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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Arshi-

wow !! wow !! wow !!
👏
finally RanJan 😳

Amazing !
Awesome !
loved it a ton

plzz continue soon 😊

thank you a ton!!! 😳 🤗
sure will update soon! sorry for being late ... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: trisha17

Awesome update.👏...really beautiful...and thamks a ton for pm


thank you dear...😳


thanks a lot dear😳

Originally posted by: Sasha_Yuvreen

uuhhh, its so beautiful! i loved it, do continue very soon!😃


thanks a ton.. means a lot...sure will update soon! mostly mrwww 😉
Edited by ..dreamygatz.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: namratavyas

Very beautiful yar. I hate the wait to the next part lol. i could feel every word of wat u wrote. Love ranjan..

LOL sorry for making you wait! 😃 thank you loads for ua lovely comment! means a lot!!!

Originally posted by: ...Jes...

awesome Didi 🤗
totally loved it <3 Ranjan

cont soon 🤗


🤗 jesssie 🤗
thank you dear... to be frank its ua awesome siggies that inspired me to create an OS 😉
🤗
Edited by ..dreamygatz.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wowww...its really awesome.or i shud say it was more than tht👍🏼...i cud imagine and feel the scenes...plzz do continue soon
PROUD to get a fab writer from my own place!!!!!!!!🤗😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehaarshi09

wowww...its really awesome.or i shud say it was more than tht👍🏼...i cud imagine and feel the scenes...plzz do continue soon

PROUD to get a fab writer from my own place!!!!!!!!🤗😉

thank you nehla... 🤗 am even more glad that u liked it... all the appreciation i receive from all of u.. am overwhelmed with happiness...


thank you!!! 😳
Edited by ..dreamygatz.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The following 11 member(s) liked the above post:

Anraysha, Sasha_Yuvreen, love-arhi, trisha17, iluvrainaarti, nikki.171, Arshi-, Vinder90, kheya-mayur, sparkle2985, ...Jes...,
am thrilled by the response... thank you all! it really means a lot! *jhapppi*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Hello my dearies!!!! *big wala JHAPPI*
am so much overwhelmed with the response! its your response that makes me keep going with the story!!! to all of you who liked and commented and PM-ed me thank you a tonn! it really means a lot! its an inspiration and encouragement to go ahead!!!
and with the thrilling response i am getting am bit scared of not to disappoint you people and i hope and wish to do justice to RanJan through my work!! *fingers crossed*

PART 4

His eyes glittered, it felt as if it's unreal, words were scarce to express, boundless joy plashed in him!

He hugged her!!!

It seemed as if he is the happiest person on earth!!! Flashes of gleaming happiness fluttered on him, he hugged her tightly and let himself lost in his seas of happiness!

She hugged him back!!!

She felt protected, safe and happy under those strong yet lightly held arms which had wrapped her around, a sense of joy never ever felt before and a sense of safety never before experienced!!! She knew he was always there but it was she who let herself not delve deep into her thoughts and unravel her true feelings! Had she let go my emotions today too, then she would have never known what she wanted in life or rather where her life is, she thought as she held him close to her heart.

Slowly he broke the hug and looked up the sky, his face was drowned in tears, and he looked up so as not to let her see his teary eyed face. For minutes he kept on staring up the sky motionless not looking at her and not listening to her! She too looked up and saw black dark limitless sky and then looked at him, his face seemed fixed.

"Ki hua Ranvi?" She asked, her voice was heavy filled with emotions.

He turned back not seeming to have heard her, took a few steps around and stopped abrupt and then looked at her.

Though there were no tears, his eyes were worn out and traces of tears were left!

"Ki hua Ranvi?" she asked again, this time with concern and fear.

"Gunjan yeh galat..." Ranvi started muttering but each word was breaking as he tried to complete the sentence.

But Gunjan broke in between and said "ki galat Ranvi? Yeh galat nahi sahi hai, meko pata hai tu ki sochre, tu galat uss NRI munde ke waste kehre hai na? meinu pata hai tu kisike beizati nai karna chahte par hum unhe samjaungi, galati meri hai, mein maafi maangugi.. Par yeh galat nai hai..."

As Gunjan completed she broke down in tears. She wasn't able to control her emotions! Mixed emotions ran through her. She was happy for being with Ranvi yet was upset of herself being late to understand her feelings or late in letting herself understand what she always knew. Now as Ranvi was saying its wrong she thought of her father and what would be brining on him when she backs out from her marriage, she thought of her brother who though never expressed his love she knows that loves her so much then her thoughts paused as she thought of her mother. Her eyes boiled with tears. She knew all what happened to her is because of her. She remembered each and every incident in her life when her mother insulted her, did her mother ever loved her she wondered, it all happened because of her mother, the fake face in which she hid her real self was because of her mother and today if anything happens or goes wrong because of her decision then it's her mother who is responsible for it, she thought and wiped out the tears. She felt strong and confident. She smiled at Ranvi and said to herself in mind to stay strong and be the real GUNJAN!

"Sab change hoga, chal" she said and they both walked towards her house!

~~xx~~

Back there in Gunjan's house people are rushing in after all its Sarpanchji's daughter's wedding and the whole of pind is welcomed and it looks as if a great wedding is on its way something of which Pritampura is all set to witness for the first time. All are merrily having their share of fun, eating, drinking, dancing, chattering around, etc...

Pritampura was never lighten up like this before people said among themselves.

In the midst of lively energetic people one person was worried and tensed, it was Bansuri! She was searching for Gunjan in and out, all throughout the house but all went in vain. As the time for marriage was nearing her heart was beating heavily! She was noticing the change in Gunjan from the previous day and felt it like some sort of bad omen. Who to ask for help, she didn't knew. If she calls Baldev then he would say where she could vanish after all it's her dream coming true. But then Bansuri would think on how she could make Baldev understand that it's not Gunjan's dreams but it's her dream which she had been thrusted upon Gunjan for her own benefits.

Bansuri sat in one corner eagerly waiting for Gunjan while faking around smiles at people who come in to give their wishes and blessings. Her eyes set upon the door and heart beating heavily.

~~xx~~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantabulous DreamyGatz Just loved it sssooo much.waiting for next update.Big Thanx Dear.👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
It is very nice dear...pls writee the next part...eagerly waiting fr it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
its fantastic didi.👏...do continue the next part😛

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