VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww!!!!!! I just loved the ending...this is so like Baldev.👏...Baldev always knows his limits and I feel in the show too he will never cross his limits though he may feel tempted..😆...dunno my POV🤔...leave it...Thank you dear for this wonderful story...though I do love your hot stories as well😉, but I loved loved loved this one...it was so sensuous and dreamy......I was transported to a different world while reading this..felt like I was present at that scene and watching it live..I am so happy you tried something different...because I am completely bowled over by your story... Awesome, breathtaking,extraordinary,out of this world⭐️...sorry I have no more synonyms left to describe your work😔...you deserve a very big hug for this one...
🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗

I have become your permanent pankha after this.....joldi notun story chai...till then I will drool over this chapter..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one dear thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye! Such a lovly ending!! And yes, Baldev surly knows his limits!! Your stories are always treat to read! Even my LITTLE GM can't stop meh from reading your stories!😆YOU are totally spoiling meh! 😉Now continue asap! And iam waiting for my Poland OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago

I wanted to dance when I saw ur update. Eh? you ended it just like that? Why do always have to play a villain😆

You are seriously awesome yaar! We could feel the high-voltage currents btwn Veeba while reading. Nothing physically happened btwn them yet so much sensuality and sooo much romance (faint).👏 Yes you have kept the original veeba intact - sooo much chemistry but they do remain in limits🤗
Please continue the Poland wala track in your style.
And for the first time I've commented on the first page without any delays.
Edited by anuramesh26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
the room was full of romance.loved veera calling him Dev...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ending! Great romantic OS
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww so cute sina ,absolutely adorable ballu,'n dev huh???😳,i know ur 2 much obsessed in VEEBA nowadays like me.ah i feeling goosebumps ri8 nw
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh dis was something hatke
nice ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just loved that last chapter, it was brilliant, the fact they get so close yet are so far in confessing and fighting against the inevitable is wonderful to read. Sometimes the tease of wether they kiss/don't kiss is equal to or better than the actual event.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank God Ballu lived...my heart was in my through gurrrl!!!awesome story bud!!
Loved it...not the deathy part lol...it was a great read:)))

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