI USKE CAHATI HAI INN DONI KO HI AAP NE DIL KE HAAL KA NAHI PATA)

Dev- What you are saying? Sauriya and Durga no never , not possible.

( YE TUM KYA KAHE RAHI HO SAURIYA AUR DURGA NAHI KABHI NAHI HO HI NAHI SAKTA).

Nitya puts her hand on dev's hand trust me they are in love .

(MERA YAKIM KARO WHO EK DUSRE SE PYAR KARTE HAI)

Dev catches his forhead - sauriya and Durga oh god.

( SAURIYA AND DURGA HEY BHAGWAN)

PRECAP

DURGA FINDS OUT ABOUT KARAN AND KANGNAS RELATION SHIP


CHAPTER 3

Dr dayal went to Bengal club where he caught a sight of Mr Rajnath Goyenka who was chatting with a business partner of him, Rajnath saw Dr Dayal and he came to him-

Rajnath - Hello Dr how are you? Hope everything is quite well

( HELLO DR SAAB KAISE HAI AAP. UMMID KARTA HU SAAB THIK CHAL RAHA HAI.)

Dayal- yes officers busy with the cancer hospital project these days .

( HA BAAS AAJ KAAL CANCER HOSPITAL PROJECT KO LE KAAR ZARA BUSY HU .)

Rajnath- ya I know Suchitra Bhabi told me about it . I hope everything is going well . I am least bothered about it as you have Dev as a part of this project very responsible boy .

( HA MUJHE PATA HAI SUCHITRA BHABI NE BATAYA . MUJHE UMMID HAI SAAB THIK HAI . DARASAL MUJHE ISS PROJECT KI ZADA FIKAAR NAHI HAI KYU KI DEV ISS PROJECT KA HISSA HAI , DEV EK BAHAT HI ZIMEDAAR LADKA HAI )

DR DAYAL - Don't say that. Sauriya is also a responsible boy and hardworking too . I have seen how he helps everyone in need and specially in my daughters NGO .

( AISA MAAT KAHIYE MAIN NE DEKHA HAI SAURIYA EK MEHENTI AUR ZIMEDAAR LADKA HAI . MAIN NE DEKHA HAI KAISE WO MERI BETI KE NGO KE KAAM ME MADAT KARTA HAI)

Raajnaath - Yes but he does not take the business to seriously . Dev , Suchitra Bhabi and not to forget Sakshi has spoiled him did not let him grow. Anyways its nice you are here I wanted to invite you

( HA PAAR WO KAROBAAR KO SANJIDGI SE NAHI LETA . DEV, SUCHITRA BHABI AUR HA SAKSHI NE USE BIGAAR DIYA HAI AUR USE BARA HONE HI NAHI DE RAHE HAI . CHALIYE JO BHI HAI ACHA HUA AAP YAHA MIL GAYE MUJHE AAP KO DAWAT DENI THI)

Dayal- Invitation for what? anything special?

(DAWAT KIS LIYE ? KOI KHAAS BAAT HAI?)

Rajnath - yes we are going to make an official announcement of Dev and Nitya's engagement on the auspicious day of Payaela Baisakh first day of Bengali new year . Please bring Durga with you she is a very sweet girl.

( HA HUM DEV AUR NITYA KE SAGAI KA AYELAAN KARNA WALE HAI PAYELA BAISAKH KE DIN . BANGALI NAYE SAAL KA PEHELA DIN . DURGA KO APNE SAATH ZARUR LAYIYEGA BAHAT PYARI BACHI HAI )

Dr Dayal oh it's a great news we will surely come . Nitya is very sweet girl Really happy for Dev god bless them booth.

( YE TO BAHAT ACHI KHABAR HAI HUM LOG ZARUR AYENGE . NITYA EK BAHAT ACHI LADKI HAI . BHAWAN KA ASIRWAD UN DONO KE SAATH RAHE )

Rajnath- Thanks now if you don't mind I will take your leave I have some other meetings

( SUKRIYA AAB AAP SE IJAZAT CHAHUNGA MERI KUCH AUR MEETINGS HAI )

DR Dayal- oh sure see you later .

( ZARUR BAAD ME MILTE HAI)

On the other side Durga was coming out from the South City Mal when she saw kangana and Karan together on the food court . They were chatting on their hands on each other hands . Duraga did not say anything and went to them .

Durga - Hey Kangna and Karan I knew it you both are dating each other ( Both kangana and Karan both were uncomfortable and stunt and the same time)

( HEY KANGNA AUR KARAN MUJHE PATA THA TUM DONO EK DUSRE SE PYAR KARTE HO.)

Kangna - Durga you are here sit I will explain it to you.

( DURGA TUM YAHA . BAITHO NA MAIN TUMHE SAAB BATATI HU ) Durga occupies a chair

Karan- Durga you are my friend I can tell you we are childhood friends I love kangna and she loves me.

( DURGA TUM MERI BACHPAAN KI DOST HO MAIN KANGNA SE AUR KANGNA MUJHSE PYAR KARTI HAI)

Kangna - But we haven't talked about it kept it a secret because ...

( MAGAR HUMNE ISS BAREME KSISES BAAT NAHI KI KYUKI)

Durga - with a giggle because if Sauriya comes to know about it then Karan will be dead .

( KYUKI AGARA SAURIYA PATA CHALA ISS BAREME TO KARAN TO GAYA KAAM SE.)

Kangna- I Know that's why I am scared once Dev bhaiya is over with his engagement I will talk to Sauriya bhaiya with the help of him . please keep the secrete till then .

( MUJHE PATA HAI ISIS LIYE MUJHE DAAR LAGTA HAI . EK BAAR DEV BHAIYA KI SAGAI HO JAYE MAIN UNKE SAATH SAURIYA BHAIYA SE ISS BAREME BAAT KARUNGI. TAAB TAAK ISS BAAT KO CHUPA KAAR RAKHO)

Durga - Don't worry I will keep it a secrete

( TUM CHINTA MAAT KARO YE RAAZ MERE SAATH SURAKSHIT RAHEGA)

PRECAP

THE NEW MAKE OVER OF DURGA WHICH WILL AHOCK EVERYBODY IN THE PARTY

I HAVE STARTED THE EHT FF FOR THOSE WHO LOVED MY FF AND WHO MISS THE SHOW BADLY LIKE ME. IF I GET SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENT I WILL THINK THAT MY WRITING HAS MADE YOU HAPPY WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE COMMENTS THANKS AND LOTS OF LOVE👏

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CHAPTER 4

After few days Nitya has call Durga in her house . Nitya and Durga are childhood friends Nitya is confused about what she should ware in the engagement party Dev has gifted her lots of dresses so she could not figure out what she should do when Durga came to her room everything was scattered .

Durga - Is it your room or a go down of a fashion house whats wrong with you!

(YE TUMHARA KAMRA HAI YA KISI FASHION HOUSE KA GODAM KYA HUA HAI!)

Nitya - Durga you need to help me . I am confused what I should ware in the engagement party . Dev has sent me everything he has picked up for me and he told me pick one from them and ware that I just ...

( DURGA TUMHE MERI MADAT KARNI HOGI . MAIN THORI ASMANJAS ME HU . MUJHE SAGAI KI PARTY ME KYA PEHENA CHAHIYE? DEV NE WO SARE KAPRE BHEJ DIYE JO USNE MERE LIYE PASAD KIYE THE . AUR AAB WO CHAHATA HAI KE MAIN ISS ME SE EK PASAND KAAR LU AUR PEHEN LU MAAT LAAB)

DURGA- I UNDERSTAND LET ME HELP YOU WITH THEM SHE PICKS UP A GOLDEN RED ANARKALI

( MAIN SAMAJH GAYI MAIN TUMHARI MADAT KARTI HU)

Nitya - you tell me what you are going to wear?

( DURGA TUM MUJHE BATAO TUM KYA PEHENE WALI HO?)

Durga - Me same the jeans and top which I ware most of the times

(WAHI JEANS AUR TOP JO MAIN HUMESHA PEHENTI HU)

Nitya - what! Come on this is my engagement and you are my best friend don't do this

( KYA? ARE YAAR YE MERI SAGAI HAI AUR TUM MERI SAABSE ACHI SAHELI HO AISA TO MAAT KARO)

DUrga- so what should I ware?

( TO MAIN KYA PEHENU?)

Nitya with a big smile on her face a Sari

(NITYA SARI PEHENO)

Durga - What! No no chance sari is not my cup of tea

( KYA? SARI SAWAL HI PAYEDA NAHI HOTA SARI PEHENA MERE BAAS KI BAAT NAHI HAI)

Nitya - oh come on I will buy you a semi stich saree from Raima Maheshwari's store .you will have no problem of draping . please for me

( ARE MAAN BHI JAO MAIN TUMHE RAIMA MAHESHWARI KE STORE SE EK SEMI STICH SAREE KHARID KAAR DUNGI NA . PEHENE KA JHANJHAT BHI NAHI PLEASE MAAN BHI JAO)

Durga- ya but...

(HA MAGAR)

Nitya - No but or nothing we are living for Raima's store Right now .

(KOI LEKIN NAHI HUM ABHI RAIMA KE STORE KE LIYE NIKAL RAHE HAI BAAS)

Dura - ok ok aal right let me speak to baba and inform him

(ACHA MUJHE BABA SE BAAT KARKE INFOR TO KAAR LENE DO)

Nitya- do what ever you want but make it fast.

( JO KARNA HAI KARO PAAR ZARA JALDI)

Durga makes a call to Dr Dayal and tells him that she is going with Nitya for showping. Dayal agrees .Durga and Nitya reaches raima's store they greet each other then Raima speaks

Raima - Long time no see both of you specially you Nitya.

(BAHAT DIN HO GAYE TUM DONO KA KOI ATA PATA HI NAHI KHAAS KARKE TUMHARA NITYA)

Nitya- sorry Raima have been busy with work . I have came here for Durga

( SORRY RAIMA KAAM KO LE KAAR THORA BUSY THI . MAIN YAHA DURGA KE LIYE AYI HU )

Raima - Whats with her?

(USKA KYA KAAM HAI?)

Nitya - I want you to give her a complete make over and make her a bong beauty look.

(MAIN CAHATI HU KE TUM USE EK BAGALI LADKI KA LOOK DO ALAG MAKE OVER KE SAATH )

Raima smiles and look at Durga we are going to have a lot o fun

ON THE SAME EVENING

Dev calls Nitya- Where are you the gutsiest have come?

( KAHA HO TUM MEHEMAAN A GAYE HAI)

Nitya - Just give us 5 munities

( BAAS HUME 5 MUNITE DE DO)

Dev- Ok ome fcast.

( THIK HAI JALDI AO)

Sauriya comes to Dev - What happened bare bhaiya?

( KYA HUA BARE BHAIYA)

Dev- ooh don't ask Nitya still is saying that it will take her 5 munities to to come . Oh theses girls

( NITYA KAHE RAJI HAI USE AUR 5 MUNIT LAGENGE O YE LADKIYA )

Sauriya - Girls you mean Durga is also with her . Then I am confident NItya has taken too much time to get ready because Durga and dress up no no not possible.

(LADKIYA MATLAAB DURGA BHI USKE SAATH HAI. PHIR TO MUJHE PURA BHAROSA HAI YE DERI NITYA KI WAJA SE HUI HAI KYUKI DURGA AUR TAYIYAR NAHI NAHI NAHI HO SAKTA)

And just Sauriya turns and see that Durga and nitya has come . Everybody in the party is looking at them as they are looking stunning speially Durga . she has left everybody speechless specially Sauriya .

PRECAP

A NEW CHAPTER BEGINS IN SAURIYA AND DURGAS LIFE BECAUSE OF THE RUMOURS OF THERE ROMANCE CREATED BY THE MEDIA😛


Edited by msbhattacharya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start dear
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U r doing a great job. Continue soon👍🏼
I have a ques does this story have a dark side like the show?
Also can u pls pm it to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarini

U r doing a great job. Continue soon👍🏼

I have a ques does this story have a dark side like the show?
Also can u pls pm it to me

NO IT IS BASICALLY A SIMPLE LOVE STORY I HAVE A REQUEST IF YOU LOVED THE STORY PLZ SUGGEST YOUR FRIENDS TO READ IT 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When will u post the next part?

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