'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8 - Page 9

Great Update! Aww gunjan is just all 😳☺️ in the song, but i smell heartbreak/mu in the air🥺...loved Veera The Cupid/BFF ⭐️ though

Originally posted by: Sasha_Yuvreen

Great Update! Aww gunjan is just all 😳☺️ in the song, but i smell heartbreak/mu in the air🥺...loved Veera The Cupid/BFF ⭐️ though

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Gunjan reaches where ranvi is waiting to talk to her... he smiles at her seeing her at a distance..

Gunjan a bit shy fiddles with her dupatta and walks slowly towards ranvi trying to hold on to her emotions.. as she comes closer to him and she looks into his eyes and smiles.. Gunjan starts feeling short of words to start a conversation and an increased rate of heart beat making her extremely anxious..

But however she collects some courage to speak up " Woh.. Ranvi.. Woh.. Veera ne mainu kahan tha kit u mujhse kuch gal karna chahta hai.. to.."

Ranvi shows some irritation... "ab veera bhi na.. choti baat nu inna vadda bana deti hai.. aur tune to use sab kuch bata hi diya hai.. "

Gunjan is bit confused but still feeling tensed.. all her eyes are sparkling only to hear from ranvi that he loves her.. " haan ranvi.. bata na.. main sun rahi hoon"

Ranvi comes closer to gunjan and holds her shoulders and speaks up " Gunjan dekh hum ek ddoje nu bachpan se jaante hai na.. aur inna bharosa to karti hai na ki mai tere waaste koi galat naseehat nahi doonga.."

Gunjan nods her head trying to understand what ranvi is trying to say

dekh gunjan.. who balwant tayaji ne mainu bulaya tha aaj.. tere byah di baat karne.. aurmainu lagta hai ki who bilkul sahi faisla le rahe hain"

Gunjan breaks down in a big smile coated with shyness in her eyes

Ranvi leaves her shoulder andmoves back and turns around and continues his talk " dekh balwant tayaji ne na tere waaste ek vadda changa nri munde da rishta dekha hai.. "

Gunjan is hit by a sudden shock.. she looks at ranvi in astonishment

Ranvi turns back and smilingly tells her.. mainu bhi lagta hai ki who munda bahut changa hai.. aur tujhe jyaada der nahi karni chahiye.. "

Gunjan suddenly holds ranvis hand in anger " yeh tu ki keh raha hai ranvi..."

Ranvi tries to calm her down " gunjan.. dekh balwant tayaji n uteri din raat fikar rehto hai.. aur who tere waaste sabse accha rishta dekhna chahte hain.. aur tu naa jaane kyu inne samay se ae byah di baat taal rahi hai"

Gunjan eyes fill with tears.. she starts to break down inside of her hearing those words from Ranvi.. she was not expecting this...

She starts to move backwards and starts walking away wiping her tears...

Ranvi runs and holds her hand.. " gunjan rukh.. dekh mainu bata ki takleef hai.. yun ro mat tu"

Gunjan tries to hold on to her emotions and anger om ranvi..

But ranvi still continues trying to explain her.. dekh gunjan balwant tayaji de bare mein soch..."

" Ranvi .. main tujhse pyaar karti hoon" gunjan suddenly interrupts him

Ranvi suddenly stops his words and feels a sudden gush of shock to hear this from Gunjan.. he keeps looking at gunjan unable to express himself.. he is confused and out of words

Gunjan continues,.. " Ranvi main itthe isi liye aayi thi kyuki main tujhse apne dil di baat kehna chahti thi.. ki main tujhse pyaar karti hoon.. aaj se nahi naa jaane kab se.. mainu laga kit u bhi mujhse pyaar karta ahi aur yahaan dil di baat kehne de waaste bulaya hai.. par tune to.."

" Ranvi.. Kyu ranvi.. kya tenu kabhi mere aankhon vich pyaar nazar hi nahi aaya?? Mere dil di baat kabhi suniyi hi nahi di?? Hum to ek dooje nu bachpan se jante hai na"

Ranvi composes himself " Gunjan.. dekh.. main jaanta hoon ki hum bachpan se ek dooje nu jaante hain.. par mere dil vich tere waaste aisa kuch bhi nahi hai... aisa tere bare mein kabhi nahi socha.. "

Gunjans exression changes to feeling rejected... she tries to gulp ranvis words with a lot of pain...

Ranvi tries to explain her " dekh gunjan.. meri baat samjhne ki kosish karni hogi tenu"

Gunjan is unable to take any more... she starts walking away and runs away... ranvi is left there and he feels miserable for making her cry and breaking her heart

Gunjan goes home and into her room crying.. she lies face down on her bed and weeps.. thinking of all her moments with Ranvi ..

Ranvi sits down in the place he was and feels worried .. gunjans words keep echoing in his ears and he feels terrible...

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Ranvi is in his room... Veera comes running to him..

"veerji.. veerji mainu aap se gal karni hai"

Ranvi looks at her.. he has been constantly thinking about what gunjan told him..

" veerji aapne gunjan didi ko... mera matlab hai.. who aapko chahti hai.. aur aap.." veera tries to explain

"veera.. main samajhta hoon.. par dekh gunjan meri dost hai.. bachpan se main usse change tarah se jaanta hoon.. par uske bare mein kabhi maine iss tarah se socha hi nahi.. main usse pyaar nahi karta" ranvi tries to explain

" par kyu veerji.. aur aap chahte hain ki who kisi nri munde se vyah kar le?" veera questions

" veera.. gunjan ke liye yeh hi accha hai .. gar main uss se pyar nahi karta to who kisi bhi haalat mein mere naal khush nahi reh payegi.. aur mainu lagta hai yehi sahi hai.. " ranvi sternly says veera and leaves..

After all he never loved her in such a way..

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Gunjan is in her balcony and very upset... the NRi guy and his family will be here to see her...bansuri made her dress up to meet the groom's side.. but she is teary eyed and doesn't want to see them..

Balwant comes to her and says " Gunjan puttar.. tu tayyar hai na puttar.. dekh main jaanta hoon ki tujhe vyah karne ki jaldinahi hai.. par .. har kudi nu ek na ek din vyah karna hi hota hai na.."

Gunjan looks at him teary eyed.. he wipes her tear

" gunjan.. dekh puttar ro mat.. aur mere naal chal.. aur uss munde se mil le.. baaki faisla tera"

Gunjan in no choice goes wit balwant..

The groom and his family is here... and gunjan comes with a tray of tea and serves them all... they are all very happy to see her..

The grooms mother says " balwant ji.. hume to kudi photo mein hi pasand aa gayi thi.. hum to bas ek vari dekhna chahte the bas.. hume to yeh rishta manzoor hai"

Bansuri , baldev and balwant all very happy... bansuri says " are yeh to vaddi chagi baat hai.. mooh to meetha kijiye .. she passes some sweets"

Balwant says " jee.. yeh to chamgi baat hai.. par mainu apni kudi ki bhi ek very marzi jaan ni hogi.. aur agar uski bhi haan hai to phir jald hi vyah kara denge"

Gunjan walks away to her room uninterested..

Balwant requests some time from the grooms parents and promises to call them back.. and they also agree and leave

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Gunjan runs to ranvis fields.. its dark already and ranvi is about to leave..

Suddenly he sees gunjan there who seems to be quite In a mess.. but he tries to avoid her and walk away..

"Ranvi" she screams " meri gal sun"

She goes closer to him and holds his shirt tightly and her eyes tear filled... " Asia kyu kar raha hai mere naal.. kya sach mein main tujhe pasand nahi.. ki kami hai mujhme ranvi.. tujhe mujhse pyaar kyu nahi hai"

Ranvi feels disteressed.. he holds gunjans palms and says sternly " Dekh gunjan.. tenu meri baat samajhni hogi.. main tujhse pyar nahi karta.. aur iski koi wajah nahi hai.. "

Gunjan moves back and wipes her tears and questions with angst filled eyes " acha theek hai ranvi.. aaj mere ghar mainu dekhne ladke wale aaye the.. mere jawaab da intezaar kar rahe hai papaji.. main tenu poochti hoon ranvi.. kya mainu uss munde se vyah karna chahiye"

Ranvi is shocked at her question.. but he looks in to her eyes with angst and says " haan"

Gunjan clinches her fist and walks away from there...

need to re-collect my mind be4 commenting. ..

Another brilliant update 👏 Beautifully written and very emotional
I really wanted to see this happen in the show with gunjan in love with ranvi
I don't know what the creatives have in store for Ranjan fans but I can at least imagine them the way I wanted to see them in your OS

Please continue soon and thanks for the pm 😊

Veryy nice..!! keep it up! ❤️

very depressing story 😔 but i dont mind gunjan deserves it 😡 serial mein usne jo bhi kiya ye padh ke i feel better

SSSOOO Beautifuk nd Romantic Namrataji,Kaash Serial mein GUNJAN RANVI ka Pyar ko samajh pata, 😕eagerly waiting to watch RANJAN union nd Romance in the show.keep updating Namrataji.LOVED it.ZABARDAST,LAJAWAAB.❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Vinder90

need to re-collect my mind be4 commenting. ..

writing emotional content in such a manner is pretty awesome!!! 👏

from your build up to this part, the way the story has flowed, its been spot on!!!! this is like the ultimate alternate storyline that would have all the longetivity and elements that have all the spices, happiness, sadness, and most of all emotions that you can instantly connect to without a second thought. . ..

totally loved the way you brought in NRI track . . and the emotions boiling within gunjan's mind. . . . a very brilliant piece of writing di. . hope it never ends. . . 👏 👏 👏 👏👏