SumVeer FF Character Sketch/Prologue

#Our_Destiny
SumVeer FF

CHARACTER SKETCH:-
Suman- simple, sweet girl. Loves her family more than anything else. Mature. Widow. Mother of Veer.
Ranveer- smart, understanding guy, sometimes immature. Loves Suman and Veer. Veer's adopted father.
Ravi- husband of Suman. Biological father of veer. (He is not alive will be there in flashbacks)
Veer- Son of Ravi and Suman. Loves Ranveer. Wants Ranveer to be his father.
Sindhoora- understanding mother. Loves Ranveer. Supports Ranveer to marry Suman.
Kalawati- understanding yet sometimes annoying.. misunderstands Suman all the time.Ravi's mother. Creates problem in the marraige of Ranveer and Suman.
Antara and Sanjana- daughters of Kalawati. Loves their family. Supports suman. Understanding, cute, funny, lovable.
Manan and Sahil- sons of Sindhura. Supports Ranveer. Sometimes irritating. Funny.
Niharika- vamp. Loves Ranveer. Wants to create problems between Suman and Ranveer.

So here's d character sketch. If its interesting then i will continue.. will post prologue tomorrow.. love ya 😉

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As i promised to post prologue.. here it is

#Our_Destiny
SumVeer FF
Prologue

Morning 7am.
Parmar's house..
Suman- veer chalo utho schul nai jaana hai.. utho veer...
Veer covered his face by the blanket.
Suman- veeer.. bahut ziddi ho gye ho.. utho. Dekho kalse me utha nai paungi clg jaana h apki maa ko.. phir dadisa maar maar ke uthaengi apko.. chlo utho..
Veer didnt woke up.
Suman(angrily)- mat utho.. me bhi jaari hu..
She was about to leave..
Veer- maa.. mjhe schul nai jaana..
Suman- kyu nai jaana..
Veer- mere saare dost mjhe chidhate hai ki mere papa nai h... mere papa kabh aaenge..
Suman(sad)- veer.. idhar aao..
She made him sit on his lap..
Suman- pta hai tumhare papa kya bolte the.. jab tumhe laga na ki tum iss duniya me bahut kamzor ho toh apne aankhe band krke ye sochna ki tum iss duniya ke sbhse shaktishaali insaan ho.. isse tumhe shakti milegi.. aur pta hai mein apke papa humesha mere sth rhte h.. vahi toh mujhe shakti dete hai apka, antara, sanjana aur maasa ka dhyaan rkhne ka.. abh aap bhi yehi sochna ki apke papa humesha apke sth hai dekhna apko kbhi bura nai lgega..
Antara Sanjana standing beside d doar smiled..
Veer closed his eyes n strtd sobbing.
Suman hugged him
Sanjana- veeerrr.. chalo aaj me chodhne jaungi apko schul.. icecream khaenge apki fav chochlate waali thik h.. chalo ready ho jao.. jao
Veer- yay icecream!! He jumped wid joy..
Suman wiped her tears..
Antara- bhabhisa..
Suman- haa
Antara- aap dusri shaadi ku nai kr leti..apne liye nai toh veer Ke liye bhabhisa.
Sanjana- aunty pehli baar akal ki baat ki hai tune.. bhabhisa apko bhi khush rhna ka haq hai..
Suman- sanjana antara.. me khush hu ynha.. ravi ki yaadein hai mere sth.. itti achi maasa hai.. itti achi nanade, aur itta acha beta. Me khush hu.. aur rahi veer ke papa ki baat me hu uski ma aur papa dono..
They all smiled n shared gup hug.
Kalawati listening to all these.. slightly smiled n wiped her khushi ke aansu..

Other hand
Mittal's house..
Sindhura- 8:30 hora hai.. tumhare beto ko koi zimmedaari hai ya nai.
Akash- sirf mere hai tumhare nai??
Sindhura- whatever!!
Akash smiled Sindhura smirked..
Sahil,Manan,Ranveer together- Good morning mom n dad..
Sindhura- lo aagye tumhare bete..
Akash- good morning son..
They all touch his feet.
Akash- are jao apni mom ko makkhan lgao jao..
Ranveer- oh maa
Sahil- aree sunti ho..
Manan- ohh maaa...
Ranveer- oh meri pyaari mumma..meri sundar mumma.. meri cute mumma.. meri sweet mumma..
Ranveer pulled her cheeks
Sindhura(pulled his ears)- butter chahye.. bahut h ghar me.. chaman ji makkhan leke aaiye.. huh
Ranveer- pyaari mumma pyaari mumma maan jao.. gussa vussa chodho ab hass ke dikhao pyaari mumma pyaari mumma maan jao..
Sindhura- breakfast rkha h khalo.. aur clg jao ranveer..
Sahil, manan n akash laughed.. sindhura stared them wid naughty look.. n looked at ranveer who was making puppy face.
Sindhura- oh God!! Tumse koi naraz bhi nai reh skhta.. come here all of u..
They all smiled n shared a grup hug..
Chaman- madam Makkhan.. knha rkhu?
Sindhura- table me rkh dijiye chaman ji..
Chaman- table ke upar ya niche
Sindhura- ofcourse upar..
Chaman- daaye ki baaye..
Sindhura- daaye chaman ji..
Chaman- dhakkan khol ke rkhu ya aisi..
Sindhura- kholke rkh dijiye hum le lenge..
Chaman- kidhar rkhu kholke..
Sindhura- (smiled)- mere sar pe..
Chaman placed butter on her head..
All boys mouth was open in wide O shape..while sindhura stared chaman.. chaman took butter from his head n placed on the table..
All laughed n ate their breakfast..

How will parmar's n mittal's meet??
How antara manan, sahil sanjana falls for each other??
In which situations Suman n Ranveer will get married?
Will Veer accept Ranveer as his father?
Will Kalawati n Sindhura accept this marraige??
Will Suman ever fall in love wid Ranveer?
Stay tuned..
Precap- Sumveer first meet..

Hows it guys.. want ur reviews.. 😳

I think it'll be better if you post your ff altogether rather in separate topics...

Interesting start...looking forward👍🏼

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

I think it'll be better if you post your ff altogether rather in separate topics...

actually i can but wai exams chal re hai.. 23rd ke baad i will post..
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Originally posted by: Faith28

Interesting start...looking forward👍🏼

glad u like it. thankyou so much 😳

Originally posted by: .May.

<font size="2">Great beginning, especially Suman and Veer's part. It feels like I'm watching the show through your words. Looking forward to how you set up SumVeer's first meeting!</font>

thankyou so much... means a lot to me.. 😳