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Awww!!!! This was aweosme👏...I had read your part 4 yesterday but was unable to comment for two reasons...one I was deeply moved with the fact this was turning into a tragedy and I hate whenever it ends with the death of anyone...it keeps haunting me for some time..I had read one of your tragedies "My Angel" and it had kept me haunting for some days..😭...

Oh thank you so much sina for making this part !!

sorry m late to comment😕
ur previous FF was superb dear,excellent nd HOT!!☺️
nd this OS is...no words to xplain my feelings😳awww!! m on Veeba land nw😳

Thank u sooo much for the awesome update.

The end...???

ok so he is fine

Originally posted by: ElireEli

Awww!!!! This was aweosme👏...I had read your part 4 yesterday but was unable to comment for two reasons...one I was deeply moved with the fact this was turning into a tragedy and I hate whenever it ends with the death of anyone...it keeps haunting me for some time..I had read one of your tragedies "My Angel" and it had kept me haunting for some days..😭...

and secondly I did not have the time (lame reason😳) yesterday to pen down my actual feelings as I was busy with the CSP thread..😳...but when I checked my inbox this morning and saw there is another final part I opened it and to my surprise it turned out to be so awesome...Love you for this🤗...Loved every bit of it...Keep writing and sorry for my long post...🤔...I got carried away..😆...Joldi notun story lekho...😳

😆Amar lomba comments aro beshi valo lage!🤗Nd I know da previous chapter was very disturbing..But I had to build it up for the actual kaboom effect of this one!😳I know it was not that kaboom,but i guess watever it was,it was for da sad chapter..😳
Nd yes I hate sad stories too!Kips depressed for weeks...So I try to stay away from sad everything..😳Anyways thank u!Nd m waitn for ur next update too!Bring on some more Veeba moments!😛

Originally posted by: Neetu2825

Part 4 ended with a great cliff-hanger...I thought you had ended the story on a sad note😒...I was glad to see there was a part 5.😃

Thank u!😛I cudnt finish Poland track on a sad note u know?😉

Originally posted by: kinkinikki

Was not expecting another part [:D/] yeah!!

I actually loved chapter four just because it was so unexpected and didnt think there was another part. So glad there was, a veeba story by youb isnt complete unless there is a veeba smooch session 😉

Thank u Nikki!😆Maybe I shud start practicing widout dose smooches,wat say?!😈

Originally posted by: Meilliures

Oh thank you so much sina for making this part !!

U almost killed me with your last update! I couldn't imagine my Ballu's corpse at all! Thanks a lot for making this update and Iove u for this!

U r mst welcome love!🤗Even I cudnt imagine it too!😭U see Veera did not check his pulse!Da poor guy had fainted!😆😉But it was da song which md it shocking..😳