Veeba FF:~MIRAGE..~,Chapter-20(Last Chapter),page-62... - Page 17

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

aww...Sina my Ballu in tears...can't see. Yes Veera always puts herself and her family first...the day she puts Baldev first is the day her love is actually gonna be pure love...LOved the updates - previous and this one...Absolutely hot yet so loving...depicts the throbbing need these two are in...They need to confess asap...Lovely write up.

Continue soonnn...waiting...

Thank u partner!!!😉🤗Yes dis is sth I want to see in serial..Da priority thing..😆Da odrs has to be imagined only..😳I will update soon!😉

Originally posted by: ...nayna...

Amazing update Sina 🤗

Awww!Thank u Nayna!🤗❤️

Originally posted by: TasriS

Nice update...

Thank u dear!😛

Originally posted by: a4aarsh

sina,i'm all ...☺️,but ballu in tears ???i hope veera will certainly come with a plan that will woo her sher ,desperately waiting 4 it,😳

😆Thank u love!🤗Veera will do sth of course..Dnt worry m nt gonna mk u wait long...Will update in smtym..😉

Originally posted by: sunny303

Another amazing update bud!

Bichara Ballu...I want Veera to out him first for once...I really loved how she called herself out on it this time!

Looking forward to the next chapter 😃

Thank u Sunny!🤗Will be updating soon..!😉

Originally posted by: vinnithelover

aww,poor baldev. .
hot too!!

Thank u dear!😛

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Awww poor baldev...

I m feeling bad for him...

Otw beautiful update...

Thank u so much dear!😃

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Tehsina this is just awesome... I am just loving the way this story is shaping up...this was such an amazing update...it had the required hot scenes as well as dealt with Baldev's pain in such a beautiful way...👏⭐️ ...I can almost feel his pain...and loved how Veera's inner voice tried to make her understand that she has always taken him for granted...superb update...eagerly waiting for the next...coz I know you won't keep our beloved Ballu in pain for long and soon he will get all the love he deserves...thanks for updating so soon...please keep them coming at this pace...surely makes us love you more...🤗

Thank u Eli!🤗Glad u like da fast updates,as m tryn to wrap it up fast,and move on wid my odr stories..😳So glad it was shown properly..I was a bit worried..😳

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Nice

Thank u!😛

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

poor them.inner mind scene of veera was written well

Thank u dear!😛