Veeba Tagathon:Suhaagraat ki SIYAPPA! !:Part-14{1},page-65 updated! - Page 21

Originally posted by: ...-Riya-...

Thanks for another lovely update.😳

My favourite part was Jaggi and his bokwas stories!🤣

😆Thank u so much dear!😛

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Awesome update Tehsina!!👏⭐️ Loved it to the core...and who said you are bad at comedy?😡 It had the right mixture of comedy, emotions, and hotness☺️...my favorite part was Jaggi's dialogues... when you started about movies, I was reading with wide eyes ki age kya hoga...and OMG...nagin dulhan and chudail dulhan🤣🤣 maazak bana ke rakha hain Baldev ko😆...amazing update.🤗. thanks for this wonderful update🤗.and your ending suggests you want to something serious to happen?🤔😆

Eagerly waiting for it. 😆 and Muna best of luck dear...🤗I know you will rock it dear.😃

Eli!🤗Thank u so much!Glad u liked it..I dnt kno Y I tend to turn comedy into hot scene too?!😆
But so happy I managed to write sm comedy at least!😳😆
Nd no,I dnt want it to be serious..In fact it depends on da writer..🤔Watever she wants to mk it..I just wanted to specify Baldev's actual problem..Cause it's like mkn him too scared of Suhaag raat,as if he is afraid of losing virginity might be a question on his mardaangi!So how cn we Ballu lovers do dt..?😆So I just wanted to specify a bit Y he is scared of it..😳
Nd Muna is busy,so I tagged Roshini!😛Lets see where dis goes to next..

Originally posted by: Nikki36

Great update, as the story progresses I feel so sorry for such a stressed out baldev. The last chapter indicates he knows exactly what to do but wants to make sure its all ok for veera! What a guy

Thank u Nikki!😛🤗Yes me too feeln bad for him...😭Hai na?He is da best guy any girl wud love to have!I m sorry if da notion is too serious,but I wanted dis to be funny and tender too,at da same time..Like we r all laughing ourselves silly and dn we have dt Awww!He is such a sweetheart tug at our heart too at da end!😳
Mkn him too naive wudnt hv suited his real crctr I felt,as he is shown his bold sides too in da shw..😳Hope it's okay though..Was just my notion..😳

Sina...just now read ur pm and just now read the story as well...wow dear ...so so hot and yet so light hearted...u r a genius👏...u could bring in both the flavours at the same time.

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Sina...just now read ur pm and just now read the story as well...wow dear ...so so hot and yet so light hearted...u r a genius👏...u could bring in both the flavours at the same time.

My in-laws are at my home...I will try to complete by tomorrow and send pm..

Love u for the update❤️

Wow tj mazza aa gaya.enjoyed the update baldev and his restleness on SR and jaggi and ballu convo on chudail and nagin was hilarious mazza aa gaya by god.
Last part was hawtt they nearly going to do it .cant wait for next update

I will have to complete a readathon to comment on this wonderful tagathon after my holiday break . Thanks a lot Sina for all the pms will complete reading and comment together for all the authors separately!!! Wonderful idea guys!!!

I LOVED the update... superb sina... mind blowing ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

All the best Roshni😳

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Sina...just now read ur pm and just now read the story as well...wow dear ...so so hot and yet so light hearted...u r a genius👏...u could bring in both the flavours at the same time.

My in-laws are at my home...I will try to complete by tomorrow and send pm..

Love u for the update❤️

Thank u partner!😃🤗Awww!I dint know..😳Plz tk ur tym..No hurry..!😉After all family cums first..😛

Originally posted by: krock

Wow tj mazza aa gaya.enjoyed the update baldev and his restleness on SR and jaggi and ballu convo on chudail and nagin was hilarious mazza aa gaya by god.
Last part was hawtt they nearly going to do it .cant wait for next update

Awww!Thank u love!🤗N sure Roshini is gonna giv us a fantabulous next part!🥳