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Posted: 11 years ago
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veera's plan backfires,gud 1 dear
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Wonderful Update👏 loved it...continue soon🤗
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Thank you all who liked and commented for the previous part🤗



(16 likes 😳the lowest i ever got, since i started writing on IF an year ago..but i guess my writing has degraded with time maybe😳)


Edited by ..IshqShava.. - 11 years ago
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Part 3

Day five

Until next day afternoon, there was no sign of Baldev and she didn't think of much of it until Gunjan told her casually that Baldev was running a fever and also about Bansuri's distant relative who had come visiting them with her daughter in tow.

Veera decided to check on Baldev once to see how he was. Just for humanity's sake. Nothing more..

Bansuri was talking to her husband when Veera reached their house. "dekhiye na, Pinky kitni achchi bachchi hai..kitna khayal rakthi hai mere puttar ka..main toh soch rahi hoon uski maa se uska haath mangloon apne bete ke liye"

Veera gritted her teeth. So Pinky must be that girl's name whom Gunjan had told her about. She exchanged pleasantries with them and slipped towards Baldev's room at first chance. The door was unlocked and she could hear people talking in muted voices inside. She opened the door a bit and peered in. her jaw dropped at what she saw.

The girl was sobbing and Baldev caressed her back with gentle strokes. As Veera looked on, she leaned on to his chest for support and he gladly welcomed her. How dare she touch a man who belongs to another girl? Belongs to another girl?? Yeah starting NOW!

She turned to leave but it was too late. Baldev had seen her. He had seen the silly tears which had sprung to her eyes without her permission. "Veera ruk..rukja meri baat sunn" he followed her close behind.

Veera ignored him and he directly came in front of her, thus leaving her no chance to escape.

"tu yahan mennu kuch batane aayi thi kya?" he asked. Then she made the mistake of looking into his eyes. His eyes were blazing red, maybe because of the fever. Something in his voice, something in his eyes, made her blood run cold. She had the sudden urge to spill everything to him, tell him each detail, all her plans..

but that girl.. "nahi..main yahan bas tujhse milne aayi thi..par tu kuch zyada hi busy hai, us ladki ke saath..mubarak ho, kuch din me tum dono ki shaadi bhi ho jaayegi..main chalti hoon" Veera replied and left in a haste. Baldev couldn't shake the feeling that she was hiding something from him.

Someone had followed her very closely since morning and that person had decided enough was enough. Time to let the cat out of the bag..

When Pinky's alliance came Baldev's way, he rejected it outright much to the chagrin of his mother.

"is rishte ko naa kehne se pehle meri baat sun leejiye Veer ji..phir faisla keejiye" That was Gunjan. Without mincing words she told him how she had accidentally over heard Veera talking to her friend nearly a week ago. She had kept constant tabs on Veera's activity since then and she had also heard her narrate all her victories to Amrit.

"Veer ji, Veera aap ke saath dhoka kar rahi hai..woh aap ko bas ek joker samajthi hai aur kuch nahi..pyar ka natak kiya usne..bhool jaayiye use.." Gunjan advised him. The truth was, she didn't care two hoots about her brother; all she cared was hurting Veera.

Baldev was shell shocked. Was it possible? Though he was surprised at sudden change in Veera's behavior in past one week, he had never dreamed about her malicious intentions behind it. So this was the thing she was hiding, he had seen it in her eyes today.

"Gunjan, beeji ko jaake batade..main Pinky se shaadi karne ke liye tayyar hoon" he told her.

Gunjan went away happily but Baldev regretted his own words after a moment, he should have verified everything before saying yes..what if this was a new plan by Gunjan just to malign Veera in his eyes?

Veera made another call to Amrit and told her everything. "you are in love..don't make the mistake of losing it..come out clean Veera..use sab kuch batade" was her advice.

"par woh mujhse pyar karta bhi hai ya nahi mujhe nahi pata..aaj kaise chipak raha tha us ladki se" the mere memory of it made her see red.

"main aap sab ke waaste mithayi laayi hoon..kahan hai sab?" Gunjan shouted suddenly from the hall way.

"mere Veer ji ne shaadi ke liye haan boldi Veera..yeh le mithayi kha" Gunjan thrust the sweet in her mouth as she spotted her.

He had said yes to the marriage? Veera's happy world came crashing down at her words. That meant he didn't love her or didn't care. She was getting exactly what she deserved.

But, just as Amrit had advised her, she was in love; and love meant not keeping any secrets from the person you love, so what if the feeling was one sided.

It was late night when she could finally gather enough courage to make that call, one last call. Baldev picked up in the first ring, as usual. She sensed something amiss in his hello' but let it go. "mennu tujhe kuch batana hai, main aajaoon tere ghar?" she asked hesitantly.

He was pacing restlessly in the front yard when Veera reached.

"kya batana chahti hai tu?" his eyes looked doubting. She felt guilty, again.

In a barely audible voice and with eyes lowered, she confessed to him, all her plans and schemes. His eyes seemed to grow darker as she progressed.

"mennu maaf karde Baldeva..main tujhe-" she took his hand in hers and he shook it off. "bas Veera..bohot sun liya maine, bohot keh diya tune..aur kuch mat bol" he turned to leave.

"tu mujhe ek mauka nahi dega? Meri baat toh sun!" she called but he was already inside.

She treaded the home way with a heart heavy as a stone and tears streaming down her cheeks. He didn't want to forgive her, fine. He had moved on, fine. She would be fine too; Give it sometime.

But that sometime' seemed too far as, a month passed and Veera's misery never lessened. The nights went in counting sheep and days lost in deep thoughts. She would pick up her phone sometimes, to call him, but disconnect it the next minute; out of apprehension. She almost never ventured out, until it was absolutely necessary.

Once Baldev came to their house with some work and she watched him secretly, from the stairway; too afraid to confront him.. he looked up suddenly and she shivered. But this time she noticed something else other than his wonderful face; he looked weak. Like someone recovering from an illness. Veera felt broken like never before. It was her doing entirely. She had reduced a roaring lion to an injured creature.

Exactly 30 days later, she had had enough of sitting at home and brooding. She had to go out, meet people. This nothingness couldn't last forever. For the same reason she agreed to accompany her family to an engagement ceremony in the village.

Her eyes boggled when she saw Baldev standing in the entrance. He was welcoming the guests with folded hands. He looked like a dream. Will he never talk to her again?

If she was true to herself, she had to admit that today she had dressed up to please him; with the hope of meeting him. She was wearing the pale blue dress that he had bought for her.

She felt a tug at her dupatta and looked down to see a kid of around 8-9 years handing her a piece of paper.

"isi waqt chat par aaja..tujhse baat karni hai" it was written. The boy pointed to Baldev and left.

He wanted to meet her, but why? She didn't want to build up hopes only to have them dashed later.

She slowly climbed the stairs towards the terrace with a tired pace. A shooting star was falling through the night sky. She closed her eyes and made her wish.

The object of her desire stood magnificently in front of her when she opened her eyes. She stared at him expectantly and he stared right back. The moment got longer as no one spoke. Then a strong gust of wind blew her dupatta out of the hold on her neck. Baldev caught it in an instant.

"tune itthe kyon bulaya mennu? Apni shaadi ka nyota dene?" she asked as he returned it to her.

"haan, shaadi ka nyota dene.." he said in affirmation.

"shaadi di vadhaiyyan Baldev..tum dono bohot khush rahoge" she blinked to hide her tears.

"isme rone di ki gal hai? Chal rona band kar" he pulled her towards him by waist.

"main kahan ro rahi hoon? Woh toh bas.." her throat grew thick.

The next moment she was left flabbergasted as Baldev wiped her tears with his lips, his mouth trailing over face. The feel of his lips seared her from inside.

He had said he was getting married to another girl, then what was this? It was all too confusing.

"yeh kya kar raha hai tu? Jab tu kisi aur se shaadi kar raha hai toh mennu is tarah-" she trailed off.

"maine yeh kaha ki main shaadi kar raha hoon..par kisi aur se nahi, tujhse..Bewakoof kudi!" he chided her lightly.

The word bewakoof' sounded so musical when he said it. The star had fulfilled her wish at last.

"ek mahine pehle jo hua woh bhool ja Veera..har galti ko ek mauka diya jaata hai" he opened his arms and she surrendered herself to him.

The cold, insipid night had suddenly turned into the most romantic night ever.

The End


Ok so that was it..i deleted the end part and rewrote it 3 times in a row, that's why the delay with updating😳

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(P.S: Please read the Thank you note above)

(P.P.S: Please nobody mind, im doing away with the translations this time because im busy at the moment...i'll see if i can type them later😳 sorry)


Edited by ..IshqShava.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! 😃Awesome yaar👏 I just loved the terrace scene. Kash serial main bhi aisa ho toBallus is such a sweetheart. Thanks for lovely story dear. 👏 This has been one my favorite stories till now. I am so sad that it ended😭 Thanks for the PM as well.😊
Sorry forgot to add something.I liked how it turned out to be Gunjan and not Baldev as most of us were predicting who was keeping a watch on her. 👏
Edited by ElireEli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was awesome, Vibha😳... Loved the happy ending you gave to your short story...,
Liked the last romance part very much., wish we could've got something like this in the show., where the feeling is mutual... Keep writing, you've got great talent!👍🏼
Start a new story soon, don't deprive us from some good reading for long!😊
Edited by Veebafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
oh so sweet,my balluu is a perfect lover
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaw..its jus awesum vibha ..hw didn't it notice it b4😭
anyways from nxt pls do pm me abt ur wrks dear..this is jus so amazingly written👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome ending to an awesome story!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vibha this was awesome SS!! Gosh, i totally loved it..Please do write another FF or SS, will love to read you stories!!❤️

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