RANJAN SS new * THE MISSING YEARS* PROLOGUE

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi all... i am here with my new SS..


the story is basically an attempt by me to sketch whatever happened in the missing 15 years between Ranjan.. As to how probably Gunjan changed from a sweet simple girl to what she is today and also her relationship with ranvi and how Ranvi fell in love with her over the years..

the SS moves over many years in parts and sequences which lead to the change in both of them and their relationship..

its my attempt to something new for the first time.. although i have written a lot of SS.. but this is quite unqique to me..

i wanna thank Vinder90 who has helped me with his valuable inputs to build this up..

pls do let me know if u like this and i shall continue writing..

thanks


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It was a week since Ranvi had returned from Delhi, leaving Veera in the boarding school.. It was too difficult for him to live without that one person whom he had brought up with so much care and attention all these years.. but then he knew that it was for her good that he had to take this step...

He is not able to show interest into anything , neither to go to school or to make pots or even go and play with his friends.. his life seemed to have taken a standstill now.. all he did was waited for the clock to strike 7pm so that he could speak to veera and put her to sleep.. that small conversation everyday had become the only essential part of his life.. rest all on hold..

Ratan had been noticing him that ever since veera left how lonely and sad Ranvi had become.. she wanted him to go to school and finish his basic studies.. but she also knew what pain he has been going through separated from his sister.. so she rather remained quiet to let him fight his feelings himself..

But now it had been so many days and she dint want him to mess up his future and life in this darkness.. she decided to confront him

"Ranvi.. aur kitne din yuhi dukhi baitha rahega... Veera dilli mein theek hai.. ab mainu lagta hai ki tujhe bahar jaa kar apne doston se milna chahiye.. aur kal se waapis school jaana bhi shuru kar le" Ratan sternly orders ranvi

Ranvi is sitting on the staircase with his legs folded and teary eyed " beeji mainu kuch accha nahi lag raha.. mainu kahin nahi jaana"

Ratan is angered " kya matlab hai kahin nahi jaana.. mainu iss baat par koi behas nahi chaiye ranvi.. kal se tu school jaa raha hai bass.." she tells him and walks away

Ranvi looks at her helpless and he has no choice and agrees to go ..

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Next morning Ranvi gets ready and takes his bag and ready to go to school.. he is very uninterested..

Ratan calls out to take his lunch box and leave.. he comes down and sees just one lunch box and feels sad.. however he puts it into his bag and leaves..

He is slowly walking looking at the floor and kicking stones on the way.. it seems like his legs wouldn't move ahead to take him to school.. he suddenly kicked one stone really hard in irritation

He suddenly heard a voice "aah..."...Ranvi snapped out of his thoughts and saw that there is someone in front of him..

He just lifted his eyes to see Gunjan.. who is angrily staring at him..

" Ranvi.. yeh ki hai.. mainu patthar kyu maara" she questions in anger

Ranvi was trying to calm her " maaf kar de gunjan.. who maine tujhe dekha nahi"

Gunjan calms her anger " koi nahi.. school kyu nahi aaya inne din?? Veera nu dilli chad ke to kafi din ho gaye na"she questions him

" who.. mera mann nahi kar raha tha.. aur akele school jaane ki aadat nahi hai na" he says walking upto her

Gunjan softly says " haan ranvi .. main samajh sakti hoon.. minu bhi veera de bina bahut akela lagta hai.. mere ek hi to dost hai woh .."feeling upset

Ranvi understands that indeed she was her only friend.. " tu bhi chali jaati na dilli saath padhne.." he says sternly

Gunjan looks into his eyes which was asking him don't u know why I stayed back..

Ranvi anyways dint want to coax her more on this as she had already told him the reason for opting out of studying in delhi..

" chal gunjan.. school chalte hai.. de apna bag mein utha deta hoon"

" koi nahi ranvi.. mein utha loongi.. chal.." she says softly and they both leave walking together



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Farnazlover thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow di 😊 it's awesome par itna sa😭 I want more di,please upload soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks vinder.. hope to get more comments to set me up to write more😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samira1984

wow di 😊 it's awesome par itna sa😭 I want more di,please upload soon


samira it is a continuation from after ranvi left veera in delhi and came back.. it is not a romanctic OS really...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... so happy to get this.. amazing work NJ ... luv u... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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and it was so cute to see this smally Ranjan again 😆 so adorable...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome attempt to tie loose ends, Namrata & Vinder..

Its a good start.. I can really imagine Kid Ranvi in ths part.. Looking forward to see transformation of Gunjan frm a Shy girl to bubbly-carefree spitfire.. Thanks for this awesome start.. Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMjHiM..

wow... so happy to get this.. amazing work NJ ... luv u... 👍🏼

thanks rim.. u have missed out on lot of my OS😒... go read them at ur time.. i love u too.. i really missed u yaar 🤗 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Awesome attempt to tie loose ends, Namrata & Vinder..

Its a good start.. I can really imagine Kid Ranvi in ths part.. Looking forward to see transformation of Gunjan frm a Shy girl to bubbly-carefree spitfire.. Thanks for this awesome start.. Update soon..


thanks dreamweaver... its just an attempt and hope we do justice to our understanding of the show.. thanks a ton for showing encouragement and support.. really need that😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a ton ashita😊

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