Veeba FF Tu Hi Hai Dil Mai Hamesha Part 3 pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update dear update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for the comments guys😊

Edited by sanjanabaldev - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 3

baldev laid veera in the bed and carresed her head.
baldev:veera mainnu maaf kardo,apne mall ke sapne ke chakkar main teri nazriyon ko mai samaj nahi paaya aur woh mall ke log ke saath deal karne ka socha,mera khoon khol utta jab koyi aur tannu chunne ki koshish ki.aur yeh sab kuch meri galti hai.
veera holded on to baldev's hand and made him to sit on the bed with her.
veera:baldev,galti toh maine bhi ki haina,school banna mall banne se zyaada acha hai,aur yeh baath mainnu pata tha lekin mall bananne mai teri kushi thi ,yeh main dekh nahi paayi.isiliye main tujseh maafi maangti hun.
baldev hugged his veera tight and placed a kiss on her forehead.
veera's eyes began to drop tears by baldev's touch of love which she missed for decades.
baldev:veera,yeh aanso mat baha,teri aankhon mai aanson dekhkar man kar raha hai ki apne aap ko khatam hi kar doon.
veera :oye pagal,ye aanso kushi ki aanso hai.
both laughed at veera's reply
veera and baldev hugged each other and veera lied on baldev's chest feeling safe and slept peacefully after both ending their fued.


In the morning,baldev woke up to find that veera was having a high body temperature.
baldev:veera,tera shareer bahut zyaada garam lag raha hai.
veera woke up by then.
veera:koi nahi baldev,woh kuch hi der mai teek ho jaunga.
baldev:nahi,aise kaise teek hoga apne aap?tannu toh tez bukaar hai .
sun,aaj kaam ke vaaste bahar jaane ke baare mai sochna bhi mat.
veera:baldev aise kaise ho sakta hai?mujse school bannane ke baare mai aaj panchayath de naal meeting hai,aur uske baad mainnu ..
baldev placed his finger and silenced veera.he took her in his arms and placed her close to him.
baldev:tum kuch nahi karoge aaj.samji?
school bananne ke maamle niptane keliye tere vaaste main jaaunga aur school bananne ke permision milne ka poora zimmedhari mai utaunga.


veera was astonished by baldev's reply
veera:kya kaha tune ab?
baldev:wahi jo tune suna,main school banane mai teri poori madad karunga
veera:tab toh tere mall bananne ka kaise...
baldev:oye,bhad mai jaaye mall.
mainnu teri kushi se badkar aur kuch bhi nahi hai naahi mera koi sapna tujseh zyaada keemti. woh mall bananne waala log bahut bura aur chalaak hai.unhe sirf paisa kamaane ki fiqr hai naahi pind waalon ke bhalaai ki.
waise bhi mainnu aajkal zyaada aur koi kaam nahi hai,toh maine socha kyun na main apni pyaari patni ki madad karoon.


veera pulled baldev to her and placed her lips on his.they shared a kiss filled with love for each other.
veera:mainnu thank you bolne ka koi aur tareeka nahi aata kisse main tannu bata sakoon ki tere iss faisla mainnu kitna kushi diya.
your the best husband in the world baldeva...

baldev was in shock for sometime,it took him a few seconds to get out of the kiss trance of veera.

baldev:haan haan.ab teri angrezi band kar aur chup chaap yaham leti reh.tannu bukaar hai aur tannu araam karna bahut zaroori hai.

veera did as baldev told.baldev bought a wet cloth and placed it on veera's head.
veera kept staring baldev lovingly as he tendered to her.
baldev:aisa kya ghoor rahi hai tu mennu?main bhoot jaisa lagta hun kya?
veera:baldev,main tannu bahut pyaar karti hun.
baldev:pyaar toh main bhi bahut karta hun apne iss sherni se.
they holded on to each other never to let go again.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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do say your feedback guys,do like and comment also😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww cho sweet it was... veeba r luv
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awww cho sweet it was... veeba r luv




thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sanjana...I can only hit like...can't comment bcs I don't understand hindi...with the help of subtitles and episode written-up I can understand the story...sorry 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vj3072

sanjana...I can only hit like...can't comment bcs I don't understand hindi...with the help of subtitles and episode written-up I can understand the story...sorry 😃




iam so sorry that iam writting it in hindi,its because i once wrote in english but everyone wanted it to be in hindi,so i wrote it in hindi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this is so cute.. Continue super soon 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update sanju continue it soon dear plzzz ziyada wait mat krwana...

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