VEEBA OS Col.:OS-12:~A MIDNIGHT RENDEZVOUS..~,pg113.. - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fary5

Awesum awesum awesum 😳
mindblowing sina πŸ˜ƒ
plzzz update soon 😳
nd thnx for the pm dear πŸ˜ƒ



Thank u so much!Updating!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

y is baldev doing dis

nd veera is jealous
does baldev have any idea abt dis
do update soon



U will know soon!πŸ˜›Updating!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Bidzie_

Why did you end it here?
I am so despo to know what happens btwn them...my imagination is going wild
Beautiful update! Loved loved loveeed it 😳 Update asap!



Awww!U know me na?!πŸ˜‰Dnt worry!Update korchi!πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

veera is rly jealous.last part was too good



Thank u so much love!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
[I do hope dis smwhat mks up for today's disgusting episode..But I know it can never be enuf!M just glad I wrote dis in a better mood dan m now!😳Anyways ENJOY!

p.s.M extending it for u MUNA!πŸ˜‰U wanted me to mk it more dan 3 parts right?So here u go!Nw dnt complain!πŸ˜†]

Part-2,page-88:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108705533


Part-3.

Sometimes you wished moments to stand by..Wishing you could keep it in pause mode forever..

It was one of those moments for Veera.

Even though she was trapped firmly by him up against the wall,and he was standing too close for her comfort,and was also invading her personal space at that moment,but Veera wanted to save this moment for good.

She never knew she was a sucker for caveman attitude at this time and age,especially since she was more the independent sort,than the swooning tender female types..But at that moment nothing mattered except those deep dark mesmerizing eyes,that were burning into hers..

And to her utter amazement,his hot breath against her face was making her feel warm,cozy,liquid and electrified all at the same time.It was as if she wanted to curl up in the bed with him wrapped around her like a warm musky scented blanket,and she wanted to purr like a satisfied kitty,as he hugged her tight,against his hard naked velvety rough chest..As if-..

WHOA!Wait a second Veera!What the hell are you thinking about?!She screeched her thought process to a halt before her imaginations turned wilder.

She blinked and tried to inhale a steady breath,sure by now that too much of Baldev had gone onto her head,and she was now drunk in his essence..But did that really make sense?Could anyone get drunk on a person?!

These thoughts passed through her confused mind in a few seconds..A few seconds in which Baldev had moved a few more inches closer..

His hands rested on both sides of the wall by her head,and suddenly Veera wished her hands were locked in his..Or atleast some part of him was touching her.

It was as if they were close yet miles apart..

And Veera wanted more..She did not know why,but she just did..And-..

"Veera..Mainu-..

[Veera..I-..]"His husky voice made her pulse wilder,and she looked into his eyes as if her life depended on it..Her life,her breathing,her very existence now lay in those dark chocolaty eyes,with spiky eyelashes..The eyes that burned scorching fire and yet acted like a balm on her..

He moved his lips closer now..

His warm lips brushed slightly against her cheek..And his bristles scratched her milky skin too,and Veera felt as if a hot electric shock passed through her body at the contact,and inhaled a sharp breath.

He moved his lips to her ear,and his warm breath their tickled her sensitive earlobe,and yet she wanted more..

Veera closed her eyes,waiting for the storm to break loose.She was not entirely sure what storm she was waiting for,but she was already at the end of her patience..

She felt if he did not do something fast,maybe she would-..

His hands lowered and slightly brushed against her side..Wow!If that slight contact felt so good,then how would it feel if he grabbed her-..

"Veera mainu tujhse ek gaal karna tha..Wo-..

[Veera I had to talk to you about something..That-..]"Veera felt her senses soar at his words..

She was so happy that-..

"Wo-..Kaal kinne baje nikalna hai..?

[When do we have to get out tomorrow..?]"Veera was sure she had heard wrong..!What did he just whisper into her ears..?!!

"Baldeva!!!"Veera placed her hands on his chest to push him away,her rage taking over her elated senses..

She was just shoving him away,when suddenly he grabbed her hands and trapped them up against the wall..

An angry Veera looked into twinkling dark eyes,that clearly said loud and clear that he knew exactly what was in her mind..

The next instant he had moved his lips closer to hers,and Veera felt her anger fading away again,as something knotted up in her stomach,and she felt the electric shocks tingling all around her body,starting from the hands he now held trapped in his against the wall,just above her head..

It was exactly what she had wanted him to do some time ago..

His expression was slowly changing too..His features harsher now,his eyes darker,the pupils dialated,his nostrils slightly flared,and his breathing harsher..

It was as if he was holding himself back,barely,Veera observed with a feeling of joy within her,as her heart rate and breathing rate escalated too.

His lips were almost touching hers,but not quite still..His eyes were speaking volumes,and Veera wanted more..

These were new waters for her too..But somehow strangely she was neither scared nor uncomfortable here,trapped like this by him..

It seemed to her,she had been waiting for this moment for a lifetime..

She parted her lips slightly to inhale a long shattered breath..

Their warm breath mingled,and Veera watched as his expression became darker,his jaw rigid,as he fought something hard.

"Veera..Maine un ladkiyon pe siti nai bajaya..Main unki sports car pe bajaya tha..Main koi kudi pe siti nai bajata hu..Inna to tu mainu janti hai na..?

[Veera..I did not whistle at those girls..I whistled in appreciation at their sports car..I don't whistle at any girls..You know me this much at least..?]"His words touched a tender chord in her heart,as Veera parted her lips in astonishment..

She did not know how to respond to his words at all..But somehow she squeezed his hand slightly as if telling him she understood..And when his hands softly squeezed hers back,Veera felt the glow in her heart,getting warmer and brighter..

His eyes suddenly lowered to her lips,and Veera felt her lips start tingling in response..

He studied her soft lips hungrily,his eyes dark and burning,and then when he looked back into her eyes,Veera gasped out at the look in them..

It was a kiss!A long seductive kiss,with his eyes!And he meant her to understand it clearly,as he licked his lips slowly..

Veera felt all the breath leave her body in a whoosh!

"Siti bajunga to sirf kisi khaas ke liye..

[If I whistle it will be at a special someone..]"He whispered huskily as his eyes lighted up with a new something in it..His lips curved slightly with a teasing smile..

And then he looked caressingly at her lips once again..It was another kiss,she realised breathlessly..This one longer and deeper..

Veera's pulse raced faster,and finally when he looked back at her eyes,she realised he was breathless too..

And the next instant he was gone from the room..

Veera slipped down the wall to the carpeted floor..She was now a confused puddle of raw unknown emotions..He had just touched her hands,and Veera felt he had kissed and caressed her senseless!What was happening to her?!

The next day Baldev was back to his friendly jovial form,as if nothing had happened last night..

Veera was not sure it to be happy or sad about it..

Their train had stopped at a station,for twenty minutes..

They had got down from the train to look at a boutique shop by the station,and Veera was now trying a tops she had really liked..

Veera was also trying a short mini skirt,that only covered the upper part of her thighs,jnowing she would never dare to wear it outside..Of course she could always try it here in the privacy of the dressing room only..

"VEERA!Chatti kar!

[VEERA!Hurry up!]"Baldev's scream made Veera run out of the dressing room in the mini skirt and tops itself!

Bit she was too late already as she noticed the train leaving the station,its back only visible now..

"Baldeva!Tu kinna stupid hai!Tu mainu pehle nai bula sakta tha?!

[Baldeva!You are so stupid!You could not call me earlier?!]"She snapped out angrily,turning to Baldev now.

But Baldev was now staring at her open mouthed..

Veera was now even more pissed!What was he-..

And then her eyes rounded,as she remembered what she was wearing,and a blush spread along her cheek..

Then the next instant Veera's mouth hung open,as Baldev looked her from her booted feet to her head,and then back down,and back up again,and whistled loud and clear..!


Part -4,page-96:/forum/ek-veer-ki-ardaas-veera/3905904/veeba-os-col-os-12-a-midnight-rendezvous-pg113







Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hotness redefined! I swear my breath stopped as I went on reading it
The ending is just too damn cute...I smiled wide! Can't wait to see what happens next! Joldi update koro, ok😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u thank u thank u, for writing such an awesome update, it helps make up for the crap on TV at the moment.
I think all the amazing writers on this forum should do the same for us suffering from BWS. ( baldev withdrawal syndrome ) so we can get our baldev and Veeba hit from you guys, who btw write way better stories than the actual script writers.

Awesome!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent one.
Waiting fr next part.
I like veeba.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sinu πŸ€— this was awesomely HOT :)seriously hotness overly-redefine! Love it..thank u so much..eagerly actually DAMN eagerly waiting for the next update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...What an awesome update...
Do update soon dear.

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