'MAIN KAMLI MERE YAAR KI' RANJAN OS- part 8

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NamuVyas

@NamuVyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: crayonz
mmm...😭😭 me so emotional hogayi.di...u r brilliant. cntd writing😊

haha yeh kya ho raha hai.. romantic part pe log emotional ho rahe hain 🤔..

lol thanks crayonz 😃

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Yeshi Dema

@iloveveera42

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

wah...kya baat...kya baat...menu achi lagi bahut zada...CVS agar aab yeh read kar rahi ho toh, thoda is script se humein dijiye voh ranjan ki love story aisi hi tarah. Namu di you ought to be with Veera team! honestly you have that magic of what it calls to be a writer! update soon and you can't make us wait long, aite? <3 much love the new writer to rise!

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Priya

@Krsna09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

beautiful imagination and writing 😊😊
👏

the scenes were so romantic...many times in relationship we start realising after we are away from that person...and you captured that essence so perfectly!!

Looking forward to the next one 😃

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vckavs

@vckavs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

as usual its awesome di 👏please do continue writin i expectin a lot from these two bt in reality tis cant happen bt readin ur os gives pleasure & happiness in my face. thanx a lot di.

i was just imaginin shivin & farnaz (ranvi gunjan )in this situation aww... they wud look adorable.😳

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

wow loved it

so finally ranvi realised dat he loves her

nd nw wat will he say to gunjan

do update soon

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achu2610

@achu2610

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Namrata di, i lovd it..😃

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

nice update
loved the song
thanks for the pm

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Beti

@MuslimGirl

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

OMG...simply wow... 😊

i jst loved it...trust me diii, for few minutes i was completly lost in ur words and was actually predicting all these scenes in front of me..!! loved ur work n thoughts...!! 😃 👏 ⭐️😉

RanJan r awesome and this part really connects me even much more closer to them ❤️ 😃 ⭐️

Veryy well done...!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏