~~ VeeBa OS - Deewani ~~ 3 parts updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 4 - Veera left the stunned baldev standing their.Baldev looked going veera till she dissappeared from his eyes.He was just stunned whatever happened today,actually he wasn't expecting such reply from veera,after whatever happened.The girl who lost her conscious after hearing the divorce thing,can behave like this.Bcoz as this news spread in pind that veera is tolerating baldev silently,how come she replied him back in all of sudden.Baldev shook his head and sat in jeep,drove away.Both reached at their respective houses.Balwant got furious on this news,as usual he taunted baldev,but bansuri shove his blabber off.Baldev left the house,due to all this clash and went to bar.After getting confirmed news jaggi billa went to bar and took baldev alongwith them to his house.Here veera reached the house,ratan chaiji got worried.Do remember from now onwards veera will not be a crying one.Balwant visited the ss family at that day only,veera met him and she told everybody what she's upto now.Hmm,veera's plan got ready then.Veera called amrit,she picked the phone,"ha...ve..." but she was cut by veera,"meri bat sun amrit.Main 3 din me delhi aa rahi hu,aur tu mere liye aisa job dhundh ki main roj delhi-pritampura up-down kar saku" "par ve..." "tere sare sawalon ke jawab main waha aane par dungi,abhi to tu mera pehle yehi kam kar,ok!" veera said in one breath."achha ok" amrit responded."chal thik hai,3 din me milti hu tujhse" and she ended the conversation."saza to tune mainu de di baldev,aur ye zaruri bhi tha.Koi nahi,ab tak tera pyaar paya hai,iss bar teri saza he sahi!Aur ab main teinu isi saza ke sath wapas haasil karungi.Tu sirf mera hai baldev,teri zindagi sirf aur sirf meri hai." Before leaving for delhi,she met jaggi billa and told her whole plan,asked them to make baldev start his work again.Veera left for delhi,with the help of amrit she got the job in bank.In pp,baldev also restarted his business with the help of balwant and jaggi billa.At start veera has to remain in delhi only for 2 months.Both veeba's life were going smooth.Veera was in contact with jaggi billa and keep herself updated about baldev.Bansuri was the most happiest person on earth.She started to look for a new girl to marry her baldev.She always talked to baldev and balwant about this,but baldev always denied.He was busy in his work to forget the incidents,but he didn't forget.The more he tried,the more he remember,and he has no idea that veera is still in contact with his friends.What was veera's plan?When she reached delhi,she told each and every thing that happened in past some months.She cried out all her pain infront of amrit."veera,tune apni galti ko accept kiya,uska sahi mayno me tujhe ehsaas hua hai,yeh bahut kam log ke sath hota hai yaar...!And i appreciate your decision,ki tune papers sign kiye,par baldev ko ab tak nahi choda!"amrit encouraged her."kaise chodti use main amrit,kaise!Wo bhi uss insaan ko jisne har kathin mod par mera sath nahi choda.Toh kya main use itni jaldi chod du...!"she replied."amrit,aaj tak main hamesha apne veerji ki bat manti ayi hu.Kabhi unke khilaf jane ki nahi sochi,aur agar unke khilaf gai bhi,toh khud par bharosa nahi tha,aur na he mujhse beinteha pyaar karne wale insaan par..." amrit placed her hands on veera's shoulders. "par ab mainu samajh aa gaya hai,ki har bar mere veerji sahi nahi ho sakte,aur har bar main unke liye khadi nahi ho sakti. Wo bhi tab jab meri khud ki ik zindagi hai..!" veera continued,"amrit,ab main veerji ki veera nahi,baldev ki veera banana chahti hu...main...main apni galtiyo ka paschattap karna chahti hu.Baldev ko wo sab dena chahti hu,jo uska haq hai..."she paused. >>>nafrat karta hu main tujhse<<< the words echoed in her ears."isliye main yaha ayi hu amrit.Meri help karegi na tu...!"veera asked with a hope in her eyes.Amrit hugged her,"ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai yaar!Agar tu sahi mayno me baldev ko chahti hai,toh baldev ko tera hone se koi nahi rok sakta."and she patted her back.Two months passed,veeba's life continued as general.Amrit asked veera to work in pp's bank,and she'l try to gather her gang for help.It was weekend when veera got continue 3 days national holidays and she visited pp.In these 3 days visit veera and baldev crossed each other.Ranvi's contract got extended for more months,so he wasn't able to came back,even thou' he knew about the divorce.When he called veera,she politely asked him not to interfere in their matters now,they'l handle it.Baldev has lost his charm,but one day jaggi billa forced him,to go with them.And play cricket as they previously used to play it.He was in no mood,but balwant asked him to do! What a surprise! They went to ground where they used to play,there were another pind people also.They started playing the game.As told by amrit,veera thought to work in her pind's bank,as it'l be easy for her to meet and try to change baldev's mind. **PRECAP** VeeBa meet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update yaar! Continue soon, eagerly waiting for VeeBa's meeting!😳
Edited by zainabawoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5 - Veera took the route of bank and the ground was their only,just a few distance away from bank.The boys were playing,baldev was just watching only."praaji,aap bhi khelo na,kya aisa he baithe ho...!" jaggi asked."main yehi thik hu..." they got cold response."aise kaise paaji,aap to pritampura k sher ho,aur sher jab tak khel k maidan me na utare toh khel ka maza he kya!"billa said."oo ha paaji,billa bilkul thik keh raha hai,inne dino bad aap yaha aye ho,kuch toh khel dikhana banta hai na!" both insisted.Yes in all these months,the original sher was missing,original baldev was missing,and both friends wanted their sweet,mischievious paaji back to life.Finally baldev agreed to play.He came out of his jeep,took the bat and went to the crease.Here veera was coming closer to the ground,she has no idea that her baldev was their.Baldev took his position,and the bowler was ready to bowl.The bike came towards ground,bowler delivered the bowl,veera's bike suddenly started to jerk and stopped.She got down from bike,baldev hit the good shot,veera was about to sat down to look at tyre,her shoulder got hit by the ball."ah..."her hands move on her shoulders in reflex.Baldev watched that ball has hit the girl accidently.She was wearing black kurta on blue jeans."oh teri..."jaggi said in worry.Veera was pressing her shoulder,baldev immediately ran towards her to help,leaving the bat.Veera looked at the ball,she got furious,baldev came closer to her,she stood up,turned and "dikhayi nahi deta ki tum log ko!" "maaf karna,aapko lagi toh nahi..!" veera-baldev spoke together,and got shocked.Veeba were face2face together after a long time.Their eyes meet,no movement,veera still had her hand on shoulder.It last for some seconds."veera..!"he spoke."baldev..." veera replied.A calm expression was on baldev's face,after such a long time.>>>6 mahine baldev,aur ye deewani tujhe pakar rahegi<<<her words echoed in his ears. >>> vekha puttar main na kehti ki wo veera tere layak nahi.Talaq hua nahi hua aur aye kudi pind chad k chali gai!<<<bansuri's words echoed in his ears,which she has said to him,after veera left the pind.The anger took on his face,he closed his eyes and turned his back towards her.Veera got a jerk,she was about to say something but baldev started walking very fast."baldev,baldev ruk..."she came in her senses and started shouting following him.But baldev didn't give her an ear,she kept shouting."baldev...ruk to sahi...ik min..." he reached towards the jeep.He also ignored his friends,sat and drove away."baldev...v..!meri bat to sun...baldevv...!"but he was gone raising dust all over.She ran a good distance,but finally her legs gave up.She started panting for her breath,she fell on her knees,still panting.The boys were looking at her,jaggi billa came to veera."baldev...tu cha...h.e kitni bhi nafrat karle...me...mera dil janta hai...ki tu dil se ab bhi mera he hai..." she murmured,smiling.Baldev reached home,fuming in anger,he went directly to his room.He was breathing heavily.He went towards cupboard,opened it and took out a paper.It was divorce paper,"kyu...kyu natak kar rahi hai tu veera...kyu hamesha mere samne aakar khadi hojati hai tu...kyu main teinu bhul nahi pata...kyu main hamesha tujhme kho jata hu...kyu tu mainu fir se dhoka dekar chad k chali gai...kyu?" baldev said looking at.Here veera got up and looked at jaggi billa,and smiled.Baldev was crying,"maine teinu talaq k liye kaha aur tu mann bhi gai.Chalo thik hai,mann to gai,jhooth bhi bola,ki tu mera vishwas...phir se jeetengi...par tune to phir se dhoka de diya! Pind chad k chali gai tu toh!" he was shaking. "parjaai ji,aap toh yaha roj aane wali thi,lekin..." jaggi asked her. Veera told them,"iski zarurat thi jaggi,thodi si duriyon ki zarurat thi! Par ab main hamesha k liye lauti hu,sirf baldev k liye!" here baldev was blabbering,"saabit kar diya tune veera,ki tune kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya he nahi...warna aise bhagi nahi hoti...". "inne dino bad mainu pp me ane ka mauka mila. Ab yehi apni naukari karungi. Baldev ko manane ka waqt ab aa chuka hai...!uske dil se apne liye pyaar ko bahar lane ka waqt aa chuka hai!" veera said determined. "bahut hogaya veera,tu ab jis bhi maqsad se yaha aayi hai,wo kabhi pura nahi hoga.Baldev ab teinu kabhi milega veera,tu ab mere liye mar chuki hai...!" he almost shouted.Veera went back to delhi,as her job record was well n gud,so she got the permission to transfer. Amrit and the whole gang also got ready to help veera. Veera finally started to work in pp's bank.And yes veeba encounters were general,and the royal ignorance also.Whenever baldev spots veera,he always left the place.In bank also,if any problem arised,veera took it on herself,even if baldev refused to.She also started to help baldev in his transport business using her contacts,when she got while working at delhi.When he got to know about this,he went to veera,and confronted her.In return she placed a quick kiss on his cheek
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice updates,

Super quick too.
bansuri will always be anti-veeba
baggi will always be pro-veeba

Looke forward to some more updates tomorrow 😆

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