*Veeba* - Random Oneshots (New OS - Lean on Me - P.6)

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

The best one I have ever read on VeeBa...👏

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Awesome,Extraordinary.👏 I am just speechless after reading the OS. The best OS I have read on Veeba till date. I could literally visualize the entire scene in front of my eyes. I hope the CV's do incorporate such scenes in the show as well then the show would reach new heights. Keep writing more.

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

This was beautiful. Very well done! Your Friend is a very good writer!

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

This is just beautiful yaar.
Its so intimtae but yet so touching & beautiful.
The way u wrote pices of puzzle was perfect description of veeba yaar.
I loved the part were she held both of thier hand & carresed it .
It was so touching.
Baldev feeling r so pure

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Ur friend is amazing writer yaar she got gr8 talent .she knows veeba so perfectly

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Prapty/Maisha

@..FallAndFly..

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

This was Beautiful! 👏
I could clearly visualize the whole scenario...your friend is an awesome Writer and I'm glad that you share such amazing stories with us...thanks yaara 🤗