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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey all... surprise... 😃 i am not well today so i am unable to study... so lying on the bed my thoughts went to veeba land and wrote this down...

IMP NOTE:-😲 😆 Some people can consider this OS a bit gross... and intimate so stay away if you have any problem with reading such things...😆

ok.. so frankly, it is not that intimate 😆 but still.. don't wanna take a risk...😆
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Saari duniyaa se jeet ke mai aaya hoon idhar...
Haara...tere hi kyu aage kiya tune kya asar...
ke dil ka raaz kehta hoon...
mai jab jab saanse leta hoon..
tera hi naam leta hoon...



(it was gunjan n ranvi's marriage preparation time and after a rocking mehendi ceremony at balwant's house, veera was tired so she decided to stay there only.)

(late night, her mehendi was all done, she was still in her red sexy saree{😉}... She came out of her room and walked around to find her missing earring)

Veera- kitthe gir gayi? Veer jee ne kinne pyaar se di thi mujhe! Mai bhi kasi paagal hoon. Abb dhyaan aa raha hai ki mere kaan me ek baali nahi hai! Uff!😕😕

(she crossed a room and was pulled in by someone. He pulled her and closed the door,pinned Her to the door itself and locked it from the top)

Veera- baldevv? Eh ki karr raha hai badtameez!😲
Baldev- tu bata tu ki karr rahi hai inni raat nu mere ghar wich ??? bhtak rahi hai bhootni jaisi? Hmm?😆
Veera- tenu ki karna hai? Chhadd mujhe!😡
(he pushed her against the door hard, his nose almost brushing hers)
Baldev- tu aaj kal mainu vo kyu karr rahi hai? Haan?😡
Veera- vo ki?😡
Baldev- arre vahi... Avoid!
Veera- tu... Tu pehle chhadd mainu!!!😡
Baldev- pehle javaab de!😡

(veera pushed him hard and tried to get out of his grip. But she cudn't)
(baldev smirked😉)

Baldev- pind di sherni! Bheegi billi kaise ban gayi?😆😆
Veera- plzz baldevv mainu jaane de plzz😭

(on seeing her eyes filling with tears he loosened his grip and softened his expressions)

Baldev- arre rone kyu lagi?

(he moved away and looked worried)

Baldev- veera, arre mai bass chedd raha tha tujhe, tu galat matt samajh mainu... Mai tujhe..

Veera- tu chup kar baldevv! Tenu kuch samajh me aata bhi hai? Kuch andaajja bhi hai meri zindagi me kinna vadda gum mila hai mainu?

(baldev went close to her and stood infront of her)

Baldev- oye mai jaanta hoon tu uss karan se pyaar vyaar karne lagi thi. Lekin vo ladka sahi nai tha yaar. Accha hua na jo tujhe uski sacchai pata padd gyi! Haain?

Veera- dukh hota hai mainu ki maine kaise inne ghatiya insaan se pyaar kiya!! Kaise??? !!!😭😭

(she started crying badly😭, very badly😭😭😭. Baldevv felt awkward. He cudn't figure out what to do)

(she cried and covered her face with her palm and slipped down on the ground taking the support of the door)
(she was kneeling on the ground and crying.)
(baldev suddenly felt something in his heart. He cudn't see her cry like this.)
(he kneeled infront of her, and removed her hands from her face. She looked at him while sobbing)

(he pulled out her earring from his pocket and fitted it on her ear very gently)

Veera- tere paas thi eh?😭
Baldevv- haan vo maine hall me dekhi dali huyi toh utha liya.

(already heartbroken veera, hugged him tightly)
Veera- thanku baldevv!!😭
(and she felt so warm and cozy in his embrace that she sobbed and slowly all her tears were soaked by baldev's shirt)

(hesitantly he embraced her and caressed her head! He felt unusual, slowly he cupped her face)
Baldev- tu aise kyu karr rahi hai... (intense) teri harr khoyi huyi cheez tujhe lauta doonga veera...

(there was a weird and unusual eyelock. They were feeling something unusual and uncontrolable.)
(veera and baldev stared each other, veera smiled a bit and blushed. Baldev's palm ws still covering her cheek, she gently grabbed his hand and smiled.)

(a smile came across baldev's face as well... And slowly the smile turned into an intense look on their faces, there was a force of atraction b/w them, they were feeling weird they wanted to avoid the attraction,
But as the winds blew, veera's hairs started traveling through her face and she looked gorgeous in the moonlight. Baldev felt the cold breez on his face as well, he felt a feeling of love overflowing...)
{ok i am not that good in expressing the intensity of the atmosphere, u guyz have to image a very very very hot environment 😆😆 like this- ☺️}

(veera tried to say something)

Baldev-shh!!! Toh kuch der chup nai baith sakti?

(his fingers were moving on her smooth cheek and veera got butterflies in her stomach)

Veera- tu kya mujhe chup karaaega! Jaane de mainu.!

(she said this with soft voice, shyness and hesitation and confusion 😆 😳)

(as she tried to say another thing, baldev leaned ahead and sealed her lips by his lips {☺️})

(within a second he broke the kiss and looked at her, but again he kissed her, she gave up and kissed him back.)

(he deepened the kiss as she moved her hands through his soft hair... He held her face gently as a support.)
(He grabbed her by her waist...)

{ ok i can't write any more of my imagination...😳 😆 i am feeling shy now 😳😆😆. just imagine a hot kiss 😛😆}

(aftr a while suddenly they broke apart and stood up)

(something really unusual had happened. There was an awkward situation. Veera opened the door)

Veera- mai... Mai...chalti hoon good morning. I mean good night...
Baldev- haan haan.. Same ... Same here...
Veera- haa haa...bye...
baldev- bye...

(she hesitantly walked away)
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Ok that's all... i hope you guyz like it... and KOI MUJHE BHOOLA TOH NAHI HAI NA??😆. chalo batao sabko kaisa laga.. jaldi i am waiting...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...!! sab bhool gaye mujhe? avoid karr rahe ho mujhe??? 😭
bye guyz... abb mai nahi jeena chaahti ... :'((
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Rimzy you r back !!! Wow yaar ... Oye tenu kaise bhool sakte hain meri OS queen ... Bahut miss kiya hai bas yehi soch ke disturb ni kiya Kionki I know u r busy with your study ... I m so happy to c u back ...

Now come to the OS ... It was awesome as usual ... Veera and Baldev Chamistry is really very-2 hot ... Baldev ke pass tha Veera ka earring aww and I love his Dialouge ke wo Veera ko uski Khoi hui har cheez vapis karega ... Haye maar daala ... Their kiss was so romantically hot ... Thanks sweetie pie ... Plz time mein se time nikal ke kabhi aa jaya karo hello shallo kehne ... Thank you mention not( in Baldev's style ) hai g ... Love you so very much ... Stay blessed 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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areee arree roo mat yaa...tennu to kabhi nahi bhoolegen yaar...i stilll remember ki wen i was new 2 the forum the first OS i read was UR(rimjhim) anyways yeh wala OS toh...kya boolon no wordz 2 say...aap kitne aache waale i mean kitne romantic waale OS likhte ho...ek clap🤗 aur hug toh banta hai...awsum OS...bt plz continue soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS!!!
Loved it n thnx 4 d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your os are so fun to read. I have become addicted to going on this forum to check updates, I spend all my time here my kids go hungry and my house is a mess. Lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i miss u badly
gud to c ur os wow bohut acha tha 👏
liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
thanks a bunch yaar,wonderful update,waiting 4 the nxt part,plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
i was missing u alot yesterday...rimz..awesome i just loved it and i must say u r v naughty...☺️...ballu ko kiss k ilawa kuch aur kaam nhi ki
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. Superb 👍🏼i lovd it sooo much 😳 ❤️.Ty so much for pm 🤗

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