RanVeera&VeeBa OS Kidnap Last Part PG3

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: monumolu
VeeBa were awesome... You have done a fine job in making VeeBa magical... Write more... U rock...

Thanks😃

Glad you enjoyed it

I will surely write more if I have any good ideas

thanks for the appreciation🤗

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sania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow!!! Awesome OS!!!

Ur a superb writer!!

Can't w8 2 read more of ur work!!

Thnx 4 d pm!!😊

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nicky13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Perfect ending ... Achhi pitayi ki uss SS and Bakhtawar ki ... Thanks :) you wrote it very well ... Plz keep writing more stuff on VeeBa or Ranjan ... :)

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adhirai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

super ya...you are too good...narration of the story was so realistic...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Veeba_lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Update was amazing😊

U r an amazing writer👏👏

I really loved it

And ya thanks 4 pm😉

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sana2511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

great yaar mein abhi dekhi aur poora padli...lol veeba th veeba hai always fighting karte hai.😆..heer also nice...😊nd then it was perfect ending...ss aur bhaktavar ka saza milne hi chahiye...irritating people..😡overall nice work enjoyed a lot...👍🏼

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786
Wow!!! Awesome OS!!!
Ur a superb writer!!
Can't w8 2 read more of ur work!!
Thnx 4 d pm!!😊

Thanks😃

Glad you enjoyed it

Will defo write more if I have any more ideas

its ok welcone😊

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: nicky13
Perfect ending ... Achhi pitayi ki uss SS and Bakhtawar ki ... Thanks :) you wrote it very well ... Plz keep writing more stuff on VeeBa or Ranjan ... :)

Thanks😃

Glad you enjoyed it

Yeah I really want Ranvi and Baldev to beat up SS and Bakhtawar

I will surely write stuff on RanVeera & VeeBa if I have anymore ideas

thanks for the appreciation🤗