'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8 - Page 7

WOW awesoem ranjan story

Originally posted by: Sabhayata

WOW awesoem ranjan story

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Gunjan is walking a bit angry on her way home... suddenly she stops when she sees veera in the opposite direction

Veera looks at her from top to bottom and kind of feels guilty.. looking at gunjan all dresseded up and wearing the same gift the veera had given... but still she manages to pass a smle and come close to gunjan.. " Gunjan didi..aap to vaddi soni lag rahi ho"

Gunjan gives an angry look to veera and starts walking away...

Veera stops her " ki hua gunjan didi"

Gunjan turns back and says " Veera tune mainu jhoot bola na ki ae salwar ranvi ne pasand ki thi"

Veera gives a shocked look as she dint expect that gunjan will come to know of it " gunjan didi.. who kya hai na ki.. who mainu laga ki.."

Gunjan starts to walk away in anger.. but suddenly veera shouts from behind

"Gunjan didi.. dil ki baat na dil vich jyada din nahi rakhna chahiye.."

Gunjan suddenly stops and turns back and sees Veera...

And veera smiles and continues " Veerji se keh dijiye apne dil ki baat.."

Gunjan turns back in denial " kaise dil ki baat.. ki keh rahi hai veera"

Veera comes closer to gunjan .. " Didi.. yehi baat ki aap veerji se pyar karti hai.. aura b se nahi.. jaane kab se karti hain.. aur yeh baa tab aur mat chupaiye.. jaldi se unhe bata dijiye aur meri bhabhi ban jayiye"

Gunjan gets a faint shy smile on her face... but she is teary eyed... "Veera.. ae tu jo keh rahi hai"

Veera hugs gunjan " haan didi... mainu sab pata ahi aur samajh mein bhi aata hai.. aapke dil ka pura haal aapke aankhon mein hai.. veerji se keh dijiye didi.. varna mere veerji kabhi bhi nahi jaan payenge"

Gunjan nervously says " veera.. par mein kaise.. ek kudi hoke apne dil di baat kaise kahoon.. Kaash ranvi khud hi keh deta"

But veera insits " maanti hoon gunjan didi.. ki kudi hokey eh baat kehna mushkil hai.. par veerji ko aap bachpn se jaanti ho who kitne na samjh hai inn baton mein.. agar aap unhe apne dil ki baat bataogi to mujhe yakeen hai ki unka jawaab haan hi hoga"

Gunjan smiles and is very happy.. she hugs veera and says " shaayad tu theek kehto hai veera.. main ranvi se jaroor baat karungi"

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Ranvi goes with some work to balwant.. regarding the fields etc... after all the discussion balwant tells ranvi

"ranvi puttar.. tenu ek gal batani thi.. tenu ata hai Gunjan de waaste ek bahut hi changa rishta aaya hai.. doosre pind ka munda hai.. London mein acha karobaar bhi hai.. unhe Gunjan di tasveer bahut acchi lagi.. aur jald hi woh log gunjan nu dekhne aane wale hain"

Ranvi smiles " yeh ko change khabar hai tayaji.. Gunjan ka byeh acche parivar wich ho jaaye isse acha ki hoga"

Balwant is happy " ae to sahi baat hai.. bas pata nahi ae gunjan kyu vyah ki baat nu har waqt taalti rehti hai.. ab uski umar ho gayi hai vyah ki aura b der nahi karni chahiye.. ab use kaun samjhaye"

Ranvi consoles " aap chinta mat kijiye.. gunjan jarooq maan jayegi.. jab mainu milegi to main bhi use samjaonga.. mainu lagta hai ki agar rishta accha hai to aap ko gal aage badhani chahiye"

Balwant feels good with ranvis words

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Ranvi reaches home and goes to his room ...

Suddenly veera comes there and hugs Ranvi.. "veerji veerji... main bahut khush hoon"

Ranvi is confused " are veera.. ki hoya"

Veera says " Veerji.. who na main kaise bataon.. woh gunjan didi ke bare mein"

Ranvi says " acha gunjan ne tujhe bata diya? Kitni kamli ladki hai.. ab uske papaji uske liye inne pareshaan ho rahe the.. mujhse uske vyah ki baat bhi ki"

Veera is very happy " kya balwant tayaji ne aapse gunjan didi ke vyah"

Ranvi holds veeras shoulders " haan veera.. mainu to lagta hai ki yehi sahi hai.. bas gunjan se baat karne ki jaroorat hai.. bas who maan jaaye to"

Veera says " are veerji kyu nahi maanegi.. mainu lagta hai ki aapko gunjan did se milna chahiye.. aur aaj hi aur saari baat kar leni chhaiye.."

Ranvi is bit confused

Veera says aap na aaj shaam ko gunjan did se mil lena. Main unhe keg doongi ki woh aapse milne aaye aaj"

She sprints and runs away in happiness ..ranvi tries to stop her but she runs away...and calls gunjan and asks her to meet ranvi today and tell him everything

Gunjan on the other hand is too happy and decides to tell him all today

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Ok guys I have added one song sequence here.. do read the sequence and then listen to the song and imagine the sequence..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mw0uxA_pRE[/YOUTUBE]

Gunjan goes to her room and takes out all the stuff from her box under the bed and takes out ranvis pic from that and lies down on her bed holding that.. a tear flows down from the corners of her eyes.. she wipes it off and holds the pic to her heart and closes her eyes

(Saanwariya saanwariya, main toh huwi baawariya
Tune mann moh liya...saanwariya ho...
Uljha sa ye mann hai, sulgha sa ye tann hai
Sapnon ka saawan hai, nainon ka aangan hai
Chhalke mann gaagariya..saanwariya ho...saanwariya ho...

She goes to her balcony and catches hold of a pegion sitting there... and slowly flies it ff in the air in happiness..

Saanwariya saanwariya, main toh huwi baawariya
Tune mann moh liya...saanwariya ho...

Gunjan goes on the terrace and starts taking off the dried clothes from the rope.. suddenly she imagines ranvi behind who tickles her and she drops all the clothes from her hand.. she starts running behind him but he suddenly grabs her into his arms..

Jo tu yun paas aaya hai, jo tu yun dil pe chhaaya hai
Toh maine kya paaya hai, kaise kahoon haan
Kahin dhadhkan ki kaliyaan hai, kahin sapnon ki galiyaan hai
Jo mann mein rang-raliyaan hai, kaise kahoon

and he puts his hands into her hair.. and she looks down shy.. but she gets close to his chest and hugs him..

Tu jo, mujhe, aise, behkaaye, kabhi kabhi mujhe toh badi laaj si aaye
Bhooli hoon main jaise, apni dagariya
Jabse hai dekhi maine, prem nagariya, prem nagariya

she opens her eyes to he dream she just saw.. leaves her with a heart felt smile on her face and tears in her eyes
Saanwariya saanwariya, main toh huwi baawariya
Tune mann moh liya...saanwariya ho...

she starts to get ready to go.. making sure she is dresses all well.. her hair and jewellery all.. looking at the mirror and she sets off to meet ranvi

on the way she keeps getting images of the past.. from her childhood days with ranvi.. when they were is same class.. when veera had left , they used to always come back from school together and ranvi used to take her bag from her and walk her till her house...

Tu jo, mila, mujhe, toh ye saara, sama, badal gaya
Khilne lage hain phoolse meri raah mein

suddenly she feels ranvi walking next to her... she holds his arm and rests her head on it.. and he holds her waist and walks with her

Phir yun, laga, mujhe ke ye dharti, nayi huwi
Naya ambar huwa, teri aur meri chaah mein

But then it was just her imagination.. so she starts to run towards the fields dancing in happiness

Chanchal, hawa, taraana koyi gaaye
Nadiya bhi koyi kahaani kehti jaaye

She sees ranvi at a distance who also sees her coming and smiles at her.. gunjan composes herself and slows down and slowly and shyly walks towards ranvi.. trying to collect her words to talk to him

Jabse mili sajna, tujhse najariya
Ho gayi hai sudh-budh ki mujhse gathhariya
Saanwariya saanwariya
Saanwariya saanwariya, main toh huwi baawariya
Tune mann moh liya... saanwariya ho...

to be continued...

again di, needless to say, but I will say it a thousand times if i haev, to JOB WELL DONE!!! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Vinder90

again di, needless to say, but I will say it a thousand times if i haev, to JOB WELL DONE!!! 👏👏👏

a very creative piece of work,

if only CVs had half , even a quarter the effort you put in thinking of this storyline , and wrote a enjoyable story that this is. . . .

absolutely loving the Gunjan Veera moments. . . and what a way way more acceptable way of bringing in NRI matter . . .

lookin forward to whats next. . .song sequence fits in perfectly with GUnjan . . . ranjan spirit got another lifeline!!

Another brilliant update 😊
please continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm 😊

Very Nice update!Continue!!Thanks for the PM!!

nice update
thanks for the pm

u write so well namrta .
but mujhe hashi kyu aa rahi hsi
iss gunjan aur show ki gunjan me jameen assman ka fark hai
in cvs ne sirf trp ke liye gunjann ke character ka satynash kar diya hai aur trp bhi nahi mil rahi hai

Originally posted by: moniloveasya

u write so well namrta .
but mujhe hashi kyu aa rahi hsi
iss gunjan aur show ki gunjan me jameen assman ka fark hai
in cvs ne sirf trp ke liye gunjann ke character ka satynash kar diya hai aur trp bhi nahi mil rahi hai