'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Heart touching part.Poor gunjan 😔 Ranvi had no feelings for my gunjan 🤔I cant wait for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --swathy--

Heart touching part.Poor gunjan 😔 Ranvi had no feelings for my gunjan 🤔I cant wait for nxt part

thanks swathi.. i will update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DazzilerDizzy

OMG...for the first time..l am loving A RANJAN story!! Thanks to you!! Eagerly waiting for the next part!! Continue asap!!


oh wow.. thanks dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: moniloveasya

good one very nice
thanks for pm


thanks moni 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitaiyer

Well written di..😊
Love this stern Ranvi...
Really excited & eagerly waiting for nxt part...😉


thanks ashita.. i will update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi guys.. this is a short update... just needed for a continuity..


Its morning Ranvi is sleeping... he wakes up to hear some noise and talking down

He rubs his eyes and stretches out of his bed and comes out of the room..

He looks down to see bansuri there talking with Ratan and Chaiji.. He tries to open his still so sleepy eyes and hear the talk

Bansuri saying " pata hai chaiji.. mainu to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki meri kudi da rishta inne acche ghar vich tay ho gaya.. aur munda bhi na London main rehta hai aur meri gunjan nu bhi jaldi hi le jayega.. ab to gunjan neb hi haan keh diya to chat mangani de pat vyah bas.."

She hands over a box of sweets to them

Ranvi feels a sort of pit in his stomach to hear this.. and remembers his words with gunjan the day before.. when she asked him if she asked him if she should get married and he had said yes.. he realized that gunjan has indeed said yes to the marriage

Bansuri continues " vaise ne unke paas na jyada waqt nahi hai ..issi waaste rasme chodi jaldi jaldi karni hogi.. parso mehandi aur doosri rasme hai aur 4 din baad vyah... agle hafte munde nu wapis bhi jaana hai.. to thode din gunjan de naal beet jayegi.. aur phi eek aad mahine mein gunjan bhi chali jayegi"

She says proudly and invites them all and leaves

Ranvi walks down the stairs and folds him hands to bansuri as she leaves from there

Veera also present there gives a depressed look to Ranvi.. like he shouldn't have done that.. Ranvi doesn't say anything and just walks away ..

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Its mehandi day and gunjan is getting ready... she is least interested but then she doesn't have a choice really..

Just then veera enters the room and sees gunjan.. they share an eye lock across the mirror

Gunjan just speaks up smiling " are veera.. accha hua tu aa gayi.. zara dekh kausa jhumka mere kapdo ke saath accha lagega.. aur mera salwar kaisa lag raha hai bata zaraa.."

She gets up and shows her the shaadi ka joda.." yeh dekh veera shaadi ka joda.. changa hai na"

Veera goes ahead and hugs her... " mainu maf kar dijiye gunjan didi.. main kuch kar nahi saki"

Gunjan tries to hold back her tears and moves veera back.. " pagal.. ae ki keh rahi hai tu.. zindagi vich har who cheez hum chahte hai hume nahi mil sakta.. kabhi kabhi hume samjhauta kar lena padta hai.. aur ranvi nu bhi.. yeh jindagi uski bhi hai.. aur usse bhi apne waaste chun ne ka haq hai"

"isi liye itna soch mat veera.." she says

Suddenly bansuri enters and they both just hold on their emotions... some women take gunjan down for the ceremony

They all apply the mehandi to gunjan.. and Gunjan quietly keeps looking at her palm getting dressed by the women and many ppl singing around nd celebrating...

Ranvi comes there and enters the hall... his eyes just goes to gunjan who is looking mesmerisingly stunning in her salwar and all the jewellery she is wearing...

Suddenly she looks across the room and her eyes meets up with ranvi's eyes..

She decides to look away from him and just go with the flow of the ceremony...

Her mehandi is done... and she just gets up and goes towards her room... as she is walking she hears a voice from behind

"Gunjan...".. she just stops at the moment as she knows who it is..

Suddenly her had hits her dress and a little mehandi from her finger tips gets rubbed away..

Raanvi comes closer andholds her palm and slowly corrects the mehandi.. and speaks up " Gunjan.. mein tere waaste tohfa laya tha.. main jaanta hoon ke shaayad meri wajah se tera dil bahut dukha hai.. par main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki luch waqt baad sab kuch theek ho jayega.. mainu maaf kar de.. meri bachpan di dost hai tu.. tenu yuh dukh de saath vida nahi karna chahta"

Gunjan just looks at ranvi and slowly pulls her hand way.. and walks away without speaking a word

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It's the wedding day ...

Gunjan is all dressed as a bride... and she is in her room...

She shuts the door and removes the box from below the bed and takes out all the stuff from that ... and she puts all into a cloth pouch and ties it up and holds it to her sari by the side..

Some girls enter and take her to the wedding altar and made her sit next to the groom as the wedding ceremonies begun...

Gunjan kept looking around but she cant see Ranvi at all... but then he enters the venue with veera and is present there

The wedding rasams take place one after the other and all the rituals are completed.. The groom completes the wedding by putting the sindoor to her..

As the wedding is complete gunjan walks out of the house and the vidaai ceremony... gunjan throws the puffed rice above her head and walks out... and then the groom and family sit in the car...

Gunjan moves ahead and turns back for once and sees all.. she sees Ranvi at a distance.. who signals her to smile

Gunjan teary eyed smiles at him.. and she hands over the puch of stuff which was her rememberances of ranvi into veeras hand and hugs her and sits in the car... and leaves...

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Its been about a week since Gunjans wedding.. And all have been fine..

Ranvi is busy in his fields working very hard... suddenly a guy comes there calling ranvi...

Ranvi gets tensed and worried at this call " Ki hua.."

The guy is unable to speak anything " jaldi chal ranvi .. sarpanch ji de ghar abhi"

Ranvi is shocked


to be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME...very nice work di...❤️ keeep it up...u hv sucha creative mind ...very well done!
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Posted: 11 years ago
namrta ye chota tha kya lol
but nice one shadi kyu kara di gunjan ki kisi aur ke sath
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my oh my. .
capturing dhamakas in writing is a art in itself. .

what will the next update bring, is one to wait for!!

please update ASAP!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Namrataji Super Awesome Nd SSSOOO Romantic Update with Suspense,U R Just out of this world,Aapko toh Raghuvir Sir ka Asst. hona chahiye thi.Keep it up.FANTABULOUS.❤️🤗

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